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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CreativeByBirth


Oh i am so sorry
I lingered this story on that is why i forgot. Thank you so much for pointing it out.
Because i dont know how to keep it continue now...


I'm always here to correct you. You're like my younger sister.
When I try to continue any story after a long break, I read the whole thing before writing further. Since no one else noticed, you just continue how you wanted to since you wanna do it in another 5 chapters.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrinalini_810


I'm always here to correct you. You're like my younger sister.
When I try to continue any story after a long break, I read the whole thing before writing further. Since no one else noticed, you just continue how you wanted to since you wanna do it in another 5 chapters.


Thanks di.
Can i discuss all the chapters with you?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CreativeByBirth


Thanks di.
Can i discuss all the chapters with you?


Sure! Anytime. I'm back to IF for good. I'll be around. I keep checking it on my phone.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrinalini_810


Sure! Anytime. I'm back to IF for good. I'll be around. I keep checking it on my phone.



Thank you so much🤗

And one more thing, can't we correct the mistakes of this story? I mean this one, the one you pointed out. it is a blunder after all
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CreativeByBirth



Thank you so much🤗

And one more thing, can't we correct the mistakes of this story? I mean this one, the one you pointed out. it is a blunder after all


You wanna put a note and rewrite that chapters, you can do it. How do you wanna go about it? And let me know what help you need from me. 😊

I've just finished writing the AsYa Chapter 2. I'm a little apprehensive in posting it.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrinalini_810


You wanna put a note and rewrite that chapters, you can do it. How do you wanna go about it? And let me know what help you need from me. 😊

I've just finished writing the AsYa Chapter 2. I'm a little apprehensive in posting it.




Hmmm. what do you prefer if you would be at my place?


You are nervous? come on you are The Mrina, you always have thoughts about next five chapters. Nervousness and confusion is my thing😆
minakrish thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CreativeByBirth




Hmmm. what do you prefer if you would be at my place?


You are nervous? come on you are The Mrina, you always have thoughts about next five chapters. Nervousness and confusion is my thing😆


I'd probably remove the chapters and rewrite them. Put a note for the readers and re-post once corrected. 😃

Are you kidding? The Mrina was probably years ago. I haven't written in a couple of years. And I'm pretty nervous about this AsYa story because it is pretty different from the ones I've written before. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrinalini_810


I'd probably remove the chapters and rewrite them. Put a note for the readers and re-post once corrected. 😃

Are you kidding? The Mrina was probably years ago. I haven't written in a couple of years. And I'm pretty nervous about this AsYa story because it is pretty different from the ones I've written before. 😳



Have you read thread 2? do you know where i have gone wrong?


Just do one thing, write and post it dont think so much. this is not our +2 exam
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Posted: 6 years ago
I read it. I will have to re-read and see where you want wrong.
You didn't read the AsYa story yet na?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrinalini_810

I read it. I will have to re-read and see where you want wrong.

You didn't read the AsYa story yet na?




There are one dialogue in thread 2 where I have to change. What sort of note should I put, can you suggest?

I read but the introduction.

Edited by CreativeByBirth - 6 years ago

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