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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 9 years ago

#341

Wonderful update dear...!!!
It was very emotional and touchy...!!!
Everyone goes through ups and down in their lives... Itz the strength of their will to fight and keep their bond strong is what makes a relation...!!
No matter what they have gone through...Itz their love for each other and their need to be with each other that got reflected in this update...
It was about their journey which they will comense now... together...!!!!
A very crucial junction for the story...
What an amazing writing Di...
The way u have formated and expressed their emotions is truely commendable...!!!
U are a genius writer...loved it to the core...!!!
Plz continue soon...tc

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indhuza

@indhuza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#342

such a blessed writer u are jigs... :D

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#343

I'm glad that they are going to talk to save the marriage... Loved it..

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#344

such a beautiful and emotional update... the 7 vows were wonderful... loved it..

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#345

wow just wow dear...

i love it so much

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#346

ssiiighhh an emotional update

A few chapters prior to this one, how they were lovely dovey and looking forward to spend a night of passion in their hotel room which never came, instead just silence, that heartbreaking moment of Khushi's breakdown😭😭

I hope both of them can now work on their marriage

beautiful one

thanks for pm in advance xx

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#347

very nice :) waitng to know what happened after the party...but somewhere what i liked in this is they are ready to fight for their happy marraige n live happily

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 9 years ago

#348

oh my eid day is realky special now..thanks for updating...loved the chater...no doubt on that...its amazing with out even sharing a word how perfectly they underdtand each other silence...infact i was fellong they were speaking...actually they were...there heart spoke...eye spoke..mind spoke and soul spoke..and for that wotd is not necessary..beautifully described..the moment they reached home..i

was recalling the sven steps moment nd thinking will they relive it?? but actually u wrote it...it was like dill aans chuti mai mill gaaye.. wow.. looking forward to the words they are gona share...i m ready to with thm.. <3

btw i statated to read striped in the blog...loving it so far.. u r awsome jigss..