Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed)

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Thanks for PM.😊

It was So Lovely TS.😊

The Whole part was so Beautifully explained.😊

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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aaliya dev raichand

@rarshiaaliyak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

loved it dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,''

desert is my favorite topic...😃

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akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Hey very nice dear.

It was nice to read from Arnav POV. Don't how come a mother can be like this.

First she left her dad to be with his husband

Then she left her husband and went with her dad dragging Arnav with her.

Really his dad is one who suffered.

Then once again she had left her son and dad and went to her husband.

SeriouslY this women. Poor Arnav he was not able to get the love of mom and dad

Then Arshi meeting seriously TOOBA I can smell your taste their.

It was LOL

Can't imagine arnav wearing Kushi clothes.

Final part was awesome.

Arnav finding Kushi.

I really appreciate arnav giving water to Kushi first.

Beautiful indeed.

All the best

You have finished with rain. It was beautiful and merged with the title of the TS and arnav saying that it had rained before itself by mentioning Kushi is very beautiful

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deblina

@maitydeblina

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Hi mahi😃

The Desert rain was superv👏👏

I don't know my evil witch has a soft heart😉😆 kabse?😳🤣

Seriously when i first saw this i was so suprised😛But it was good😃 so romantic😳

Ur princess is flying high in her own dream land😆😆

Write more mahi😃

Thanks for the romantic update my evil witch😈

update soon😃

take care🤗

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Wow great story and an amazing ending

Im really going to miss reading this of your so much

Thanks for the pm

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zebali

@zebali

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

It was marvelous .
It written great.
Tf pm.

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

wow beautiful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Mind blowing update
Loved it

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Loved the 2nd part👏

thank you for the pm😃

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

The tone of the first and second part was quite different. While the first was poetic, the second had a lot of background story to it. It is truly sad to hear about Arnav's childhood. His parents did seem crazy and irresponsible towards their child. I guess marrying early made them make immature decisions. His and Khushi's relationship was as volatile... It was nice to know their story and why they had to part. Even though he was the one who felt guilty... it was her, who came to him. Finally the parched desert found its oasis, beautifying everything around. Their union was sweet and soothing like the first drops of rain after a harsh summer.

P.S.: Your reply to my comment cracked me up ya. I am no "well-established" writer. I have been a reader from much before that! I am glad I could analyze the story the way you perceived it... because I know how much it means to a writer! Keep writing and see you around! 😃

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