Arshi FF(Complete): LikeNeverBefore(1)#5 - Last ch+Note Pg52(30.06.15)

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cute_kavi

@cute_kavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanx for the pm

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Too emotional but loved it

W8ng 2 full family 2gether

Cont soon

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

wow...!!!! i am speechless..there is so much emotion and you write it so efficiently...
superb update...

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sweety421

Lucky u guys are... getting first place...first page... look at meh... urrggghh... way far I m...
Tips plzzz...lol

Keep stalking 😆😆

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Can I just cry over this update my dear?!

I mean it was one hell of a emotional roller coaster...

Finally arnav could let out all his pain in front of Khushi..

No wonder he is more contended and happy after he let all out.

I'm soo happy Khushi was with him through and through

And helping him walk towards a happy life and giving him and loving him with all she has...

Now I'm eagerly waiting for the kids to move in with them and see how they all gel as a family..

And also not to forget the one month wedding gift both have planned for themselves...

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Arnav's brutal past is finally here... Gosh, Eventhough he went through so much... He has turned out to be such an amazing man only because of akki and akhilesh's love. It was so hard to read ... I can not imagine how hard it must be for you to write.

Riva and Ryan are so cute. Arnav's words to the kids were so genuine. I am sure they will agree to live with arnav and khushi. Oh, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

You have beautifully written this chapter. Please update the next one super soon :-).

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Varsha Sudhakar

@Varsh93

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Awesome update... Superbly written... Please continue soon...

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Res:)

Unres

First of all, sorry for late commenting, AD is still hectic yaar n m trying to balance both my work n IF :) I am feeling very bad that i cant comment much on this mahaupdate of yours:( this is a mahaupdate for me as i was waiting for it to disclose arnav's childhood !! this update touched me so deeply that i cant imagine one can bear so much pain n still turned out to be such a good man!! I salute your writing candy the way you describe his childhood story in his own words left me speechless!! I loved it the way you carved each and every word, arnav's miseries, his aloneness, his pain !! Arshi are each other support and only they both can help each other to come out of the shackles of their past:) its the time when khushi has to play the role !! I have a fair idea about khushi reaction towards arnav'step sister n brother adoption issue:) love the convo where arnav n khushi both interact with duo..!! I hope things will take a good turn :)

Loved it so much in emotional ground specially:) love you candy !!

Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago