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vaishnavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Congratulations on new thread..
the update was awesome..
Amazing teaser..

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bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Mojo Style😛😆

Are o Faiqa sabki jaaneman,

Jara bahar neekal, aur jaldi kar

Aaj ka vada hain, dekh mein aa gayi ab tu bhi aa,

Are peechle jumme ko to bolee thee agle jumme ko update doongi,

Aaj Jumma hain, Update ka vada hain,

to aaja aaaja,...
Faiqa update de de

Faiqa update de de Faiqa

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

...Teaser...

Raizada's Mansion

Suddenly, Arnav felt the urge to pull her out of this...yes, he had to and with that thought he pulled her close to him in one gist leaving no room in between them .His intense looks made her heart fluttered,but she couldn't resist looking away from the pool of emotions lurking in his eyes.He started playing with her skin with his fingers stroking over her neck to her cheeks.Tilting his head to one side he placed his lips over her cheek softly while whispering near her skin sending a tingling sensation in her,"Khushi! just feel me..."

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Gupta's Villa

Khushi waved back at Arnav before disappearing behind the door to his dismay without knowing that Aadi was looking at them up there in the balcony being concerned at his spot. Payal putting her hand over his shoulder said softly,"Aadi! She is not a little girl anymore. She knows what she is doing?..."

"I know that, but she is playing plain with fire Payal. She is weighing on him while he is really unpredictable... Uncle has stopped me interfering in her matters, but swears to God, I will tear him apart if he will cross any line..." Aadi said each word while gritting his teeth.

CHAPTER 8

For past READ Chapter 7 because without it u won't be able to understand the Sheesh Mahal part

CHAPTER 7

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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lechuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Scratching my area... 😆 ..

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forfunlanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Congrats on the new thread.

Sorry for the delay babe..

Such a wonderful story u have written. .

Its amazing and I cant wait to read more..😊

Edited by forfunlanya - 10 years ago

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ajeetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

awesome update loved the teaser

Edited by abivicky86 - 10 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Congrats For The New Thread...Interesting Update..👍🏼

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niza fazal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

What a lovely uppdate
Very interesting

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Unres...

Di am so lagging behind in time.. yet I didn't want to be without commenting..so am.here in single piece.. lol..

Thanks for the maha update by the way.. we are so loving your story and anything extra to go with it only adds to the pleasure.. this chapter was so good.. di how do you manage to bring so many elements of life in one single chapter? That too so effortlessly with absolute eloquence.. such is your power lovely di..

Oh his fear for her safety.. that was so adorably written and finally Khushi is brought to Arnav's home and to his room to fill his life with hues of love and happiness in the oven of joy!

Wow with these together..romance is never far na? Haha.. so adi is.torn between safeguarding her and shashi's words.. would love to know where this leads to...

Then there is payal and Khushi ka pyaar.. both are a little unsure on their feelings.n yet Khushi is closer to truth while Arnav is still in a little denial mode..

Sorry di my comment is short.. getting too busy nowadays :( waiting for the next update lovely di.. love you

Congrats for the ff win ;)

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago