~**DON**~SK,AK&KA fanfic[part 10: pg 15] - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx to all of my FF reader's and i hope you all enjoy reading my FF...😃

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i just love ur FF ishq ki kasam and life a lot...u are a fab writer and have inspired me in a way...

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thanx for liking my ff and i rmbr u too wrote a ff which i loved a lot too..but u stopped after that...hope to read ur works again...do start writing again...

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nice name... and i love the fact that u love my FF...hope to u enjoy it more in the future...ill try to make it as interesting and to all of ur expectations...

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ur FF love, friendship etc etc...roks i wish to see a lil more of sujal and adi in it...and thanx for ur comments...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue soon please me waiting.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'll try my level best to cont todae...prolly if i am able to you can read the next part by tonite...hope you all understand...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OUTSIDE THE AIRPORT: MALAYASIA

Three cars stood before them…one was a red Ferrari F50 owned by Angad, another was a blue Mazda MX-5 roadster coupe owned by Anju and the last was a grey Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 owned by Kashish…(all a two sitter cars and a racing cars…the pictures are below…)

FERRARI(ANGAD"S)

MAZDA(ANJU"S)

LAMBORGHINI(KASHISH'S)

So all got sitted into their respective cars, with their bags in the back of the car(forgot what it is called)…Kavya sat in Anju's car while Krips sat in Angad's and our dear SK sat together…kripa was simply awed by Angad's car and Angad by her…(😆)they all started their engines and let it warm up since the journey was long they did not want any breakdown…and soon they were off on their journey…

Okay now let's focus into Anju's car for awhile…there was complete silence for awhile until Kavya decided to break the ice…so let's hear their convo…

K: Nice car…

A: thanks (in a cold manner)...

K: how long have you been in the police thing??(He tried striking another convo with her)

A: tumko yeh jaan kar kya karna hai? Mere interview lena hai kya😡... (She replied sarcastically)

K: main to bas aise hi phooch raha tha…is mein itna gussa hone wali kay baat hai (he too replied in an angry tone)

A: pata hai mujhe…tum jaise larkon ko larki akeli mil jati hai to tum log unke saath "act fresh" karte ho…

K: mujhe apmein koi dilchaspi nahin hai aap jaisi karkiyon ko toh mein dekhta hi nahin hoon…vo toh mein bore ho raha tha isiliye baat karna chahta tha…

A: itna hi bore ho rahe ho toh radio khol dete…I just know you type of guys bloody Casanovas…

K: whatever… baat karna toh dur ab toh mein app ki taraf dekhunga bhi nahin…saying this he looked outside the car window…

A: WHATEVER!!!(And she concentrated on her driving)

Now let's look at Angad Kripa car again…

K: toh aap ko racing ka shok hai kya??

A: kuch khaas nahin bas kabhi kabar Anju aur Kash ke saath race laga leta hoon…

K: mujhe bhi racing ka bohot shok hai…lekin mere paas aap ke jaisi mahengi imported car nahin hai na…she said with a sigh…

A: NVM…ab tum yahan agayi ho toh meri car se racing kar lena…main tumhe sikha dunga…

K: OMG..thank you so much…meri wish finally puri ho jayegi…waise kya aap radio on kar sakte hain??

A: off course and he switched on the radio…they were playing everytime we touch by cascada…

I still hear your voice, when you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch in my dreams.
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
without you it's hard to survive.

'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling.
And every time we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause every time we touch, I feel this static.
And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

Your arms are my castle; your heart is my sky.
They wipe away tears that I cry.
The good and the bad times, we've been through them all.
You make me rise when I fall.

'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling.
And every time we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause every time we touch, I feel this static.
And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling.
And every time we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.

K: it is such a nice song…one of my favourites…

A: mine too…lagta hai humare pasand na pasand bohot milti julti hain….

And both started laughing on all the coincidences…

Let's shift to our very own SK….

Since they are serious people their boring talk on the case was going on…let's hear…

S: So is there any clue on the whereabouts of don??

K: Not yet…as they always escape before we raid the place…we don't even know how he looks like…but our secret informer there has informed us that don is had a dealing yesterday at…Petronas tower but we decided not to raid as he is too cunning and we thought since you people are coming, we can decide on how and when to catch him…

S: Don't worry we will surely find a way to get hold of him…something tells me its going to be really interesting…

K: anyways enough of work lets hear some songs, shall we?

S: sure, why not?

So kashish also turns on the radio and the song…tere bin was playing… (One of my fav songs…)…tere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere bintere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere binlekar yaad teri raaten meri kati - 2mujhse baaten teri karti hai chaandanitanha hai tujh bin raaten meri din mere din ke jaise nahitanha badan tanha hai ruh nam meri aankhen raheaaja mere ab rubarujeena nahi bin teretere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere bintere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere binkabse aankhen meri raah mein tere bichhi - 2bhule se hi kahi tu mil jaaye kabhibhule na mujhse baaten teribheegi hai har pal aankhen merikyun saans loon kyun main jiyujeena bura sa lagekyun ho gaya tu bewafaaa mujhko bata de wajahtere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere bin ...tere bin main yun kaise jiyakaise jiya tere bin ...

As the song ended all of them arrived at the guest house to drop the people…

Angad did the honors of transferring their luggage into their respective rooms and Kashish showed them around while Anju instructed the servants on the guests like if they are vegetarian or not and blah blah blah…soon they bid goodbye and left them to rest…

Kashish: Ok so we will come and pick you tomorrow to discuss about the case and then show you around KL…at about 8 in the morning…Good night see you tomorrow!

And she drove of in her Lamborghini…Anju just said Bye to sujal and kripa and left giving a disgusting look to kavya and kavya in return did the same…And as for the next Romeo in the making Mr. Angad he was constantly stealing glances at kripa and said a short and sweet goodbye to all and left too…the threesome then left for their respective rooms to take their well deserved rest…

This part is dedicated to anusha (school mate AKA chandini1234)...and to all the others who read this FF like ahlam, bhumi, rach, aliya, kriti and sun_423 (too many names and very little time to list so sorry if I forget any ones name.… That's all for today will post another part ASAP…don't mind the errors in spelling or grammer things did not have time to check…and I know that this part is kind of boring and the worst that I can write…but the next part will be interesting…so just read on…

Love

Tanasha 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very goodddd part...me enjoying it toooo much.... totally superb....amazing..awesome.....outstanding.. fantastic..... super coolllllllllllllllllll..................parexcellence...marv ellous........... 👏
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please post the next part soon..me waiting eagerly for it... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful part.......... cont soon! 👏

<3 Anusha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The next morning…

It was around 6…the sun had not risen it as still dark outside…the alarm clock in kripa's hand phone had went off…a sleepy kripa punched the snooze button on the phone and went to sleep a little more…she then decided to wake up and get ready as she knew very well that sujal and kavya would not have woken up yet…she went into the bathroom and took a long refreshing bath and got changed into a pink top with the words fight like a girl written in white on it…and a dark blue jeans and a denim jacket from Hollister…

She pulled her hair back in a ponytail and put on some light make up…she was looking extremely fabulous…she then packed some essential things into a Nike sports bag and then wore a new balance sports shoes which was grey, dark grey and dark yellow…she was all set to go but it was still early only 0645… so she went into the kitchen to make breakfast…as she walked out she saw the servant, Maria, sweeping the floor and greeted her(P.S the servants are only there to sweep the floor and maintain the house and all not to cook…)…she entered the kitchen and opened the fridge to look through and found eggs, orange juice, hash browns, hotdogs, and in one of the drawers she found pancake mix…and she started to prepare breakfast…

Now leaving kripa to cook lest look into sujal's room…he was bright and awake and was wearing his sports shoes to go for a quick jog…he was wearing a black singlet with a black adidas jacket and track pants wore a wrist band on his right wrist and a watch on his left and left to take a quick jog in the park near by…off course looking dashing as ever…meanwhile the flirt kavya was still sleeping soundly without even noticing his alarm clock ringing continuously…(he is such a heavy sleeper that even if a earthquake strikes he wont get up….haha…)kripa had laid out the table with a jug of juice a plate of pancakes, bread and butter and omelets…and proceeded to wake Mr. sleepy head up…looking at how soundly he was sleeping and his alarm clock ringing so loud she thought to herself that how can someone sleep like that…and shook her head and went to wake him up…she tried her best but to no avail…and then an idea struck her…she poured the jug of cold water onto him and instantly got the results…a shocked kavya woke up and stared angrily at the laughing kripa…

Ka: tumhe to mein dekhta hoon… (Saying this he started running behind her)

Kr: pehle pakar to lo… (She said while laughing and running in front of him…)

He finally caught up with her and pinned her down onto the floor and started ticking her until she apologized… he then got up and went to his room to get ready…he came out after 20 minutes looking mind blowing in a white singlet with a black jeans and a brown jacket…

Soon sujal also entered looking sweaty…and left to take a shower and get ready…he came out in also about 20 minutes…looking killer…he wore a black singlet with a khaki pants and a jacket of the same type…he was wearing a omega watch on his left fist as usual…all sat together having breakfast and talking about so far how they feel about Malaysia and the three cops…for kripa she thought angad was a sweet, kind and helpful person…she could not say anything about the other two as she did not really spent as much time with them as she did with angad…sujal said that its kind of early to decide what type of person they are…(remember he is the serious types so he is kind of hard to convince…) and for kavya his answer was quite amusing… "voh anjali itne gusse wali, nakchari aur kharoos hai…usse dekhna toh dur main uske bare mein sochna bhi nahin chahta…kya yaar subah subah mood kharab karva dia uski yaad dilake…anyways angad ke bare mein main kripa se sehamt hoon at least anjali ki tarah to nahin hai na…aur kashish..voh toh hot dikhti hi hai…hopefully anjali ki tarah na nikal jaye…"

Listening to his comments kripa burst into laughter…"acha hua ki tumhe anjali jaisi larki mili jo tumhe sabk sikha sake…har larki ke saath flirt karte rehte ho na ab dekhna kaisi halt hogi tumhare…"

"tum to bas hi karo hard um mera mazak urane ka moka dhundti rehti ho…hun!!!" said a frustrated kavya…

"Lekin kavya is baar kripa bilkul thik keh rahi hai…" nad evne sujal started laughing…

"Hasso hasso aur hasso ek din tumhara bhi aisa hi haal hoga tab janoge" said kavya

"Mein flirt karunga toh na…" said sujal, "teri tarah mien flirt karta nahin hoon"…

"WHATEVER!!!" said kavya…

By then they had eaten their breakfast…kripa with the help of Maria cleared the table and sujal went back to his room to take some necessary things and kavya went outside into the garden area to look around…it was around 0745 then…

Soon in about 10 minutes three cars zoomed in and there came out the trio in casual wear…kashish was wearing a denim mini skirt with a black racer-back and a denim jacket, anjali wore white tank top with blue three-quarters jeans and Hollister jacket…while angad wore a shirt which was light pink and a black jeans…looking mind blowing… all were wearing Oakley shades looking stunning as ever…the other three came out as soon as they heard them pulling into the porch outside…kripa quickly sat into angad's car…leaving the two boys with the choice of kashish's car and anju's car…

"kavya mujhe kashish se kuch impt cheezein discuss karni hain to tum jakar anjali ke car mein beth jao…" saying this sujal quickly rushed and sat in the Lamborghini…leaving kavya with no choice but to sit in anjali's convertible…since the police HQ was close to the guesthouse, they wear in the HQ in mere 10 minutes…

That's it for today will try to post another part soon…and do comment…as the more comments I get the more ill continue…I must have at least 5 before I continue…enjoy this part

Love

Tanasha

PREVIEW: more on Don and love is in the air for someone….

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Posted: 18 years ago
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do comment will be waiting for them... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tooo gooddddddddddd...very nice.... goingg too toooooooo tooooooooooooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
intresting.. me liking it very much... 👏
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please continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part
it was fun 2 see anju talking 2 kavya... she really showed him his place.
dont mind but plz dont write in light blue as it is not readable (just a suggestion)
continue soon

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