Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing part
Curios to knw what payal found
Soorry for my absence nwdays really busy
Tanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh dear it's wonderful update.
It's going on and on in a round,

I can't even imagine where it's leading, it's like maze.

Congrats for your writing dear.

Cliffhangers..

Waiting for your updates dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Reading your story feels like I am entering into a maze, and with each turn I am getting lost more and more.

More characters, more mystery.

Payal - I am already liking her. Very practical yet with a touch of emotion, someone whom Arnav regards a lot and someone who knows who Arnav is.

Khushi - a very big mystery. A big question mark. Will wait for her character to unfold.

Now what did Payal find out and what will Arnav find out crossing that door?

Nice that you gave a color to his musings. It gives a uniqueness to the update itself.


Edited by canapoem - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally caught up with all the updates..
Sorry for keeping so many backlogs..But must say, I am glad I read last four updates back to back.
Makes so much sense..
Still, Khushi is very big mystery..
She came to meet a doctor to US, why ?

Why did Khushi stop her contacts even with Payal and Akash..because she did not want Arnav or anyone to know whats happening in her life or she could not tell anyone ?
Arnav took 2 months to start his search for Khushi, why ?

Arnav hated women because his mother abandoned him, then what made Arnav overcome it in regards with Khushi ?

How long did Khushi stay at Arnav's place ?

I know, lots of questions... cannot wait to for answers...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

Finally done reading the chapter and must say it was fantabulous like always.

This was pretty long and i just loved reading long updates😉😉

Ok akka now coming to the update..

Wat da! Aman seriously went for a date with ms. kokila lol ... that was hilarious and she was so much impressed with him that she started missing in in a day lol..poor Aman kaha phas gaya.
Aman..and Lavanya ..thats a good pair...

But it helped them in a great way, they gt clues and in fact pictures of Garima and Khuhi's back 😆😆 wow it was really nice to read that he can recognize her with her back.

i liked the dialogue when he says he had seen more of her back then her face.

Akash and Arnav in a weird position and lol i just can stop my self from visualizing Khushi's expression. that was really funny.

he observed her keenly, but she stopped herself before he can read the real her, before he can understand what she was hiding and as now Arnav gt some clue that she was there to meet someone .. so now i guess he can also know her reason of distancing herself from him.

In past he was not sure of his feelings ..and never pointed on them ..but now as he is so much determined , i am sure he will get to her soon.

Akka, really yaar you have written everything in an amazing way and gosh.. its so much twisted ... and there is nothing that we can join dot till now.. its too much secretive..heheheh

Arnav dialed Akash.. was he a friend to Khushi?
Akka with every update many questions start developing in my head ..and i am getting more and more curious ..

bus ab jalde se Khushi ko bhe introduce kara do .. missing her.


Again comes a song that i relate with this ff and specially with the condition Arnav is going in present.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaIEfcUCywk[/YOUTUBE]



Nice analyzation vini darling. and awesome song yaar.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

okies..finaly 4th charter aagaya story mai..

Payal.. aakash's wife.

Aakash as usual same... jaese u hv shwd him in last update...

Payal Arnav hatred.. wow... flashback mazey ka honey wala hai..
u js gv us glimpse..

waiting for more..

itnaa past q..

i m confuse zyda now..

bt over ol story mai suspence zyda hai..

love u n Pinku i m missing u


LOL... Love you too. Pinky became too busy these days with college yaar. Should tie her down and made her sit with us and talk one day. What do you say Bahu.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Amazing part

Curios to knw what payal found
Soorry for my absence nwdays really busy
Tanx for pm


No worries Sutapa.. I know how much time AD demands from us. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akai

Oh dear it's wonderful update.

It's going on and on in a round,

I can't even imagine where it's leading, it's like maze.

Congrats for your writing dear.

Cliffhangers..

Waiting for your updates dear.


Thank you my dear.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Reading your story feels like I am entering into a maze, and with each turn I am getting lost more and more.

More characters, more mystery.

Payal - I am already liking her. Very practical yet with a touch of emotion, someone whom Arnav regards a lot and someone who knows who Arnav is.

Khushi - a very big mystery. A big question mark. Will wait for her character to unfold.

Now what did Payal find out and what will Arnav find out crossing that door?

Nice that you gave a color to his musings. It gives a uniqueness to the update itself.




Nice Quote Kavi.. and thanks for suggesting to add color to the musings. It is indeed good. I changed it in all the previous updates too. LOL.. Every Maze will definitely have an opening and an ending.. it is for us to find the right way to reach the ending. After the 2 months of his search.. he found the right path finally... Hope he gets to her quickly.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

Finally caught up with all the updates..

Sorry for keeping so many backlogs..But must say, I am glad I read last four updates back to back.
Makes so much sense..
Still, Khushi is very big mystery..
She came to meet a doctor to US, why ?

Why did Khushi stop her contacts even with Payal and Akash..because she did not want Arnav or anyone to know whats happening in her life or she could not tell anyone ?
Arnav took 2 months to start his search for Khushi, why ?

Arnav hated women because his mother abandoned him, then what made Arnav overcome it in regards with Khushi ?

How long did Khushi stay at Arnav's place ?

I know, lots of questions... cannot wait to for answers...


No worries Jyothy. I am happy you caught up. I want to clarify one thing. Actually he started searching for Khushi from the next minute he received the call from her. They started their quest with literally nothing in their hands. It took almost two months to get the lead about Khushi's old home in Kerala. Until then they just met with the dead ends everytime. I mentioned it in the first chapter.

Coming to you question.. How long Khushi stayed with Arnav. You will know the answer for that in coming chapters.

Hehehe.. I can understand about having loads of questions piling up without answers.. and it's time for answering those questions one by one.

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