Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th

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Uzii

@Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Nice update so the couple fighting was arnav n khusi n they have a son but what made khusi to leave him,its stilla mystery that who the couple was looking forward to read more

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Good one

So is the couple mentioned in the prologue is Arnav and Khushi? Now Arnav is searching for her. Waiting to unfold the reason for the separation between them.

Thanks for the PM

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Waiting for the story to unfold...

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niza fazal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Interesting plot
Waiting for next part

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Interesting start. ..vulnerable Arnav but with new determination he left.

Searching for khushi? ??

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

oh no the couples which r fighting in prolouge r arshi😲😲...nd dat small boy was thier son..

Nd he hate khushi??😲😲..jhatke pe jhatka di..

Haww now arnav searching his happiness...and on the way to search for his khushi

Awsum start di..beautifully written..loved it

Looking forward for nxt

Continue sooinsh

PS:- itna chotu sa update..apne ramanchi kiya😆

Edited by latersbaby. - 10 years ago

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Is the color of distance more darker than the color of ocean at night?

Is the pain of distance more deeper than the depth of the ocean?

Is the turmoil in the mind more turbulent than the waves of the ocean?

Will be back with more of my bak bak tomorrow.

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Kya KArdiya mere Arnav ke saath bechrey ko banjara banadiya Hay Arnav 😭😭 . I hope he finds his Khushi fast 😡 . so much pain and restlessness in Arnav with out his Khushi.

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

vry good start.. Beautifully written and changing of colours wo b sea n sky.. U have written in so beuatifulllyyy beautiful..
Arnav is finding Khushi.. Bt where is she? And tat phone call aesa laga bandey mai jaan waps aagayi..
Hope prologue mai couple ARSHI na ho..
Tooo smaal update..
Love u
tk cr..
Ab smile kr dou na plsss..
Arey kr di smile.. Wow
toh chalo nxt waaley update Mai Arnav ko b kraa dou..lol

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

He is alone! He is reminiscing some good old memories! I loved how you compared those tides and their movements with khushi! The hues, the laughter etc etc. Looks like there is something that made him lose her! What was the call about? Good news or bad news? Did he find her? Or did he lose her again? Cant wait for more! Thanks for pm!