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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67

The first shoots of spring is exactly what this chapter felt of. As your befitting epigraph says, turning the page, to rejoice in the beauty lying beyond. Embracing it and allowing the sunlight peering out from behind the clouds to warm your pallid, winter ravaged skin.

You could feel the "spring in Khushi's step" as she walked towards her office. Her eagerness to rush through her day so that she can go home to her Arnav. I loved how you put it here, "connect her to him in a matter of seconds". That's just how their relationship feels now. Their happy teasing banter was so adorable. The impatience, the need, to be with the other leaping out in every word.

Lavanya and Aman are simply the best. The way they understand and support Arnav and Khushi is exemplary. It's what true friendship should always be about. An honest love, a genuine desire to want the best for your friend. And Arnav opening up with Kabir was wonderful for Khushi.

Arnav's "I miss you..." to Khushi, just hits you coming as it did straight from the heart. It resounded with the remnants of all that they had been through.

I loved the way you showed both Arnav and Khushi think again of wanting a child of their own. It's when you're happy in your own skin and in your relationship with your spouse that you can start thinking of bringing someone in your world. That tear in Arnav's eye just makes you want to weep ...

The adorable Akhil and Aakash tug at your heartstrings with their sheer cuteness. You capture their mischievousness so well. Worthy recipients of the love their Chachu and Masi shower on them!

And your mischievousness is no less! Totally giving us heart attacks with Khushi and Arnav's mock seriousness at being angry with the other when he got home. You most certainly "Gotcha" us! Waise, was the earlier rediscovering of flat surfaces around the house as interesting as this reunion ... just asking ... cause as a fully signed up member of the revealazzi I need to know ;)

But them speaking about a child of their own at the end was the most moving part for me. It was the poignancy of both of their feelings as they voiced them that touched me. The boundless love that they have to offer will never be limited only to a child borne of them. And you have shown this time and again in this story.



Oh Ruchi, what a beautiful and heart rendering comment...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
As time goes by...



Seasons change as time grows more
Decisions change as one matures more
Attitude change as love grows more
As time goes by baby, we learn more


Tolerance increases as we know more
Acceptance asserts as we feel more
Life is good as we bridge the gap more
As time goes by baby, we love more


Love grows when its shared more
Life grows when people cared more
Affection grows when the distance is more
As time goes by baby, we appreciate more


Flat surfaces are suddenly more and more
Physical love is hence proportionally more
Happiness for everyone had escalated more
As time goes by baby, we change mi amour

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello my pyaara readers 🤗


After reading through the comments the past couple of days, I have been overwhelmed with the response, in a good way, a very good way! It's heart warming to see how many of you are open to the idea of adoption for this jodi, for that I am truly touched. Please accept this heart felt thank you for supporting and trusting me... I promise to not let you all down.


Stayed tuned for the teaser that I will post tomorrow on a new dhaaga... I can't believe we are going to move to thread 8, all because of your love!


See you all tomorrow!

Loads of love ❤️
Jigs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
"That while the world perceived them rescuing a child, in reality, they were rescued by the child! "

Mirabell. :-)). Loved your whole comment, but this one line above was just perfect.. superheroes come in many forms and sizes!!
Edited by LadyR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I updated my comments on pg 131. Sorry for the delay but I'm like a walking pharmacy full of drugs to deal with my allergies :( brain not working Sorry :(
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyR

"That while the world perceived them rescuing a child, in reality, they were rescued by the child! "

Mirabell. :-)). Loved you whole comment but this one line was just perfect..superheroes come in many forms and sizes!!

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I agree in fact her whole comment moved me to tears !
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shyamidutt

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I agree in fact her whole comment moved me to tears !




I agree as well and the above line from her caught me as well. For a long time it made me pause and rethink.


Mira, excellent!!!! 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
Love it waiting for the next update

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