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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
omg
tumne kuttu sawami ko ghusa diya apne ff me ab yeh kabir h ya rajveer

hahaha... its too funny


puja u r too gud man kya timing h superb


love naina
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: meenuraj97

omg
tumne kuttu sawami ko ghusa diya apne ff me ab yeh kabir h ya rajveer

hahaha... its too funny


puja u r too gud man kya timing h superb


love naina


Hai to rajveer hi... but thee charctr is needed here..so i thought..any ways...thnkq...
Lov gg
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
OH GOD!!
😆😆😆
I was so surprised when I read the Bhadresh Kutty- part!
Reporters ka Kabir... hahaha..
But I wonder why he is dressed like that?
Lol
Cute update...
So you've brought in a bit of comedy, huh?😉
Good. Its important to have a little bit of comedy occasionally.👍🏼
And then there was the romance...
I'm waiting to read the mystery part now. But I'm guessing that won't be happening immediately, as it'll take time to introduce it into the story? right?
Well... only time can tell... and you... LOL😆
I'm waiting to read ahead!
Do update soon!
And it was nice reading the long update!
Cheers
R.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

OH GOD!!

😆😆😆
I was so surprised when I read the Bhadresh Kutty- part!
Reporters ka Kabir... hahaha..
But I wonder why he is dressed like that?
Lol
Cute update...
So you've brought in a bit of comedy, huh?😉
Good. Its important to have a little bit of comedy occasionally.👍🏼
And then there was the romance...
I'm waiting to read the mystery part now. But I'm guessing that won't be happening immediately, as it'll take time to introduce it into the story? right?
Well... only time can tell... and you... LOL😆
I'm waiting to read ahead!
Do update soon!
And it was nice reading the long update!
Cheers
R.



Hope soon ur expcttions wl be fulfildd 😛 and thnkq sweety fr liking my updat 😉 wll ud soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Amazing ff. Read it in one go. Waiting fr d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Amazing ff. Read it in one go. Waiting fr d nxt part


Thnkz dear..wl updt soon.keep in touch
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Soo.here comes...
PART 19:

Raj and Naina were lost in each others arm and each others eyes when Pooja came their. She could only see back of the person holding Naina. She was sure that it couldnt be anyone except her Shah rukh.He was also looking the same from back.. so he started humming BAHONN K DARMIYAAA to tease the lost couple.

But hearing this when they came back to sences and faced Pooja,she got a zoor ka jhatka aur bhi jyada zoor se.

"Oye tu hai kaun aur aise yahan Naina k sath kyya kr rha hai...tera himmat kaise hua Naina ko chune ki bhi..ruk tu abhi main Shah rukh i mean Sir ko bulati hooo"...damn angry panjaban started fireing at that south indian preson satnding next to him. "Aur Nain tu yaban kyaa kr rhi hai iss k sath..."confused Pooja asked...

Suddenly she noticed a bunch of roses of white,and red in his hand. "Oye tu kyaa yahan pe pure taiyari k sath aaya h??yea rose k sath..meri frnd ko wrng signal dene aya hai??tere jankari k liye batadu k yea numbr busy hai..dont u evn try to try the numbr ok"pooja continues fireing.

Mean while all Naina and raj could do was to supress their laugh..first Naina was thinking to clear the missundrstnding of pooja but then she thought NEHI NAINA, BAHUT SMART BAN RAHA THA NA MERE SAMNE..AB USE KHANE DOOO...and she was totally enjoying the situation.

And for Raj..first he was shocked to hear something from his junior but when he got what she was trying to say and how she was actually pairing Naina with actual him,he was also quite enjoying the thing 😆 ...

"Aiyooo what r u saying madam.. mari kya galti hai mujhe batadoo.aisi butifool ladki dekhke hum kaise khudko sambhalti. Aur hum yea flower dene waste aayi apki CAPT ki kahne pe par aab lagti isme god ki koi pllaning thi. Iss buty se hamko milwati. Layi to thi yea rose apko persl dene par aab lagti yea to sirf inke waste hi mangai gayi thi...hai na jaaan?"saying this to Naina raj gav an eye blink to contnu the drama.

"Oye khabardar jo tu Naina k bareme aisa kuch socha bhi to...aur tujhe Capt sir ne bheja he..jiske liye tu kaam karta hai unhi ki..."before pooja could contnu further Naina was quite embarresed with what she was saying"are pooja chor naa..tu bhi pata nehi kis kis se muhh lagjati h"saying this she looked at poor Raj once and started the drama again"yea baas yahan mujhe yea roses dene aye the aur phir mera heels slip kr gya aur inhone mujhe girne se bachaya.thats all..chal aab yea rose le aur chalte hai.nilu ko ready bhi to karna hai"saying this she grabs the roses frm his hand and said "thanks bhai sahab"and was about to go giving him an eye blink .but before she could go he caugh her hand and said flirtingly "jaan apna naam to batake jaati nehito hum capt ko kya bolti k kise delivry deti"

Naina became so embaressed hearin JAAN from him in front of her friend.she somehow controls herslf and said "bol dena k jinko dena tha de diya..dont act smart u mr. ...what did u say ur name...ahhh..hmmm..mr. kutty r8..." giving him a miscbevious smile she went from there grabing pooja with her one hand.

"Kahan se aa jate hai yaar aise public?"pooja was so disgusted.."waise yea aapna shah rukh kahan rah gya??wo ane nehi wale kya??isse kyun bheja?"

"Chor na yaar..jisko ana hoga aa jayega hume kyaa?"Naina said as she knew he was alrdy there and mr. Kutty was none other than his Raj. She wanted to clearify this to pooja too.but as Raj didnt do so,so she wonders what the reason could be and decided to leave the matter to him.

"Are yea kyya baat hui.main to yea tere liye hi bol rhi thi..k tu jo itna sajh sawar k ready hui hai apne sajna i mean shah rukh k liye tohhbb agar wo hi nhi honge tooo..."pooja again started teasing her..

She was feeling shy to hear such things."kyaa bakwas kr rhi h.chal deer ho rhi h.jaldi ready hona h.nilu k wahan se saab log aa hi rahe honge."and they headed towrds nilus room.

They were unawr of the fact that someone was listing to their convo and thought"mujhe yea to pata hai k tum bhi mere liye wahi feel karte ho jo main tumhare liye..baas abhi kuch din aur..waise aj u r looing so butifl JAAN"😉 and an adorable smile appeard in his face.

Ok so thats all.plz do like and commnt to encourage.and also for any kind of suggtions.
Keep smiling,
Gargy
Edited by gargy4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Rajs new avatar was really nice. Lookin forward fr d nxt update.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Rajs new avatar was really nice. Lookin forward fr d nxt update.😃


Thnks dear...
Lov gg
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow nice part
raj ko ab naina ke dil ki bt pta h or wo bas sahi time ka wait kar raha h
i love u jaan (raj ) 🥺


love naina

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