AITBAAR - THE TRUST ON LOVE [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all
. Its been a long time I stayed away from writing but a new emotional Idea popped in my mind so I could not help but post here to have your reviews .

I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.





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Posted: 10 years ago
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AITBAAR - THE TRUST ON LOVE

PROLOGUE:

Trust is the most valuable component in any relationship. It's easy to break but very tough to build & if it's shattered once it can never be back again. It's even difficult to revive when person losses trust on one self as after loosing self confidence it is not possible for any one to trust on any relation, a broken soul always hitches to start fresh and it's completely justified too. The remedy of all this is Love ... as only true Love can repair such deep scars inside the souls but that is not at all easy for anyone to forget everything so easily but as it is said Time & Love can heal the biggest scars in the world but for that you need to turst your Love and wipe your all insecurities so that everything comes back to normal. It is a story showing the power of Love, Trust & insecurities too & how these emotions rule our heart and also change our mindset & life too because these emotions are integral part of our life.

SNEAK PEAK :

A Lady in mid 30s sitting on a decorated bed in bridal attire and her face is covered with veil. She is quite anxious and restless.

After a minute A man in early 40S came inside the room his footsteps made her shiver a bit. He comes inside the room locking the door & sits near her and opens her veil with a smile.

Their eyes met for a brief moment and lady lowers her gaze.

Man smiles & says "Bachhe so gaye na Aisha?"

Lady nods in Yes he further continues with a smile "To jaao jaake tum bhi change kar loo aur soo jaao thak gayi hogi na"

She nods & move towards the drawer & starts removing her ornaments, suddenly in haste her earring gets struck & it started hurting her she winced a bit & man holds her arm & started to remove her earring.

She gives him a surprised look man gently pulls out the earring & hands over to her She says in a fumbling tone"Thanks Sameer" & rushes to washroom grabbing her clothes.

Sameer smiles & thinks "Tumhe abhi bhi mujhpe yakeen nahin hai ya khud kamzoor pad gayi hoo? I promise ki mera pyar sab theek kardega"

She comes out of the washroom changing and slummed on the bed closing her eyes thinking of last 20 days that changed her life completely.

DARR YEH LAGTA HAI KYA YEH SAPANA HAI

AB JO APANA HAI KAL WOH KAHA HAI

DARTA DIL POOCHE BAAR BAAR - 2

INTEZAAR ... AITBAAR...TUMSE PYAR ITNA KARU - 2

AANSU AATE THE LAUT JAATE THE

LAMHON PE LAMHEN CHATPATATE THE

PHIR BHI KIYA HAI INTEZAAR - 2

INTEZAAR ... AITBAAR...TUMSE PYAR ITNA KARU

KYA PYAR HAI KYA HAI NAHI

MAINE NAHI POOCHA NA

HO TUM MERE YAH HO NAHI

MAINE NAHI POOCHA NA

POOCHA NAHI BAAR BAAR - 2

INTEZAAR ... AITBAAR...TUMSE PYAR ITNA KARU - 2

CHHOTI RAATEN HAI KITNI BAATEN HAI

AB JO AAYE HO AB BATATE HAI

THAAMON HAMEIN AB EK BAAR - 2

INTEZAAR ... AITBAAR...TUMSE PYAR ITNA KARU...

CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

DCP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore: A tough cop full fill all his duties towards his nation & family loves his job a sweet natured person by heart duty always comes first for him brave cop & wonderful person.




Aisha Kapoor: A beauty with brains a lady with a strong mental strength. She works as a free lancer gernalist now married to Sameer.




Dr.Vivan Kapoor: Younger Brother of Aisha sweet and caring natured person. A famous surgeon by profession loves his family a lot.




Dr. Sangya Rathore: Younger Sister of Sameer a psycologist by profession and completing her Masters. She loves her family a lot specially her brother.




Pratap Dhamsingh Rathore: Father of Sameer an adorable personality he loves his family a lot extremely intelligent person a retired IG.




Padmini Rathore: Mother of Sameer a house wife and a beautiful natured lady. She takes care of the entire family and loves her children a lot.




Meera Rathod: Sweet 7 years daughter of Sameer she is apple of everyone's eye. She is cute & bubbly kid.




Maanav Kapoor: 7 year sweet cute & naughty son of Aisha he is pampered by Vivan & Aisha a lot.




Dev Kapoor: A matured Teenager of 17 years very close to Aisha treats her as his mother and calls her Choti MAA (his relation with Aisha will be seen in coming story) He is a student and lives with Vivan.



I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊


So how was it ? please give your Reviews 😊






Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1


PART 1 ---- PAGE 3
PART 2 ---- PAGE 10
PART 3 ---- PAGE 16
PART 4 ---- PAGE 20
PART 5 ---- PAGE 25
PART 6 ---- PAGE 29
PART 7 ---- PAGE 36
PART 8 ---- PAGE 42
PART 9 ---- PAGE 47
PART 10 ---- PAGE 51
PART 11 ---- PAGE 56
PART 12 ---- PAGE 62
PART 13 ---- PAGE 68
PART 14 ---- PAGE 72
PART 15 ---- PAGE 76
EPILOGUE ---- PAGE 76












Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE :

Guys I will update this FF depending upon my work & ur responses too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further or I will be shifting it to blog for my fenuine intersted readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If you guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. 🤗


Love & Regards

Your Goldie






Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Nice concept! Do continue soon!
904129 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Chalo Ji You are Back! 🥳 Awsum CS and Prolouge Goldie. Thanx fr pm, Continue Soonz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh thank u so much dear u started writing again

thank u thank u

and wonderful CS..i know...u are different so i am eagerly waiting to red further


thanks once again😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds very interesting...😊
It seems the story will be very close to my heart...the CS😉
Trust...once broken can never be regained in that form...so true...
will love to read the further parts
do continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Yay, new story by you!! Woohoo, *Dancing crazily!*😆
Beautiful prologue Di,loved it!!👏
Seems really interesting!⭐️
Characters, ahh, what to say, I just loved Meera n Maanav, they're really cute!😳 Rest of them seem nice too!😃
Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold!😃
Do continu soon
thanks for pm

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