Arshi TS: The Game of Destiny [Part 3 updated on Page 5] (04/07/15)

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Wow Sayari.. its amazing!! So proud of you girl, I see a budding writer in here 😉

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Sayari

@sayari_sanki99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kclovearshi
Wow Sayari.. its amazing!! So proud of you girl, I see a budding writer in here 😉
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Thank you so much for kind words Kavitaji 🤗 I am so touched by your words 😳😊

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Sayari

@sayari_sanki99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Divyahet
First of all I would love to a tight hug to you Writerji n the person who shared this link with me. Reshu thanks dear.
All the parts were very beautifully written.

Which moment I like most in each part...is...

* the Chhotu is note by ASR...and that too in perfect cursive writing..chalo aapne ASR ki handwriting sudhaari toh sahi.😆

* Khushi ka bahaana for being late on their 100th date...ufff Arnav tussi great ho ji. Apni late Latif rani ke pear mein kitne doobe ho...hard baat bahut dil lagaa kar sunte ho tabhi toh ek hi bahaana Tishri baar Anaya turant pata chal gaya.😆

* Payal ko bhi sahi lifepartner mil Gaya...

Simply awesome TS. Hope to see you soon with another Arhi story.

Loved reading your cute comment 😳 We share the same favourite moments of the story 😆 Inshallah someday I will write another one 😃 Thank you for reading this ❤️

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Sayari

@sayari_sanki99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
Beautiful ending
I love this Khushi, she is breaking her own record in getting late every time😆
Poor Arnav, what can he do😆😆
Simply love it😊

Aww! Thank you for liking this TS 🤗

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Sayari

@sayari_sanki99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: toeditor
loved reading this TS!! :) Enjoyed it thoroughly...Good going...
Thanks a lot for your note rashmi dear...for pointing me to read this lovely story... 🤗

Thank you so much for giving your time to this story! 😊 I am glad you liked it. Well, even I should thank our pyaari Rashmiji then..😉😃

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

This was so cute!

Payal and Khushi's relationship was something with so much potential but our creatives ruined it :/

I loved how you wrote about them mending it when it was on the brink of getting lost...

I totally loved their first meet...it was so cute and how Arnav went ahead and called her for a date so boldly! And Khushi is just so funny with her tardiness and ridiculous excuses... it explained me of the scene where Khushi saves Aarav and then explains the scene to Arnav later in their bedroom when Arnav is watching her like...you know what 😳 ☺️

She actually said she was supposed to be born on the 13th and it became the 15th 😆

Whatever happened to our Aakash bitwa?

I totally loved reading this! You should write more 👏