Arshi TS: The Game of Destiny [Part 3 updated on Page 5] (04/07/15) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ChocolateArshi

Oops finally!!😆...well done and perfect ending👏

Payal got her perfect partner and her behan is going to be a mother😊
if u dont mind update an epilogue also with their child...
Anyway i love the way u portrayed sis bond as well as Arshi 😃
Sayu why did u made it TS...there is FF,SS...😡...but it has already ended😭
Thank you so much for this awesome TS🤗...Keep writing and stay blessed❤️


Thank you! 🤗

Haww...you are never going to be satisfied...I should have kept this OS I think 😡😛😆

Thank you so much once again, for your sweet comment 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Kushi will break her own record in getting late every time😆, i so glad and happy for payal... at last she found her prince charming who is going to take her like a princess... she deserves every bit of happiness...

Awww Arshi are going to be parents soon! i know they will be wonderful parents to their children... I really enjoyed this TS...thanks dear...


Yup..this Khushi is a brilliant example of Late Latif 😆 Actually her character is inspired from one of my frenemy (49.9% friend and 50.1% enemy) 😛 I was feeling bad for Payal. Poor gal had to go through a heartbreak 😭 But now even she is set 😃 Yes, our Arshi will have their ASR junior or KKGSR 2.0 I am so glad you enjoyed this story. Thank you for reading! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Their first meeting was so cute... The way Khushi reacted on being caught staring and how Arnav asked her out ❤️. I loved how you showed a progression in their story, from bickering lovers to expectant parents... I also liked that you had a parallel story going on about Payal, her relationship with her sister, her issues and life as such... 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Their first meeting was so cute... The way Khushi reacted on being caught staring and how Arnav asked her out ❤️. I loved how you showed a progression in their story, from bickering lovers to expectant parents... I also liked that you had a parallel story going on about Payal, her relationship with her sister, her issues and life as such... 👍🏼


Thank you so much Saiyyu-ji 🤗
Apne comment kiya...mera jeevan safal ho gaya 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Lol arnavki shakal dekhny wali thi when khushi blamed him...
Wesay awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Wonderful end ...enjoyed this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Sayari... that was one of the superb three shots I have come across...
It was really refreshing...

A very pleasant read that brought out a smile and never left the lips...

Thanks for the pm...
Edited by rulama - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
aahhwww loved the end!
Everything is perfect now..
arshi are living happily ever after.. and payal found her happiness too..

awesome ts dear!! totally loved it!






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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Cute Small story.👏

Their first meeting was adorable... Khushi's reaction on being caught staring at was hilarious and how Arnav asked her out ❤️ was just an awww..moment itself.The progression in their relationship was nicely put together... Payal, her relationship with her sister, her own issues are well portrayed.
I actually can see you as Khushi, a young ,😳 a bit nutkhut, 😆and a bit mature😉 all in one Sayari.

👍🏼


Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Such a cute and adorable TS.
Loved their first meeting. Khushi joined Payal at her workplace to rekindle their relationship and she made a new one on the first day itself. I loved how Arnav left a note for her.
Second part was good and funny with Khushi making same excuses for the delay... She is really crazy.
And the third part was so good.. Women!!! she took so much time and blamed Arnav.. Hehe..
for a moment I thought if Khushi would make another story in front of Payal to calm down her. 😆
I liked how you told about their relationship also. The mending of their equation and how they are close to each other once again and how Payal found true love this time. And the gift Khushi gave Arnav on his birthday was amazing... I loved it...
And thank you to rulama too for telling me about this story.

Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago

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