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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NSB7

Simple yet beautiful

A common thing now everyone knows of... The things most simple are always beautiful
A mother that smiles at her kid who says something... Just a sentence of innocence but deeply meaningful

A friend who finds u upset and tries to cheer you up.. Just a taunt filled with wit
The sentence that moves you more than a hundred encouraging words...how she wraps them in just this little bit

A woman of achieving flair and all the great aura...smiles at an ameture and her little skills
A lady that wonders at the wise little ones... Wondreing at their understanding of lives bitter pills

A girl who sits back and admires everyone else..just glad to have known all of them
She is the real role player...holding thier hands when they stumble on a rock in an eveyday game

A little lady that fills the place with her presence... Bringing along the gust of energy
A woman who gets elated at being Hugged by a kid..at the connect beyond age and hierarchy

A girl who left a mark in everything she did..better are the ones who held her memories and always cherished

Somebody finds happiness while adoring a baby
SOmebdoy finds happiness while being called not a girl but a lady

Somebody puts across her pain in depth of her words
Somebody learns to smile in some cookies on her table and the balcony and birds

The smile of a parent at an achieving child
The gratitude of a daughter at her parents, while fighting battles they still smiled

ARrival of a new life, return of a loved one..
A word with an old friend, appreciation for what you pen

A stranger who understands, unexpectedly she comforts
A little kid who loves you, a grownup who cares

A message to keep going on, a message to give you strength
A song addressed to make you feel better, a call to reach out

Simple things all i value now
Thanks to everyone here who showed me how



It's a random potpourri of ideas...I wanted to express...its all jumbled and all over the place...not conclusions or proper Start

Please bear with me

If u find yourself in this poem... I would feel on top of the world


Good one Nammu !! U are one of those creative ones I thought about when writing my comment earlier. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Garima... Hopr you acgieve all success in life! Good night darl :)
Nam - Tu googly pe googly maarti phir.. Hum like karte rahenge.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luvparis



Tru
Its just that I personaly know some1 who went thru hell recently wen the baby was born prematurely. It's a very stresful & trying time 4 every1 involved.


Agree Garima..
My niece was born in 8 months...we had a tough time for first 2 months..Now when my dad sees her antics, he wonders like is this was the one?
Edited by putti77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminechick

Gm India/ Gn US

I can see my appa amma just enjoying our company and smiling at us (kids and me) eating, watching TV, chatting, arguing and fighting. Simple happiness like Mr Iyer looking at his daughters and sister. So realistic Nisha.

Will try to read tonight's and tomorrow's updates in airport lounges. Back home soon to my normal routine. Will miss amma, appa and hot chennai.😔

Very nice comments, analysis on updates as well on other topics. I think the younger generation is much more mature than what I used to be. Kudos ! Some of you are exceptionally articulate, extremely creative. Nice to see conversations from Ekta kapoor to Education system, salman khan to skin color. Emotionally connected to other readers, looking out for each other and creating new friend circles, maturely handling difference of opinions.

Hats off all of you. 🥳

RedGarnet - waiting to start back our phone convos on updates between our office calls 🤣



Thank you and you are part of it too.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am going off to write... I was actually having a good time tonite chatting on the page. They came by and ruined my happiness
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Posted: 10 years ago
seeing Nisha frustrated from those visitors... reminds me of Kajol in kabhi khushi kabhi gham... when a british lady (their neighbor) used to visit them... and kajol was being polite in english but abusing her in hindi simultaneously... 😆

Namzz that middle class wale points and this creation...
Superbly outstanding...
U are so busy still u are able to write for yourself and ofcourse for us too... Thanks 😃 Everyone values u 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I am going off to write... I was actually having a good time tonite chatting on the page. They came by and ruined my happiness

Awww
I thought we youngesters are all a silly bunch among all you mature women
Happy to know you enjoy our conversations and conversing with us
Mitti pao unn visitors ko
Inspiration chahiye to bolo.. We will keep talking endlessly till you say SHUT UP 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NSB7

Simple yet beautiful

A common thing now everyone knows of... The things most simple are always beautiful
A mother that smiles at her kid who says something... Just a sentence of innocence but deeply meaningful

A friend who finds u upset and tries to cheer you up.. Just a taunt filled with wit
The sentence that moves you more than a hundred encouraging words...how she wraps them in just this little bit

A woman of achieving flair and all the great aura...smiles at an ameture and her little skills
A lady that wonders at the wise little ones... Wondreing at their understanding of lives bitter pills

A girl who sits back and admires everyone else..just glad to have known all of them
She is the real role player...holding thier hands when they stumble on a rock in an eveyday game

A little lady that fills the place with her presence... Bringing along the gust of energy
A woman who gets elated at being Hugged by a kid..at the connect beyond age and hierarchy

A girl who left a mark in everything she did..better are the ones who held her memories and always cherished

Somebody finds happiness while adoring a baby
SOmebdoy finds happiness while being called not a girl but a lady

Somebody puts across her pain in depth of her words
Somebody learns to smile in some cookies on her table and the balcony and birds

The smile of a parent at an achieving child
The gratitude of a daughter at her parents, while fighting battles they still smiled

ARrival of a new life, return of a loved one..
A word with an old friend, appreciation for what you pen

A stranger who understands, unexpectedly she comforts
A little kid who loves you, a grownup who cares

A message to keep going on, a message to give you strength
A song addressed to make you feel better, a call to reach out

Simple things all i value now
Thanks to everyone here who showed me how



It's a random potpourri of ideas...I wanted to express...its all jumbled and all over the place...not conclusions or proper Start

Please bear with me

If u find yourself in this poem... I would feel on top of the world


Loved each and every word...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Namrata, you are have way with words Girl. And you indeed think deep.
Ashu, sahi bolti hai - Are you really 23?

I could actually relate to some part of it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Evening at Iyers


She waved outside through the window standing by the balcony door,

He smiled and extended his hand like he always did at Malcha Marg

She self consciously let herself out to the tiny DII balcony

He turned the other way, one foot over the lowest rail and began to talk again

She leaned by him, he leaned sideways and inhaled her jasmine strings Amma clipped on her hair

She felt heat rise up her ear and gently travel up her cheeks like slow moving clouds

She gently leaned on his shoulders, and felt the button on his sleeve, it was folded up a couple inches above his watch on the left wrist

He turned his hand exposing his palm... she gently slid the platinum wedding ring off... he folded his fingers down to a fist
not allowing her to remove it fully

She gently yanked it off... and wore it on her ring finger... over her engagement ring

it wrapped loosely over the Cartier rock

"Polama" she muttered

He listened , didnt seak much on the call

He nodded

He extended his hand... she placed the ring, he kept it open

"I want you to slide it back on my finger" like expression on his face

She chuckled "I dont do this thing for free usually" she said seriously as if she was in the business of sliding rings on mens' fingers
"Periya, solid gift venum (I want a big gift)... lots of bells and whistles and
sparkly and moist and firm and glittery and smooth" she listed laughing breathlessly as she slid it gently

He said something in French about her

"Enna pathi pesareya?" (are u talking abt me?) she asked, acting hurt

He nodded with a half smile

he turned sideways, she just leaned on him and stared at the twilight... the press wala rang his bell twice upon seeing her

"Kabhi aaye didi" the young boy asked

"2 baje" she smiled

"Auntyjee koi kapde nahi diye" he said sadly

"Koi baat nahi aaja oopar" she chuckled

"Vareya presswala kitta intro panren" (I will intro u)

He laughed and did a five with his fingers

"teach him French da" she smiled

He hugged her shoulders... they rocked in the balcony...
"Did u sit on my pod swing?" she smiled

He shook his head

"I would complain about u to Akka every Sat morning" she muttered

He finished up his call

"U dont even care if someone is on the phone?" (u just keep talking anyway?)
he bend down and rubbed his lips and cheeks on her ear and neck

"Not really" she shrugged

she squirmed, giggled and cooed...
"I would say all sorts of horrible things about you... and plot to kill you RIGHT HERE" she said pointing to the swing

He sat down on it, she pushed it

"It wont go to far like yours" she said suddenly, her face sad

"Mine?" he asked

"U know" she mumbled

She leaned on the balcony and looked inward... he kicked it up a notch and felt it sway

"It was Appa's present to me for clearing CPA" she gushed

"what do u want to buy the baby?"

"shatabdi?" she asked

"Vandita is going to whoop your butt for that" he chuckled

"she threatens to..." she smiled

" A swing? or cradle or clothes or all" she smiled

"Huh" he grunted

"what were u thinking?" she asked
He shook his head

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Vandu opened the door

"MUJHE DO BACHE DEKAR DONO ROMANCE?"

R&B immediately jumped off the swing and hugged her

"andar aa ja na" she begged

"She was convincing me how the baby should only be named Shatabdi" he teased

"Please da... dont encourage her... I mean DO... but only when it comes to YOUR OWN" she warned


"Chal saale beer pilata hoon" Bala said cheerfully


"You are BACK" II smiled

"Arey junior yaha hai to" Bala smiled sheepishly

"Is Lasya awake?"

"Ya... Amma is holding her... are u going to return her or not?" Vandu asked

"I MAY... if I get my ransom" Ii chuckled

"MERA BACHA ATKA HAI WAHA... lauta Sam ko uska bacha"

"Po ka lets leave Shravu there... we have a new one now" II winked

"Podi... U do like that... have two leave the first one with Amma Appa" Akka was mock angry

"No 2, 3,4 " II mumbled

"Can u leave now?" R&B asked

II hesitated... she leaned on the wall and gave him longing looks

"Balaaa U cant go tonite" Vandu ordered

the presswala's kid came... II searched for her purse... R&B produced a Rs.500 bill

II dragged her feet...
R&B walked over to the kid and gave it to him

"Aapko yaad hai main aapko us din mila?"

The day he came to patch up...

R&B nodded with a half smile

"Didi, jeejaji bolte nahi kya?" he asked
"Pesu da" she ordered

"Nahi bolta hoon" he said

"AYYOOO HE TALKED IN HINDI?" akka squealed

"Ennadi.. is he Norwegian... ofcourse he does" Bala was A LILLL jealous

athai brought idli for II,
"athai I dont want to eat now... pack panni tarela?" (can u pack it for me?)

Appa brought a bunch of revenue stamps for Bala for somthing he needed

"Apdiye oru lawyer irunda kudungo" Bala winked

Some Chennai house issue for his parents, he wanted a lawyer...

"My brother's son is a lawyer but he is in Calcutta "

"What is the use pa... even if Ganesh was in Tanjore he wont do a thing for us" Akka whispered

Appa was a lil hurt

"Akkkaaa" II admonished her

"Do u need a lawyer?" R&B offered

"Hai kya tere paas? I can pay him, I just need the doc prepared and signed and all that"

R&B nodded, Appa just looked...

"Thanks man... u seem to be well connected" Bala muttered naively

"Lets go II" he muttered

II was only too eager... she took her idlis, hugged everyone, squeezed the baldie

Picked up Lasya... only to have Tan show up at the door

"Yeh le apna bacha mera de" he winked at Vandu... handing Shravu

"Agar iske baal ek inch bhi kam hue to, Lasya meri" Vandu giggled

Amma scolded her "VANDITA"

"aunty... its fine" Tan smiled

Athai asked him in Tamil if he wanted idlis

"Kha lenge aunty, agar chutney aur smabar hai to" he smiled "Samyukta ke liye pack kar denge kya?" he asked

athai was only too happy

"enna solran?' she asked (Whats he saying?)

amma explained

II hugged Appa

"Goodbye Mr Iyer" R&B said

appa grunted and nodded.,... "Yes yes... take care... dont go out in the heat, Delhi is very hot" he ordered

R&B nodded...

They got home, walked up.. Manya and Dad were missing...
She pushed him against the wall and went on her toes and kissed him. "please da" she whispered
He bent and picked her up...

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