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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2050

Thank you so much Di For dedicating this chapter for silent readers like me who are Too Lazy To comment and who know this better than you Di 😆

Btw Beautiful Chapter .. I Just Love How You describe each and every situation perfectly..
Iam In Love with your writing style


So good to see u hira😊

wow, I am so happy to bring you from silent to active...Madam Lazy😆
Really happy seeing u der.Do often this laziness
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

LOVED THE UPDATE LOVED HOW HE TOOK CARE OF HER LOVED THEIR MAKE OUT SESSION AND LOVED THEIR CONVERSATION THANKS FOR THE PM.


dumus🤗 is that u, humain to vishwas hi nahin ho raha

long long time dear, u been terribly missed hope all is well

Thnx for the pic and being here

welcome my friend❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Superb romantic update faiqa
Aww arshi's first passionate kiss
They both were lost in their first kiss and no one regretted doing so
The kiss healed the burried pain inside them to some extent

Waiting for their dhamaakedar confession😳😳let's see who realise and confess their love first.
Loved the chopper ride dear
Arnav is helping her to overcome her fright of height and was successful too.
Will get to see lots of rabbave moments in future too😳😳
Omg shyam is out of jail is he the one conspiring against arnav??
Eagerly waiting for next chapter dear
Update soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)


avika😊

u know u spread joy with ur ID pic

Thnx for the pink and red

u have to wait for that

Yes our fav Hero Shyam is coming into this town for a short visit

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Bhavi

What a beautiful update. 😃
Both finding solace in each others arm; both getting rid of their respective pains; both understanding each other without a word; both caring for each other without the name to the relation, but above all both giving into each other's desire without any restrictions and inhibitions😳. Arnav knowing her fears without her word is out of this word. Loved their helicopter ride.

Yes that was felt by many including urself and that was my intention to convey...Doesn't he always know what is she feeling?

Both lost their parents at early age but Khushi witnessing someone killing her father at such young age is a no no for any child. She having nightmares and she opening to Arnav👏 connecting both by pain.

That connection is always stronger than ever and they have it

Loved Gupta house banter between siblings and also Arnav calling Khushi to Anjali. A special thanks for Mojo's entry in your update. 😊 Arjun and his dialogue : Har kisiko apni Khushi milti hain👏

Love the pink, yes he said it openly, lets see when did she accept it verbally

So Shyam is here too😡 Hope he does not induce seperation😕

On your teaser: Is that paint that made her nose red? 😕

On your note: That was heights of humbleness. 😊



Bhavi😊

I am taking all heat of this upcoming guest 😡 ,but trust me u will see another version in my Story...and next chapter will give u all

My answers are in blue

Thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...such a sweeet and beautiful update...
they kissed...
that was for the previous chapter...
coming towards this one, I just love the way arnav cares for her...
so dinner with the family...
greattt...looking forward to the next update...
continue soon...
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thanks for pm...
Edited by momoahmd - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic update Faiqa👏
A part of Arnav's painful past is revealed. Anjali and Arnav had gone through lot of pain. So Shyam is Vikram Thakur's nephew. They both are dangerous and creepy. Shyam trapped poor Anjali and married her. He even tried to kill Arnav. Aww... Arnav's dog saved his life. Glad Shyam's truth came out within a year if not Anjali would have suffered a lot.
Aakash is a true friend. To save Arnav from danger, he bought Seeshmahal on his name and even helped to shift and cure Dr. Vikranth.

Mojo and his songs are so cute.
Loved Arnav's new name by Khushi - Arrogant, Stale piece of Raisins 😆.

Arnav and Khushi are missing each other to see, to talk and to be held by each other. Khushi don't know what those feelings are yet and Arnav don't want to name his feelings yet... I think because of his bitter past he lost faith in love and he is scared to accept what those feelings are... Even to himself.
Loved the part where Khushi working with colours and Arnav's care and concern for her, his anger, her huffing and puffing, and his " Your nose is red too Ms Gupta..."😉
Loved Arnav's "Dammit, Khushi! I missed you so much". The kiss Arnav and Khushi shared is so passionate 😳. Indeed She is a healer and solace to him. She heals him with her touch and smile.
Loved the way Anjali surprised Arnav by coming there, Anjali meeting Khushi and talking with her, the way Arnav eyes are only on Khushi in pretence of reading file and Anjali noticing it... Loved this line...
Anjali's happiness had no boundaries today and why not, after all Chote was her life.

Glad to see well wishers like O'Conner and Aman in Arnav's life. Loved how these two noticed change of behaviour in Arnav, loved their pinching part, how they both are happy for Arnav😃
So Khushi is going for dinner to Arnav's home and going to meet Nani😃
Shyam is out of jail... Waiting to see what happens next

Pre-Cape : Is it double date of Arnav and Khushi, Payal and Adi?

Edited by sudhareddy - 10 years ago
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This is what came to me when he touched that button caressing it seeing her smile and I can see you re building up all the fire which will burn him later when she will leave him.

I must The way you have penned down that past is really touchy and emotional,but the thing which is so powerful here is showing that when he woke up from that nightmare, he is alone , completely drenched in his own fear and this

He sat on his bed while holding the bed on both sides bridging his shoulders to balance the weight bending his neck down with closed eyes.


Bingo,👍🏼 He's been holding it too long that weight of pain , fear, revenge, and all that he is questioning himself now WHY?Good step👏 because his di's words are resonating his head.

He has developed fer of trust and love and here comes Khushi who is building this all with him regardless she is not sure of it,but she is giving in.

Now here is another thing which I felt , may be I am guessing , not sure

When she said

"And if I said NO then"

Why this sounds so strong here.Is this an indication that she will say NO to him.?

Now his missing her, having her in his arms shows that who is winning the battle in between heart and brain.Love this tom and jerry walk and talk .Her nose was red because of his proximity.Poor Khushi is so new to this.She should ask us.We have this effect here on this side of the screen😳
possessiveness and desire is consuming both of them.😳
So Anjali is playing a cupid here.It seems she heard Arnav asking her for dinner.

Now Precap

Is this a double date, I mean

Arun[Anjali
Arnav-Khushi

so where is the Nani?😆



Edited:

Arrogant stale piece of raisins= ASR😆

Now serious note as I know you . You picked Raisins, Brilliant👏👏

Raisins are sweet, these are passage

from the bitterness of sorrow
from sweetness to new beginning
towards solace, forgiveness ,and comfort in the eternal salvation


Edited by Roop_P - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited- Faiqa I thought I lost my mind when I saw Gupta house today thinking that I missed the whole part and was wondering how was that possible?😕 But then thank God for your note -small mercies 😆

So his past is cruel and gruesome and that Shyaam is a snakewa here too

Their encounter at Sheesh Mahal was just 😳 Their desire for each other is beyond imagination. Its like fire and oil. If one is fire other is just the catalyst in name of oil. Both can not live without each other.
And what the😲 instead of date with the raisin (Really Raisin😆) they will have a family dinner. So next update is party with Raizada. So who will take whose class? 😛

And Mojo😃
Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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