Arshi TS: The Game of Destiny [Part 3 updated on Page 5] (04/07/15)

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

lovely story.
thanks to Rashmi aka Rulama for suggesting this TS.
Loved it to core.

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Rashmi thanks for the recommendation.

I loved all three parts and this story is simply cute, lovely and captivating. All your characters and their professions are very interesting too. Glad to see every one finding their destination filled with love.

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Loved d story.. very cute.

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Sayari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: rulama
Sayari... that was one of the superb three shots I have come across...
It was really refreshing...

A very pleasant read that brought out a smile and never left the lips...

Thanks for the pm...

Thank you so soo much Rashmiji! 🤗 I am really happy that you liked it 😳

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Sayari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sona257
aahhwww loved the end!
Everything is perfect now..
arshi are living happily ever after.. and payal found her happiness too..

awesome ts dear!! totally loved it!

Yes their life is totally perfect now It has to be perfect when our Arshi is together 😳 Thank you so much for staying with this story till the end and leaving such sweet comments❤️

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Sayari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.
Cute Small story.👏

Their first meeting was adorable... Khushi's reaction on being caught staring at was hilarious and how Arnav asked her out ❤️ was just an awww..moment itself.The progression in their relationship was nicely put together... Payal, her relationship with her sister, her own issues are well portrayed.
I actually can see you as Khushi, a young ,😳 a bit nutkhut, 😆and a bit mature😉 all in one Sayari.

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Thank you for reading this story Faiqaji 🤗 I would react the same way as Khushi if I ever get caught staring at someone...IF being the keyword 😛 I am a very careful person when it comes to ogling people 😆 I am sounding like a psycho stalker! 😲😆 I wanted to talk a bit about the bonding between sisters. I am always fascinated by behenon ka pyaar kind of thing 😛 Hehe..you also think this Khushi is like me? I didn't really notice. You all know me better than I know myself 😆 But I not always late like her...sometimes yes but definitely not an excuse-maker 😃 #NiceChild 😉

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Sayari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: aquagal
Such a cute and adorable TS.
Loved their first meeting. Khushi joined Payal at her workplace to rekindle their relationship and she made a new one on the first day itself. I loved how Arnav left a note for her.
Second part was good and funny with Khushi making same excuses for the delay... She is really crazy.
And the third part was so good.. Women!!! she took so much time and blamed Arnav.. Hehe..
for a moment I thought if Khushi would make another story in front of Payal to calm down her. 😆
I liked how you told about their relationship also. The mending of their equation and how they are close to each other once again and how Payal found true love this time. And the gift Khushi gave Arnav on his birthday was amazing... I loved it...
And thank you to rulama too for telling me about this story.

Thank you so much for reading this! ❤️

I don't know why but I find leaving notes for a girl or a boy very romantic 😛 Hope I'm not bragging, but this Arnav is my second favourite after the original one of the show. An Arnav with glasses is just too much for me to handle 😳😆 This Khushi is both crazy and lazy. She is inspired from one of my friends. My friend is also always late to every single class or event. So I thought of honouring her by making our Khushi a bit like her 😛 Khushi did not make another story in front of Payal because Payal knows her a bit too well to believe her stories 😉 I was really unfair to Payal by breaking her heart 😭 but now even she found her true love

Yes, a huge thank you to Rashmiji from me 🤗

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

First of all I would love to a tight hug to you Writerji n the person who shared this link with me. Reshu thanks dear.

All the parts were very beautifully written.

Which moment I like most in each part...is...

* the Chhotu is note by ASR...and that too in perfect cursive writing..chalo aapne ASR ki handwriting sudhaari toh sahi.😆

* Khushi ka bahaana for being late on their 100th date...ufff Arnav tussi great ho ji. Apni late Latif rani ke pear mein kitne doobe ho...hard baat bahut dil lagaa kar sunte ho tabhi toh ek hi bahaana Tishri baar Anaya turant pata chal gaya.😆

* Payal ko bhi sahi lifepartner mil Gaya...

Simply awesome TS. Hope to see you soon with another Arhi story.

Edited by Divyahet - 10 years ago