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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Oh God! This was breathtaking! The way you started with the amusing convo. and ended in the supposed tragedy is absolutely wonderful!And the teaser was so beautiful! I could see everything in from of my eyes! You have a very nice sense of beauty filled with suspense!

Thanks a lot dear.

Let's hope you find the upcoming updates fun.

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: aanvi98
OMG angie di!! Maar dala suspense se!!! This was amazing!!! loved the way how u started with a hillarious convo and ended with a big suspense!!!Now plz don't stop here!!! Otherwise i will surely have a heart attack!!!! OMG did u killed subhi??? nehiii!!! I can't see this happy family breaking!!! Uff!! Why there are so many secrets!!!

Killed? Hmmm... Let's see. 😆

Happy Family breaking? No idea. 😆

All will be revealed in right time.

Thanks. 😛

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
I know Angie I am quite late to comment but finally read both the chappies at one go.
OMG what amazing chapters 👏 & last one ⭐️ was...like Shubhi's intuition did got right at the end...she is stuck there 😲
And the mystry teaser 😛...wow
Now update the next part soon 😳

Thanks . 😊

As it is I am updating after a long time. 😆

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 55 : Onset of a Journey

It is often claimed that when we lose someone, we lose a sphere of life. This was felt by all. In some or the other way, losing Shubhi in the tragedy had severely affected everyone but there was more it the story then the outlay which was presented to all of them.

While time quickly flew after Shubhi's said demise, it proposed new problems. It seemed that the Atlantics were running out of funds. Paarth, Panchi, Nakul and Sahdev had suffered severely on educational front for they could not attend the university for long.

The quest had, in a way, hindered every life to reduce it to a crippled state which gave endless sorrows and few moments of happiness. The same was observed by Dhrishtradyumna. He had observed that he had, till a large extent neglected his profession and this proposed some financial issues.

One night, while discussing about these problems, Govind along with Vasusen and Vrushali had mentioned, "That there was urgent need to balance the disturbed spheres of life".

It can be guess easily that the household had a strong say in every issue, but Vasusen and Vrushali, who thought of Govind to be highly intellectual, usually flocked together to consider his advice.

It was soon resolved (after discussing with all) that all will be spreading out to different sectors than flocking together under one roof. This would cause some problem in the quest, but ultimately the quest was risky and did not guarantee any success, most of them (being practical) did not want to risk staking their social and personal life for it.

Among these, Nakul and Sahdev were the first ones to agree. They strongly felt that their has suffered a lot due to the quest and its heat was now affecting the dreams of a strong future. Dhrishtradyumna too, was convinced and supported. While, Yudhishtir and Bheem felt that to struggle was the best, they still agreed that they had suffered heavily on financial terms and it was now affecting them. These concerns were strongly supported by the trio of Govind, Vasusen and Vrushali.

It must be observed that while everyone was busy in discussing the affects of it, Paarth and Panchi was surprised at the sudden twist of events. They were astonished that how their lives had turned into something like a dramatic play of Shakespeare where people with bad intention, fate, tragedy and emotions play their part of destroy the lives of the protagonist.

Here, it must be noted that Paarth was worried for safety of Panchi and his family. Post Shubhi's demise, he was badly struck with a gut feeling that he might lose someone close to him again. But being strong, as he was, he resisted his feeling from being expressed for he felt they would unnecessarily disturb the already tensed member of the family.

Panchi was in low spirits. She felt that she had lost a lot by losing Shubhi. Family member, friend, helper, a strong supporter but above all a sister. She could not deny that she had known Shubhi since long (since teenage precisely) and had really strong bond with her. And sudden twist in her life just took away it all. But, luckily for her, she had Paarth, who was supporting her in all the thick and thin.

To throw some light on the final decisions, it was decided that Paarth, Nakul and Shadev will move to Bristol for advancing with higher studies while Yudhishtir and Bheem will move back to India and make sure they handle the company (which provided manufacturing services) to look after it while Vasusen will come to visit occasionally for important meetings. Other than that, Dhrishtradyumna was going with Panchi to Brimingham to work in the sector where his skill would be valued. That, would leave Govind, Vasusen and Vrushali in London.

It should be noted still, that the quest would still continue as all of them will continue to work in spite of tiring distance and discuss about it over calls, video chats and chats.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 56 : Changes

The plan was soon put into action and within the time period of a month, they were all settled in their respective locations. It thus, was now a matter of smart planning that the quest had to continue by long-distance chats.

I would take the first opportunity to describe the place of the Panchal siblings who had settled in Birmingham.

As it can be guessed, Dhrishtradyumna had used his savings to give the best place which could easily accommodate to the lifestyle of his sister and of himself. It was well furnished, set in the urban region of the city Birmingham. It is widely known that the city counts to be one of the largest in the country and it thus added up to their pride in living there.

Panchi had soon joined a university where she could work to get this degree with ease and she was excelling in the classes already. It was not tough for Dhristradyumna, given that the skills he had, to get a good place which offered him a fairly nice package which was enough to accommodate their expenses of daily life and that of the quest.

Here, it should be remember that Panchi was deeply affected when she moved away from Paarth. It was tough but the understanding the two shared had paved easy way for them to decide mutually that they had their priorities.

Next, I take turn to describe the dwellings of Paarth, Nakul and Sahdev in the city of Bristol. They soon had found a great house where they could live with ease and thus, got back to extensive working form the semester of their new university. To add up, Sahdev had developed new cooking skill which helped all of them to live with much greater ease.

Paarth had found it a bit difficult to concentrate on other things because he used to wait intently for messages and calls by his 'someone' because they could not meet. It was only a matter of few, after which, late night calls had helped them balance all easily.

In India, Delhi precisely, Yudhishtir and Bheem took charge of a fractured system of the company. The employees worked with terribly slow speed and the orders were very often late the company had lost its market reputation and it was getting tough of them to see such a condition.

They were thus working hard enough to restructure the system and help the company get back on its knees. Corrupt employees were expelled and new were hired. But they soon observed that some employees were involved in malicious tasks and it seemed like they were sent by someone. Instant guess Duryodhan and this team but it was soon settled that these employees will be kept under strict surveillance so that the true culprit could be reached.

In London, all was settled back into the daily rush of wuwst activities. Govind spent long hours searching though books and ancient texts and connecting dots with care to build a strategy. He, it seemed was also with with another task, of which none knew. Vasusen and Vrushali too were working hard but they were shocked at Govind's speedy recovery post Shubhi's death. They had expected him to feel strong for his sister but Govind seemed to have moved on after a month she had passed. Nevertheless, it made them feel happy for him.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 9 years ago