Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed)

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tmowla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

so nice... very creative..

loved the concept

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Wonderful update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Beautiful ending...another unique and marvelous story by you. Finally Arnav found Khushi and you finished it with rain.

Thanks for the romantic update my evil😈.

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rulama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

That was a good story... Interesting!

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Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

OMGGG!!! I have got such a beautiful story as my dedication? Goodness girl.. I am so very happy.. crazily and insanely happy.. I so adore my mahi for this.. you are the best you know!!! I was like what the this is th best piece you have ever written..

And the two parts were different from the other.. one was like totally feelings and thoughts.. mainly of Khushi.. and the two had lot of past and a real painful past of Arnav.. Aww his parents seem to be too reckless.. I didn't like them a bit.. but I am glad he found a father figure in his grandfather.. okay so the crazy journalist is here.. lol.. I loved this Khushi.. so beautifully insane.. and finally they did meet.. and how! The rains did help them..

And you started the story with lack of water and ended it with a flourish of water.. oh their story is the unusual desert rain.. oh mahi you are the best girl!!!! Keep rocking!

Yours,

Delicious Biriyani $ ❤️

Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

That was simply awesome, girl. Take a bow. Although one hoped for a happy ending, one could never really be sure till the last segment. Beautiful. 👏

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smat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Brilliant

Loved reading it

Thanks for the pm

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asrcraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

It is so true that one never understands the worth of what they have until they have lost it. Not everyone gets a second chance like our ArHi here!

You have a beautiful way of describing what you actually want to convey. A relationship works both ways and involves a lot of compromise. I'm glad Khushi took the step towards him and they now have a happy ending.

You perfectly justified the title!