Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th - Page 11

interesting. ...looking forward to read more...
cont. sooon...

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awesome start and very poetic scenic start too ...so arnav is a gone case in love with khushi :)...and he is searching her like crazy from one place to other ...maybe from one continent to other :)...so the phone call bringing back more strength to his resolution of finding khushi...thats great ...:) ...k eagerly waiting for chap 2 now :)

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Kya KArdiya mere Arnav ke saath bechrey ko banjara banadiya Hay Arnav 😭😭 . I hope he finds his Khushi fast 😡 . so much pain and restlessness in Arnav with out his Khushi.

Originally posted by: canapoem

Is the color of distance more darker than the color of ocean at night?

Is the pain of distance more deeper than the depth of the ocean?

Is the turmoil in the mind more turbulent than the waves of the ocean?

Will be back with more of my bak bak tomorrow.

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

vry good start.. Beautifully written and changing of colours wo b sea n sky.. U have written in so beuatifulllyyy beautiful..
Arnav is finding Khushi.. Bt where is she? And tat phone call aesa laga bandey mai jaan waps aagayi..
Hope prologue mai couple ARSHI na ho..
Tooo smaal update..
Love u
tk cr..
Ab smile kr dou na plsss..
Arey kr di smile.. Wow
toh chalo nxt waaley update Mai Arnav ko b kraa dou..lol

Originally posted by: diyadivya

If this is the state of arnav Im scared abt khushi !!!!

ur writing skills have massively improved from ur previous work Kirru...the way u have dwelled arnav's torment is commendable...

Looking fwd fr the nxt updt

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Congrts for new stry

welcom back kiran

i was not well so missd prologe

Waiting for stry unfold

tanx for pm

Interesting concept..
can't wait for more..

Kiran, how far you have come as a writer. Kudos to you dear, your improvement as a writer is amazing. 👏

Your words, your sentences literally themselves have their own unique color and I must say for me this update was more the shades of grey, both dark and light.

Your descriptions and comparisons to either the sky or the ocean and inturn to human struggles was just awesome and that is what held my concentration more than the fact that Arnav was looking for Khushi.

For now I want to forget the prologue as I feel there is still time for us to reach the prologue stage.
As of now Arnav is desperately looking for Khushi.
Who are these two and how are they connected to each other is something I eager to know.

I will eagerly wait as you reveal each color of this distance to us.