Arshi FF(Complete): LikeNeverBefore(1)#5 - Last ch+Note Pg52(30.06.15)

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Thread 5?!


Are you freaking kidding me?!





Guys, its only and only coz of you. Thankyou so very much. Muah!

Oh, by the way, Arnav wants to say something to you guys.










Now, coming to your comments,


@B.S.I_Love_You An angry Arnav? Oh yeah for sure. A lot is in store Didu. You'l might just love him. Keep waiting. True, as you say, everything does happen for a reason *sigh* but sometimes, you know, I wish I knew that reason yaar. Hmm.. Not quite sure, but lets see what we can do with the pics. *love*

@Dhrenu Oh baby, thankyou so much, but please don't cry yaar. Oh yes, I have heard of a woman who went to such lengths, so, yeah, it is possible for people to be so inhuman. Atleast Garima here is trying to make amendments, which I am afraid, the woman whom I'v heard about is not doing. You know, its true that, when you really are attached too much to someone, you surely would have a gut instinct kicking you. I do. Oh I hate it too, but and then that's Arnav and that's Khushi. I seriously feel it is Akhilesh who has the ultimate loss by the EOD, I agree with you upon this. Ohhh... Thankyou so very much, hun. I love ya back, to the core! :) Keep supporting as you always have, hun. *tight hugs & loads of love. Muah*

@tanu_15 Garima, is in a way repenting and trying to change the fate that she instilled upon Khushboo, the same one Khushi is being shoved into. She went to Akhilesh for help, hun. And they made ArShi possible. :)

@arnshi

jane wale chale jate han peeche rehne walon ka gham bohat bara hota hai...

Astounding and aptly said, hun.

@ranogill, @lalarukh, @saakhi01, @thiyamappy @mahrusweety, @jashu08, @pinkly Thankyou for the wonderful words, huns. Am glad you liked the update.

@AmritalIPKKND And I cant wait to see and read what you think of LNB.

@YaSha0512 Loved your comment, hun. Yeah it kind of is upsetting to see Arnav feeling underserving and snatcher kinds, but, that is what a battered and adopted soul as he would immediately land upon. Loved your take, and yes, PMs will keep coming.

@sher_lock, @...Shrisha..., @Afr.in, @.HPCraZe., @rainyday3000, @..Anita.., @shalbi, @Fatima1422. @navjot7 Welcome aboard, huns. Thank you for the warm words. Would love to see you guys ahead as well.

@kshubhangi That, we'l have to wait and see, dear! :)

@asha_mehta *blush* thank you, baby. My my, your 3 week thing in Arnav's words, in the update below, hun.

The last straw of Akhilesh control is drawn when he sees khushi's burn scars. It reminds him of the many pains his khushboo would have gone through and his failure in protecting both his love and his daughter.


exactly! So damn perfect. That's is exactly what that ate and broke him. Love ya for the constant suppoert, hun. Hope I'l keep entertaining you. *love*

@anamnoor, @angelshah I do too. But that's life, huns. It has its own path and flow.
@kavyanjali08 Ah, my personal boost.

but this made me if he hates hospital so much, what would he do when khushi gets labour which would happen someday in future



You caught it, dint u? Oh my, that's gonna b a huge story, hun. Let the story reach that point and you'l see yourself. I abso-freaking-lutely loved your take on the whole Akhilesh-Khushboo-Garima sequence. Perfect, hun. Yes it was her obsession and hatred that led to this massacre. And coming to Khushboo's POV, I'm afraid I'l have to disappoint you there, hun. Khushboo dint want Khushi to know anything about her. Not a single thing. Chowlie! *hugs*


@MDTharun

I personally feel women who work as sex workers or forced into it are pure souls . Khushi should be proud of her mother


Totally! Every coin has 2 sides, hun. Not every married woman is a pure soul, not every prostitute is a wretched one. Its fate and circumstances, sometimes need and desperation, that'd lead them shove them and bruise them. If we are living safe, it is because we are lucky and blessed enough. Bas. *hugs*

@sweety421 Trust me hun, that was a tough update to write as well. Thank you so much for the warm words, buddy.

@shijuka I'm glad you liked the part you have been waiting for. Coming to Khushboo, I'm gonna have to disappoint you, hun. Khushboo's dead. And yes, the siblings are gonna join. I hope I'l be able to live upto the expectations.


@hararnav I do wish too, but may be sometime soon? Coming to the scars, nope hun, she's been in Arnav's T-shirts, long enough to cover her scars. Sometimes, obsession and jealousy pair up into a deadly combination of loath that leads to massacre.

@tuli_jayee

But, I think, there was more to it, which is known only to Payal & Garima. As once, Garima said, she is going to take this secret to her grave.


True, but that would remain under wraps for the rest of the characters. A teeny weeny bit of Garima will be coming up when it'l come up.

@sk2405

His presence in their life is like a stream of water to a wanderer in Oasis, especially now when they are taking baby steps in building something they can call their 'HOME'.



Exactly. Akhilesh for Arnav and Khushi is a father one always wanted to have and a father one never had.

Despite having died an unjust and a crushed death, Khushboo's fragrance will continue to waft in the air in the form of Khushi.


You are on my matching frequency, hun. Your words in Arnav's, in the update below. And juryji, love ya!

@drunkiiebabe Loved you comment hun. Thankyou so much for the constant support. Regarding your question, lets see in the upcoming updates, hun. *love*

@ina_saahil One go? That's one heck of a job. Thank you, hun. Loved your take hun. Regarding Arnav not opening up, well, its age old scars and sure does take time, and for sure more than just 3 weeks. Oh yeah, your wish shall come true but gonna take time as well, buddy.

@Sh0Nali Oh my dear late latiff Sissy, No problem yaar. I love you anyway.

Love the way khushi understanding his every breath, heart beat, his each moment and silently giving assurance.


Loved that part. And loved your take on every scene and emotion. Damn loved the lammmbiii comment. Beautiful!


@dumas Thank you, hun. Oh, sure take your time, will wait.

@khareshelly Ohh baby, thank you so much and yaar, please don't cry. I so damn loved your comment, hun. Really, thank you so much. Coming to wish list, Wish 1: Not exactly the same as you wanted, but yeah, somehow they are gonna come true. Ish2: Wow! I dint think of it. Let me tell Arnav regarding it and see what he thinks. ;) No hun, I'm not gonna let go of the interview. All in the right time. Its heartwarming to know you remember it. Ohh, my writing index in in my signature hun. There's a link. *love*

@prekshu12 Thank you so very much, dear. Aww, baby, loads of love and hugs back to you! *muah*

@madhu1210 Jesus Christ! Wow dear woman, you seriously wrote such lengthy comments for every chappy you missed? I..I don't know, I am over-whelmed! I just want to say that, you are one of the earliest readers Iv ever had. And surely one of the very less dearies who are will me to this day, all along. Thank you so very much, Madhu. This really, really means a lot. Loads of love & hugs! *Muah*

@Mushfika Here comes my Hitler Lady.

Abeh OH! just because i vanished doesn't mean you would too! Me being the loyal reader didn't miss a single chapter of yours... no matter how much of internet issues i had, I made sure to come to IF and read LNB... haven't commented yet because it requires time and i don't wanna just drop a short comment... LNB doesn't deserve that OKAY"?! now be a good girl and get your bumm here and UPDATE DAMMIT! I'm dying here! JUST UPDATE MAN! UPDATE!

Not done yet, many do follow!

Don't you feel like we poor souls need some justice here? I mean, do you have any idea what you're doing to us and what you have left us to? Don't test my patience candy...


No one ever ever said even a word of the above. Kyun darathe ho yaar?! *pout* meri kya galthi? Office work hain, jaana pada ek poora hafthe ko. Mumma, this girl is gonna kill me someday. And just look at you teaming with the other innocent bachis and turning them to chudails as well. Dangerous kahiki! Chalo, le lo apna update. P.S: Missed ya hun! P.P.S: Hope you like the surprise update. Trust me, u r 1 of d reasons I updated it earlier! U better like the update!!

@rk2127 Oh yeah, hun, it sure was one heck of an update to write.

And her marks became just the crack in the dam for a Akhilesh to burst out all of it from pilling it inside.


So true! It indeed is unjust, but that's what life is. A bit of this and a bit of that. *Hugs*


@chinnulu Baby, your comment just.. You.. Thank you yaar. I am utterly over-whelmed, I swear. Such detailed description and take on every character? I..It was like going through all of LNB once again.

It is like u bought two battered people who faced a lot during their childhood together to live their real lives with getting love from each other and making them believe that there is another person in their life atleast from now and will always be.


You'v hit bull's eyes. Yes, that's the zest and backdrop of LNB. Thank you for coming and sharing your wonderful words with me. It is absolutely over-whelming. And yes, I'd love to see you in my other works and this one, further as well. *hugs* Oh, and welcome, aboard!

@Itsflora Well, hello there, dear. Welcom aboard. Aww, thank you, hun. 3 days on a mission? That..thats too nice of you, dear. Thankyou. *laughs* am glad I could make you glad with the twilight touch. Would love to see you further. *hugs*




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Now, for the update,

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 10 years ago
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Congratulations for the new dori..



Welcome back Candy 🤗 Aa gayi tum
My LNB update is here.. .. wil chit chat with you late.. 🤣
*Runs to read the updates*


PART A


I loved the start of the update itself.!! Arshi can understand eachother's silence so perfectly... even if thre is no Eye contact.. Even thre touch speaks.. How beautiful is tht!!
I guess its called the language of LOVE!! 😳 *Wonders if this amount of deep love wali feelings is possible in Asli Duniya*



This "Live, to make her live." .. speaks volumes!! loved everything that Arnav said... Inspite of all that Khushboo had to go thru.. she made sure that her Daughter was away and safer ..even if she was away from her.. Only a loving Mother can have this courage to do this for the better of her child's future..!!



Its Heart touching to see Akhilesh nd Khushi..bond so well.. As Father & Daughter!! They have started living now..Keeping Khushboo alive..! The whole para were Arnav is thinking abut Them is beautifully written..perfect words!! Omg.. he was also thinking about THAT MOMENT ☺️ What are the arrangements being made Arnav ji?? ☺️


Hope Riva is fine.. nd i am sure when Khushi comes to.know..she can nd will feed her loads!! Our Arnav is a wonderful person.. Our Majestic Tree.. knows how to take care nd keep thm safe under his shadow! 😳


PART B

Thre again Khushi knew that something is wrong with Arnav ..by just a look at him..!!! I love thre Bond.! It is something out of this world..i don't know if it is possible in real world too..may be yes were True look exists ..

What Arnav is doing..or has done..or will be doing in future for Riva & Ryan his "Siblings" is also something very rare..it takes a Gem of a Heart to do that..& that is what our Arnav is.

I am scared about Riva & Ryan reactions..we know Khushi is gonna accept tham wholeheartedly.. Is it going to be that easy to gain thre trust..

Candy you havnt let Arnav & the kids meet yet..have you done it purposely..?? I hope thres is no strom that again affects Arnav & Khushi's life..They have just started living

PART C
What the hell did I just read...1st moments of " those" moments..
I am sure they are gonna be explosive...they will surely break furniture.. 🤣
Ye to aacha hai ke Arnav Singh Raizada earns a Crore in an Hour..😎
But may be they can try the terrace..ya fir poolside kab kaam aayega..!!!☺️
P.S: Thank you candyy..i know inspite of the busy schedule of yours you have given us a beautiful & long update..Thankswa🤗
Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread 👏
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Congrats on new thread candy...🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
here i am..!!!!!!!
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nyc... congrats on new thread
Edited by ritzsubu1204 - 10 years ago
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A NUMBER OF CHAPTERS IS YET TO BE READ FROM THE PREVIOUS THREAD..
I M SO SORRY ,CANDY...
😳
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Congrats on new thread...
N res for comment
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Awesome update
Loved it so much

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