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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Lovely Part.😊
The way Teju confessed her feelings to Surya was so Beautiful.😊
Surya had some Past,It was so interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the late.
ohh, Now I am again back to my Surya.
Excellent update.
Loved the way Teju analysis her feelings.
I agree its impossible for any girl not to fall for Surya.
Her reactions & feelings are so natural.
U know Dhivya,there is a special kind of attraction in Surya's characters.Any reader will fall in love with Surya.
I love Surya's confusion.
I am eagarly waiting for the revelation part.
For Vikram & Vishwa😡
Vikram only want to control her, no feelings, no emotion, no space.
Loved the flashback.
So, Surya first saw Dhami in matrimonial site.
Thats interesting.A police Officer fall in love with first sight.
Lack of patience, I must say.
But dont want to predict.
Update soon Dhivya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful suspense filled story... Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 12
What the hell! What's going on! Surya's heart started racing. For a moment , he thought why he had been standing here and thought of retreating from the place. Oh! Come on surya! Where all your courage had gone? Now just watch. Gripped his mind.

She is talking to the man standing in front of her.

"sir! Calm down! I am just asking you to follow the bank rules as per the law. That's all. "

Surya sighed deeply. Hmm bold enough, he thought the same time he never failed to grasp the disgust held in her eyes.

The man made a hasty move from the place retorting " I'd speak to the manager"

"oh!that's very fine go ahead" she shrugged. The man glared at her. Surya now, marched over the man and patted his shoulders. Surya recognized the sub inspector. The man too identified surya. He was startled, gasped and clenched the fist to salute him..but before that surya squeezed the clenched fist of the man.

"sir! Why so angry? They are here to help us. Let us follow the rules..after all its our duty" he gave extra pressure while mouthing the last words. Then swallowed the lump rose in his throat. He nodded and moved away.

She then muttered under her breath

"Can't stand with those policemen, expecting allowances for everything" she gritted .

Surya chuckled. She looked up him

"what's so funny? Okay. How can I help you?" she asked.

"nothing! Let me follow the rules before I get the same reward." Said he with a suppressed grin. He returned to the queue. She twisted her lips and engrossed in her works.

He just observed her , her implementation and execution of her works were so perfect and steady. When his turn came, she looked him again.

What to say? He thought once.

Then he just turned back and walked away.

"excuse me!" her voice chased him. " what?? What do you want?"

"oh! Nothing my job is over" he said casually and stepped outside. She looked bewilderedly.

He still wanted to know her more, he wished to see her again and again. his legs moved in the direction of the office canteen.

Surya pretended to be casual. He resisted himself to portray his restlessness and at the same time he had been justifying his act of waiting for her in an random office canteen.

Okay! This does not look nice for a police officer. Let me quit. He stood from his place and sat again automatically as he saw Dhamayanti stepped inside the canteen with her colleagues. The canteen was not too big. The girls chose a place in the right corner which was not far from him. The very next second she noticed him. She frowned. She whispered something to her friend. All the three stared at him. He tried a lot to keep himself free and casual. He sipped the tea leisurely. One of her friends gave her a big sandwich, the other one looked it with a craving. Dhamayanti winked at her.

"Merlin! Could you please get us some cold drinks from the fridge" she asked the girl who gave her sandwich"

"sure" she moved aside. The next second the other friend grabbed it from her hand finished it off in seconds. Dhamayanti rapped on her head mildly and smiled " slowly idiot! " said she.

Surya felt that the smile is creating some changes , note: some pleasant changes in his mind and body which he hadn't felt before. If they name it as love let it be! He felt.

Dhamayanti often glanced at him . she seemed to be uncomfortable of his presence. Surya could comprehend it without even looking at her. He smiled once mildly and left the place casually.

He took his mobile,rang to someone" yes! Dhamayanti! Assistant Manager in central bank. Ya.. collect all details about her family. I need to talk to her parents" commanded surya. He turned once again and glanced the building with a smile. A very rare smile that shone in his face so beautifully.

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Isn't it that too early? There is a limit for going crazy on a girl. Its hardly one day! So stop this nonsense okay!! Surya spoke to himself gazing at her photo. At first he had been definitely attracted by her. Yes that attraction had pulled him to her and had chased him to meet her at once. Her plain and straight forward nature attracted him more. Now, when he heard that she had lost her parents in an accident and she had been taking care of her younger sister he started developing a respect towards her. He admired her courage and boldness. Who else could be a perfect match for a man in hardware job! He chuckled.

He dialed her number with a lot of hesitations. Finally !

RINGING! Thud! Thud! Thud! His heart was palpitating.

"hello" heard her sweet voice.

His tongue was stuck to his palates.

"hello! Who is this? Can you hear me"

He cleared his throat once.

"hello ya who is this" she asked again.

"hello! Suryaprakash here" said he

"who???"

"you know me and I know you. You met me today. "

There was a silence in the opposite side. That seemed to be too heavy for him.

"oh! Ya..that tall man? Whom I saw in my office today. am I right?" she questioned.

Surya grinned. yes"

"how did you know my number" her voice seemed to be harsh

"it is not that tough to find out your number. I need to talk to you. Could you please meet me tomorrow in the coffee shop near by your office?"

"why?? Why should I? who are you"?

" please! Just five minutes. I will tell you everything in detail. Don't worry !i won't take much time"

Again the silence!

"ok" she said finally.

Surya grinned widely.

"what's that bhaiya"

Tanu rushed to him.

"wow! See who is laughing? My brother? What's the matter"? she exclaimed.

He pulled her cheeks

"just wait! I may give you a good news tomorrow"

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! Sweet and cute update! Awww!!! Love this bashful Surya! Dhamayanti is too good! Waiting for the next update. 😳 👏 👏
Edited by KURT15 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
The last two updates were so interesting! Can't wait to see Surya-Teju's love blossom as they together solve this mystery!
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Surya-Dhamayanthi's first meeting was very cute! Loved the awkwardness! 😆
Edited by Radhikerani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
Surya Part was so interesting.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohh, awesome update Dhivya.
Loved the flashback.
Its a cute update.
From the first update, Surya's character is super interesting.
A tough police Officer, but he has a heart & he listen to it also.
nice one.well written.
waiting for the next.

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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all sorry for being so late in reading ur FF...but I read all the chappies at one go where I left.
Those were wonderful chapters esp how you portrayed the blend of emotions among the principle characters...& Surya & Teju 😳...well they are developing soft corner for each other 😳...but Dhami's case is getting tangled day-by-day😕. I am suspecting some foul-play with that Dr. Narayan & his son...what happened that they, including her colleagues are calling Dhami with names...kuch to locha hai ...& Vikram what is his plan..that he is saying that Teju will be under his influence again 😲

Very nicely executed chapters and the story is going with a good flow intriguing one to read more n more.
Well done Dhivii 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much my readers . i am glad that u all liked my work. 🤗
hemu..finally u r here..happy to see u darling🤗
Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 9 years ago

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