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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part😊
update soon nd a big one😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poor Kria!

She had so much to go through. Her Mom murdered, bad relationships with Dad... this surely equals to a messed up life!

Not that I'm complaining. I know Rey will rescue her outta that 😉

He he he... Neha is always the bubbly girl around...

I dunno but I have an intuition... Is Rey gonna enter?

Ooo! QUES T HIRST!

I am not a wattpad reader, but I find the concept interesting.

Very interesting. 😆

So here are my questions-

1. Is Rey entering now?

2. Why exactly does Kria share an unhealthy relationship with her father? Something negative or just hatred?

3. Who is the person who grabs kria or whatever ( I don't remember what exactly happened 😆) ?

4. Was her Mom mysteriously murdered in real?

I know too many questions 😆

But you need to answer them!

So your time starts...

NOW!!!


P.S Make an index. It will help your readers to find your important posts.


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*Edited*

Had one more question.

5. When will you give us a larger update? Perhaps the next one? 😛
Edited by ..Evanescent.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ..Evanescent..

Poor Kria!


She had so much to go through. Her Mom murdered, bad relationships with Dad... this surely equals to a messed up life!

Not that I'm complaining. I know Rey will rescue her outta that 😉

He he he... Neha is always the bubbly girl around...

I dunno but I have an intuition... Is Rey gonna enter?

Ooo! QUES T HIRST!

I am not a wattpad reader, but I find the concept interesting.

Very interesting. 😆

So here are my questions-

1. Is Rey entering now?

2. Why exactly does Kria share an unhealthy relationship with her father? Something negative or just hatred?

3. Who is the person who grabs kria or whatever ( I don't remember what exactly happened 😆) ?

4. Was her Mom mysteriously murdered in real?

I know too many questions 😆

But you need to answer them!

So your time starts...

NOW!!!


P.S Make an index. It will help your readers to find your important posts.


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*Edited*

Had one more question.

5. When will you give us a larger update? Perhaps the next one? 😛


Thanxx for reading and liking it. 🤗

and now the answers:
1.Yes, Rey is gonna enter in 2nd or 3rd chapter😃

2.You will know about it soon in the story.😉

3.Wait for the next chapter😆.

4.Even I don't know😳. I'm thinking of adding a twist to mom's murder story soon😆

5.Why not ? I'll surely give a larger update next time. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Amazing update plz update next part and my question is Rey is gangster in this ff?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept...

Awesome update... woo that is indeed a cliff hanger...

I guess the guy who pulled her is Rey nly...

Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Guys m back !! I'm sorry for being late, it's actually my 10th so I hardly ever get time but I promise i'll put up with my FFs. Luv uhhh guyzzz. Peace Out Suckerzz!
And For people with f**ked up memory like me---

A RECAP!! - Kria was waiting outside school after their last period. Neha had some doubts that she had to solve so kria had to wait. She was casually walking around when she came across a gap between two wall. That gap could easily fit a person in it. It looked like there was something inside it. Curious Kria was about to enter it when some one grabbed her shoulders and ---

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She was about to enter when someone grabbed her shoulder. Frustrated Kria turned around only to see a furious Neha's face.

"What on earth do you think you're doing ?"Neha half'yelled.

"Well I was about to go somewhere until you creeped in like Sherlock Holmes!" Kria retorted.

"You're the one acting like Sherlock Holmes ! Entering weird unknown places"

"Well, agar tumne mujhe iss jagah bare mein pehale information di hoti toh yeh 'weird unknow place' na hoti"

"Ughhh, forget it. Ab chalo yaha se"

"Wait, what ? Mujhe vaha jaana hai. Waise yeh place hai kya ?"

"I don't think you'll give up until I tell you." Neha sighed. Kria nodded in negation with a mischievous smile.

"Fine !" Neha sighed again while Kria clapped her hands happily. "So basically-" Neha started"hum Toronto ke jis area mein rehete hai...Let's just say it's not the safest of all. Yaha pe gangs, guns, drugs, alcohol, smuggling, kidnapping etc. bohot hote hai. And this place- " she said pointing towards the gap"Is known to be one of most dangerous gang's point. Bohot logo ne unhe yaha aate jaate dekha hai and tum dar na jao issiliye maine tumhe iske bare mein pehele nahi bataya." Kria was awestruck !

"Gangs and all ? Par yeh toh school premises hai, yaha gang ka adda ?"She said giving a confused look.

"Arre agar school ke students hi gang mein ho toh adde ki kya baat?" Kria gasped at this. "Yes-" Neha continued "Iss gang ke members humare school ke so-called-students hai"

"Wait, par school attend kare mujhe bohot din ho gaye hai. I didn't feel any terror in the air."

"Woh kyuki ye gang people kahin gaye hai. Sab keh rahe the ki koi secret gang mission types hai. Anyway, Ab agar tumhe sab pata chal gaya hai, please promise me ki tum waha nahi jaogi."

Kria's POV.

"Anyway, Ab agar tumhe sab pata chal gaya hai, please promise me ki tum waha nahi jaogi."
Neha asked me.

"Okay baba, promise" well sure, I said promise but sometimes I tend to break them. Yes, You heard me right, I was going to break into their so called 'Adda'. That place got me curious and I need to feed my curiosity with some reality !

---------------------------------One Week Later-------------------------------

' Ohhh god!! This neha ! I think she does that telepathy thing. It's as if she read my thoughts about breaking into gang spot. She's been dropping me home for a week in order to keep me away from the spot. But today might be different, I heard a guy named Aaron asked her out. If she goes on a date with him today, I might be able to sneak in the spot'. I was thinking all this until Neha herself disturbed me "Guess what ??" She squealed.

"I know I know. tum Aaron ke sath date pe ja rahi ho." I responded with straight face.

"Aww I wanted to give you a surprise." Neha pouted. "well anyway, mein yaha ye batane ayi this ki aaj Aaron mujhe ghar drop kar raha hai so..."

"Don't worry I'll go home on my own. Mein 5 saal ki bacchi nahi hoon" I said smiling.

Neha giggled. She was about to say something when Aaron showed up with his amazing black car. I signaled her to go as she gave me quick hug hopping into his car. I just smiled and waved her goodbye while she did the same.

That was my chance! Neha was gone, school was over, anyone who knew me was out of sight and people who were in sight didn't give a f**k about me and vice versa.
I casually walked towards the spot and stood there with my cellphone in my hand so I don't look like a loner. I took a look around quickly to see if anyone was in sight and swiftly slid in the gap, the gap seemed to continue the same dirty looking road with bumpy floor. I cursed myself for wearing this outfit which includes pink high heels and a pink floral dress which ends just about my knees. I stopped walking when i saw a red door. 'Who on earth paints a door red ?' I thought. There was a trash can just beside the door and a broken sofa in front of it. The wall ended just beside trashcan.
I was observing things when I heard something from inside the door. I quickly ran and hid beside the trash can. Uggh the heels made their usual clicking sound while running resulting in someone to open the door from inside and come out. I couldn't see their face but i saw the shadow. Great, Now I'm gonna be dead! Some gang member is standing almost beside me where a f**king trashcan is saving my life so I won't get killed. I just sat their praying the person would be dumb enough not to check behind the trashcan.
'Thud!' with that sound the door closed and shadow disappeared too!! Finally, god granted my one wish. i got up my feet slowly and ...ran for my life!!! And in case of emergency i always forget what i'm wearing, so i fell on my butt with these f**king heels !! I could hear someone open the same door.
Without thinking about anything else I took the heels in my hand and ran for my life...again ! After like running a f**king million miles I stopped to breath. I realized i was just near my house. It was weird because nobody from the gang spot followed me. The second I removed my heels and started running I knew that nobody was following me I just didn't want to take any chances.
With this horrifying day and equally horrifying experience I went home, hoping that tomorrow will be cool and calm as usual.


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I'm not giving a precap or something but here's a hint : Tomorrow's not going to be cool and calm as usual!

Edited by LuvArsha4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yayy! You updated!

Hawww!

I thought that person was Rey

Koi nahi, Neha se hi kaam chala lenge 😆

He he he, Kria is just like me 😆

Why do I have an intuition (again) that Rey is a gang member? Ho bhi sakta hai ki Rey ne Kria ko dekh liya ho

Oho! Neha going on a date with Aaron! Vicky ka kya hua? 😉

This was a longer update than usual. Congratulations!

But, as a book worm I am, I want another update 😛

Update soon!

And bring Rey in that update 😆


Parigya :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc update
Curious abt new thing and to knw abt everything sometym make trouble hahahaha
Bt awsome update
Protective neha
Update next part soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm a f**king horrible person. I know, I know, I haven't updated since 4ever and my other FF is still on hold but Hey ! i'm here now. And I have this f**king Crazy idea in my mind for this FF. But that part of story is yet to come so i'm gonna hang u in the suspense. Peace Out Suckerzzz!!!

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Yesterdays day was interesting for both Kria and Neha. Neha went on a date with Aaron and as for Kria...We all know what happened. This was another day at school, just like any other day...well, atleast it seemed to be.

Neha was telling every single minor, teenie, tiny detail about her date. Kria was quite bored, to be honest. After talking about Aaron for like all the way to school she finally shut up at the lockers. Kria was searching something in the locker when the whole hallway became dead silent. She looked at Neha with confused expression. When she was about to turn back Neha almost banged her face in the locker. Well, not exactly banged but shoved it in as if she was trying to hide Kria from someone.

After like it seemed forever she pulled Kria out. Kria's expressions were a mixture of what the f**k, confusion and i-almost-died-in-there.

"What the hell was that for??" Kria whined. "Arre remember woh gang, jiske baare mein maine tumhe bataya tha ? Uhh...Woh..they came back." She stuttered. "Par tumne mera face kyu chupaya ? Wanted wo log hai, mein nahi! " Kria said sarcastically. "Well, they kind of like frest meat. Newbies ki ragging is like their religion and upar se you don't even have a boyfriend." Neha said worriedly. "Boyfriend? Uski kya zaroorat hai ? Mein khud ka dhyaan khud rakh sakti hoon. Unlike you !" Kria retorted. "Well boyfriend se yaad aya...Me and Aaron..." Neha started. "Not again Nehaa !!!" Kria said dramatically covering her ears while going to her next class.


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The school was over and as usual Neha and Kria were walking out. A familier car honk hit their ears and a familier face known as Aaron popped up. Neha face lit up instantly with big smile. She gave kria a please-please-please look. Kria just nodded indicating that she could go with Aaron. Kria waved Neha goodbye as she gave Aaron a quick peck on lips.

Kria started walking on the oh-so-boring same grey shaded road. She was walking as usual when she came across the freaky gang point again. But this time she just took a quick glance and continued walking forward realizing she was wearing the same f**king heels but a different long pink top which ended at her mid thigh and a floral cream colored legging which ended just below her knee. She kept walking but then she noticed something...

(Kria's POV)

I kept walking but then I noticed something...A black van.(A/N: You know what's coming😉) I had seen it before, in front of the school. Wait, had it been following me ? It must have because i got pretty lost in my thoughts, i might have not noticed. I decided not to turn back as it will give them a clear message that i saw them. I slowly removed my One Direction bracelet (A/N: Yes, I'm a Directioner😆) and dropped it on the floor. I took a few steps ahead and acted as if I had realized the missing bracelet. I casually turned around and took a quick glance at the van before picking up my ''missing'' bracelet. To my dismay, i culdn't see through the van's windows. Before I could turn around, the van quickly sped up and drove past me at the speed of f**king train. Weird. I shrugged the thought of oh-my-god-a-van-is-following-me and kept walking.

But then again, the van stopped around the corner. Thoughts made a grand entry again, I decided to avoid any contact with van and just quickly walked by it quickening my pace.
Just as I thought I had passed the vans and my fears a hand came from behind circling my waist. At the same time another hand covered my mouth. I was being dragged away by a stranger, scratch that, a well-built stranger, no matter how much i tried i couldn't get out of his grip. He brought me over to the black van whose back was open now. He took the white cloth which was kept beside a weird bottle and brought it closer to my face. I instantly got what it was, Chloroform !!! I started shaking my head vigorously in order to dodge the cloth but somehow he placed it on my mouth. I held on to my breath... "Breath, love. Breath" he said. I still kept holding on. After a while i gave up. "Good girl." was all I heard before the darkness swallowed me.

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😭Sorry for short update😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update😊
bt Kriya is kidnapped😲
update soon

Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 10 years ago

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