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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: LaZyLaDy

Awesome concept Titli
Very realistic
Feeling bad for madhu
Sultan 🤢
RK believes his brother over madhu but am not shocked.etai hoi normally,nijer wife r thke family ke besi trust kre loke
Waiting for the next part

thnx for understanding.. Both of them have flaws. Their characters are like us..
thanks for comment dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
RK claims to love Madhu and thinks he has given everything to her but the main thing he has failed to give her is Trust... she is also his family, gave him a daughter and his duty is to listen to her also and try to find out the truth...
Poor Madhu she is going through so much... y is that everyone has to think their friendship in different way... hope RK will get something which proves her innocence but the way he hurt her i dont think Madhu will forgive him...
Very nice... loved it very much... thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ooops I am so late in commenting 😆😆... First of all Congo for your new story 🥳🥳


🤣🤣🤣 Bravo that Finally Madz could utter ONE FULL SENTENCE without any pause and disturbance created by RK 🤣🤣


I am feeling so bad for Madz as a woman , as a wife as well as a mother . As a wife bcz her husband dint trust her enough . Agreed that we trust our family more than anyone else but atleast RK could have tried to investigate the matter himself or he could have atleast for once trusted his wife just like hitting an arrow in a dark to see who was right and who was wrong among Sullu & Madz .

As a mother bcz no child is complete without both the parents . She couldn't even glance ONCE at her daughter being a mother who has endured 9 months pain and has taken that effort to bring this child in the world .

As a wife bcz her husband couldn't trust her enough . AND how can RK be so dumb that he really din't trusted his wife who was carrying HIS symbol of love in her belly for whatever those months are??? If she wanted to have illegitimate relationships with any Tom , Dick or Harry then why the F will she take so much of efforts of going through those preggo phase ?? Atleast this much of sense RK could have used even if he was so blinded by love . Atleast he could have been 1% practical to analyse the situation if not 99% . And even if he was getting jealous of Mukku-Madz friendship thinking it to be more than friendship and getting blind in his rage of seeing his wife as his LOVE still he could have waited to know the truth ...

As a woman bcz it sets out that notions that womens always go for illegitimate relationships and that no woman can be trustworthy .. 🥱



Don't even get started for Sullu . I don't use cuss words so I am not gonna say anything for that beast 🥱 Bcz in reality a wife or a normal can get raped or molested by anyone from their relatives to families ...


I hope RK's redemption is tough and so is Sullu's punishment bcz they both are wrong in their own way ... Finally somewhere I found Mukku as a good character 🤣🤣🤣 Bcz usually writers portray him as an evil character 🤣🤣🤣


A very senti and emotional chappy from Madz's POV . You have portrayed the emotional part so damn well 👏👏👏 Kudos to you babes for this ...

Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Thanks for the PM...

Loved the story plot...hope its a happy ending......hope Rishbala unite...

feeling sorry for Madhu...😭...and angry on RK...😡...hope he gets true picture soon...😡

Plsss continue soon.....
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Interesting concept loved it.👏

Thnx for the PM

ArshiHamesha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Urghhh this dirty sultan making now madhu suffer!! Rk y don't u open ur eyes and see people. Superb superb update! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
read the prologues and part 1... great start...
RK and Madhu have misunderstanding between them -- because of sultan... sue to which rk wudnt let her meet her daughter too... 😭
but bout her in-laws - obviously they would have believed their son over their daughter in law...
waiting to read more - plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Interesting story.. Please PM me when u update. Tx!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: ashitha235

RK claims to love Madhu and thinks he has given everything to her but the main thing he has failed to give her is Trust... she is also his family, gave him a daughter and his duty is to listen to her also and try to find out the truth...

Poor Madhu she is going through so much... y is that everyone has to think their friendship in different way... hope RK will get something which proves her innocence but the way he hurt her i dont think Madhu will forgive him...
Very nice... loved it very much... thanks for the pm😊

our society is patriarchal n it's very easy to defame or accuse a girl here.. If a woman get raped or molested people tries to find her dresses, whether it was misleading or revealing whether she was giving wrong signal..or she was behaving in a sl***y way. Even if knowing she has nothing to do it's concluded that she, directly or indirectly, is the reason of her misfortune! thanks for taking out time to read my story. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BurnThemAll

Ooops I am so late in commenting 😆😆... First of all Congo for your new story 🥳🥳


🤣🤣🤣 Bravo that Finally Madz could utter ONE FULL SENTENCE without any pause and disturbance created by RK 🤣🤣


I am feeling so bad for Madz as a woman , as a wife as well as a mother . As a wife bcz her husband dint trust her enough . Agreed that we trust our family more than anyone else but atleast RK could have tried to investigate the matter himself or he could have atleast for once trusted his wife just like hitting an arrow in a dark to see who was right and who was wrong among Sullu & Madz .

As a mother bcz no child is complete without both the parents . She couldn't even glance ONCE at her daughter being a mother who has endured 9 months pain and has taken that effort to bring this child in the world .

As a wife bcz her husband couldn't trust her enough . AND how can RK be so dumb that he really din't trusted his wife who was carrying HIS symbol of love in her belly for whatever those months are??? If she wanted to have illegitimate relationships with any Tom , Dick or Harry then why the F will she take so much of efforts of going through those preggo phase ?? Atleast this much of sense RK could have used even if he was so blinded by love . Atleast he could have been 1% practical to analyse the situation if not 99% . And even if he was getting jealous of Mukku-Madz friendship thinking it to be more than friendship and getting blind in his rage of seeing his wife as his LOVE still he could have waited to know the truth ...

As a woman bcz it sets out that notions that womens always go for illegitimate relationships and that no woman can be trustworthy .. 🥱



Don't even get started for Sullu . I don't use cuss words so I am not gonna say anything for that beast 🥱 Bcz in reality a wife or a normal can get raped or molested by anyone from their relatives to families ...


I hope RK's redemption is tough and so is Sullu's punishment bcz they both are wrong in their own way ... Finally somewhere I found Mukku as a good character 🤣🤣🤣 Bcz usually writers portray him as an evil character 🤣🤣🤣


A very senti and emotional chappy from Madz's POV . You have portrayed the emotional part so damn well 👏👏👏 Kudos to you babes for this ...

Thanks for this long analysis! U went deep down and said everything perfectly.. 👍🏼 I don't want to show Madhu as a vulnerable helpless woman. She will fight against all odds and will bring back every thing that is hers..including Anisha. She has already won the case against sullu & send him behind bars. In next parts I will show glimpse of past.. How RK has been brainwashed by his parent and brother. His character isn't of an ideal husband here. Yes, he should have trusted Madhu over every damn thing and this is the only mistake he has done. But he loves her..he really does. Here, love is tainted with infidelity & ego-clashes.
About sullu..what to say 🤬 Sick minded people like him can be found @ every corner of this society. One might thing I am disrespecting devar-Bhabi relationship but it is not that.. I'm trying to show a woman can face physical and sexual assault anywhere..sometimes our very own family members turn into beast.
I never have portrayed mukku as a good character..bro or friend anything. So yeah its new to me too 😆 I will do full justify with him and yeah he secretly loves Madhu too 😳 but his love is pure and he won't try to woo her knowing what her heart wants.
Edited by ..BlackSwan.. - 9 years ago

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