Arshi TS: The Game of Destiny [Part 3 updated on Page 5] (04/07/15) - Page 2

WHAT THE!!!! sayu am I dreaming? someone pinch me plzzz...I can't believe it...is it u sayu? wht to do its reality, I have to believe 😆 finally dear u did...ohhk enough of my dramas..coming to the update Firstly about the first part photoshoot, its just awesome dear...simply hilarious..u described payal and khushi's bond very well...and i loved the way how khushi managed to maintain their relationship on the verge of vanishing...here khushi is totally crazy like u lol...hmmm their date, haha seriously Arnu...wht the 100th date celebration but I want to know about their first date, I know its impossible koi baat nahi...khushi's explanation about y she was late was just ufff I can't stop myself from laughing and arnav's reply"this is the same story u told me on our third date" lol like my teachers used to told me whenever I made some excuses if I was late...ohhkkk sayu I think u should keep writing dear because u have that ability...hmm chalo I think its enough...

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..

Sayari this story is something!

This TS proved that you can write and write very well.

It doesn't look like that you're writing a short story for the first time.

You are so talented MaShaAllah.

I simply loved the TS :)

Originally posted by: BubbleArshi

WHAT THE!!!! sayu am I dreaming? someone pinch me plzzz...I can't believe it...is it u sayu? wht to do its reality, I have to believe 😆 finally dear u did...ohhk enough of my dramas..coming to the update Firstly about the first part photoshoot, its just awesome dear...simply hilarious..u described payal and khushi's bond very well...and i loved the way how khushi managed to maintain their relationship on the verge of vanishing...here khushi is totally crazy like u lol...hmmm their date, haha seriously Arnu...wht the 100th date celebration but I want to know about their first date, I know its impossible koi baat nahi...khushi's explanation about y she was late was just ufff I can't stop myself from laughing and arnav's reply"this is the same story u told me on our third date" lol like my teachers used to told me whenever I made some excuses if I was late...ohhkkk sayu I think u should keep writing dear because u have that ability...hmm chalo I think its enough...

Originally posted by: Sona257

Yeaaahhh U really made a second part!!

THANK YOU!!

Really loved the update.. they both are really cute.. and it was really sweet how much they take care of each other.. loved the surprises they gave each other for their 100th date...

And khushi asked him to marry her.,, aaahhww that was really sweet

really loved the second part..

and I wouldn't mind for a third part hihi 😆😆

Beautiful story

Amazing ts dear please update next part soon And please send me pm

Part two was really sweet

Thanks for the note dear😊