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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awesome chapter Angela😃

Loved Krishna with little kid eating makkan❤️

I eager for the night adventure😳

I am angry with u that you did not PM me😡

Loved family bonding with each other

Do not forget to PM me for the next chapter 😃

Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

It was so so cute! I just LOVED it! Aww! Kaash it was me in place of that little boy! And yes, east or west, my Kanha is the best. He is never satisfied with anything until all his friends and devotees are satisfied! And again, kaash it was me who would get the opportunity to share a pot of butter with Him. I don't even mind being a hungry child if that would fulfill this wish of mine!

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not.here

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Makhan! That was such a sweet thing to do. 😃

big congratulations on your anniversary! Hip hip hooray!

I like the sound of adventure so waiting for the castle drama.

Lo, this would never be a SSK, because here there is a reason for naagins plus I won't let you! 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Finally, Angie has updated. *raises both hands*
Well, what can I say? Let me start with telling you how much I have missed this story
It has been so long but now, that you did update, I will talk about the chapter, all other things for later...
I really liked the fact that you had engaged and given importance to every little facet of the chapter, every character, and described it so wonderfully that I could clearly imagine the scene.
The last scene was just so cute😳
Girl, you really have the makings of a Dan Brown!
I am so intrigued, and looking forward to the next update and to know about how this quest will turn out to be. I am glad that the adventure has returned in the story, and I am keen on reading forward and knowing how the quest will turn out.

Coming to the note: Do not compare your work with Sasural Simar Ka, ever. That show is intolerable, meant only for dragging on and on, wasting a perfectly good time-slot and a lot of money.
Your story has maintained the story-line, is a combination of various genres, and the readers find it absolutely interesting.

😎

Long time? Yup. Really long.

So, to start with I hardly can focus on all the characters in equal light. I just try my best to engage everyone because I don't want characters to be there just for showing faces in a dramatic scene. 😆

As of the combination of genres, it has been quite a strange one. But I am glad to know that you liked it. Makes be feel better sbot the content. I honestly hope you like the upcoming ones too.

Thank you. 😳

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Awesome chapter Angela😃
Loved Krishna with little kid eating makkan❤️
I eager for the night adventure😳
I am angry with u that you did not PM me😡
Loved family bonding with each other
Do not forget to PM me for the next chapter 😃

😃

I am so happy you liked the scene.

And sorry about the PM. Actually I was in a hurry. Anyways, I'll you for the next chapter. Pakka promise. 😛

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
It was so so cute! I just LOVED it! Aww! Kaash it was me in place of that little boy! And yes, east or west, my Kanha is the best. He is never satisfied with anything until all his friends and devotees are satisfied! And again, kaash it was me who would get the opportunity to share a pot of butter with Him. I don't even mind being a hungry child if that would fulfill this wish of mine!

Yay! I am happy that you liked it. 😃

Thanks.

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Cortana
Makhan! That was such a sweet thing to do. 😃
big congratulations on your anniversary! Hip hip hooray!

I like the sound of adventure so waiting for the castle drama.

Lo, this would never be a SSK, because here there is a reason for naagins plus I won't let you! 😛

Hmm.. So you liked it. I am happy that all my readers like it. That makes me feel good about the content I give. 😃

Nagins? Hmm... None coming. And I think they never will here. I mean though I did bring a phoenix in but a nagin? I don't know.😆

Thanks.

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Sonatia
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lemme read first.
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awesome as it was!! U did such a good job..i loved the way u presented krishna's soft,loving, caring nature through that incident with the child.the child was cute.waiting eagerly for the next update.

😃

It great to that you liked it for you take out your precious time to read it.

Thanks for a lovely comment! 😳

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Chapter 54 : Some happenings

A lot of conversations passed between Paarth, Panchi and Shubhi as they drove to the castle.

As much as she liked mysteries, Shubhi happily boasted about her current read which was about the possible artifacts of several civilizations.

To which Panchi happily replied by saying, "Well you are one smart lady Shubhi!"

Shubhi replied by saying that Panchi was a lucky one she had Paarth. An unexplainable inconvenience passed between the three. It was tough to call it wrong. For, the happenings of previous birth still made them uncomfortable. Panchi especially preferred to make it an isolated part of her life.

To end the discomfort, Paarth spoke up, "Why do you think that? You'll find somone better! I am sure of it!"

"Oh! That she will. We know you well Shubhi." Panchi explained.

"But how you people manage it? I mean being in a relationship and keeping it a secret from your family, isn't it tough?" Shubhi mentioned with astonishment.

"Well, not really. We actually enjoy it. Don't we?" Paarth looked towards Panchi and winked.

"I mean you really can romance behind that closed door?" Shubhi asked.

Panchi could do nothing but stare at both of them. She knew not how to reply. They were talking about romancing and that too in almost a complete absurd manner. She expressed her thoughts, "If you ask me, romancing behind closed door..."

"Gives you a lot of opportunities!" Paarth completed her words.

"What!" Shubhi was shocked and instantly looked towards Panchi, who had narrowed her eyes at Paarth.

"What kind of opportunities?" Panchi questioned as she flustered.

"You wanna know?"

"Nope! You know what! I am done. This is absurd. I mean you people are talking about what! Well, honestly, you Panchi have a tough task to do. Handle him!" Shubhi rolled her eyes.

"And... We reach!" Paarth stopped the car.

The three got out and looked at the demolished building. Most part of it was destroyed when Vasusen, Vrushali and Sahdev were stuck. It now presented them with less chances of finding any clue related to the diamond.

Out of the three, Subhadra was a bit reserved now. She was feeling unsettled. Something urged her to stay away but she had to go. This intuition of her was soon overtaken by the will to explore and her heart lost to the wish of her brain and she proceeded to enter the building.

"It looks strange. I doubt we will get anything here. But we must explore. And if my guess is correct it will vanish at the right time. I wonder, if it doesn't, then what is going to happen? This seems exciting!" Shubhi expressed as she entered the garden area with Panchi.

"I don't know. It does look eerie. Its surprisingly quiet. But then considering the fact that we are in the outskirts of the city, it is not something very strange." Panchi replied to her when they split to explore the area. Shubhi went in the demolished structures of the setting, Panchi was looking in the garden area and Paarth was not around.

Paarth was behind both of them because he came across a ruby studded bracelet and he presumed it to be Panchi's. He was amazed by its shine. Even in the dark, the rubies looked mesmerizing.

He then went to Panchi who was waiting for him and said, "Look! What I got you?"

Panchi examined the thing and then replied, "Its not mine. I don't really wear such flashy ones. You thought it was mine? That is so stupid. Am I not stuck with a stupid but smart guy?"

Paarth pulled her closer and said, "This stupid guy is not just smart, he is patient and chained. Patient for you to reply to his passion and chained in love. Now you decide?"

"This is not our closed room!" She replied as she look away, completely ignoring his words.

"Okay! Where is Shubhi then?" He asked disinterestedly.

She turned and pointed towards the fortress. "There!"

And as she did so, the building broke down. The ruins, themselves came down as the leftover structure demolished into fragments of rocks and arose a cloud of debris.

Paarth and Panchi were blinded by dust and hugged each. In the most difficult situations, they sought each others help. All this was too fast for them to react but when the wave of debris cleared they ran towards the ruins to look for Shubhi though with a fear in their hearts.

While, this happened with the three, Govind, who was on his way back home, sensed something wrong and took a left turn which connected the route to the castle.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago