Guns, Bullets And Hatred: KR FF - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Wdh...u & ur suspenses...
k coming 2 update cool
Sharon cool...she is a sweatheart...
poor kriya lol...luv her reaction after d kidnapper's confession lol...
luv convo between kidnapper & kriya
i hope it is rey
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Its so interesting. Can't wait for the bext part. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
finish read all in together wow it full on hidden mysteries and reveal in front the truth...
that why she been got in my the gangs and not to fight up...
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Great update😊
Sharon is pretty much sweet to be a gangstars's friends😆
I love the way u write Kriya's POV...its fun to read😊
n the guy undoubtedly n hopefully is Rey...bt still I doubt😆
update soon n pls pls pls pls pls a long one😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: LuvArsha4ever


Dictioner ? I hope That's a spelling mistake cuz it really sounds like something a s**t wud say.
Dic-tioner...get it ??😉

sorry m just as lame as u...or maybe even lamer, if that word exists.😛

N m working on the long update part, don't worry.😃


You just made me realize how bad I can be at spellings 😆

And don't you worry, I seem to have a catch for lame people 🤣 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Yaay!!

You updated!

And well congratulations!

It was a teeny-weeny bit bigger than the last update 😛

Now that leader has to be Rey.

Like totally.

Uh-huh! I just love these rough guys. And when I imagine KAS as Rey, its like... 😳

Ohkay! Sharon entered!

Is this Rey a Casanova or what? 😕

Or maybe he just speaks this way? 😕

Aggressive Romance!!

Hayye!

😳

He kidnapped her because he liked her?

Kria itni zyaada pasand aa gayi toh showcase mein hi rakh leta 😆

Sorry for that, I know it was way too lame 😳 😛

Now there is a party?!

My reaction is really very similar to Kria's. He f**king kidnapped her because he wanted to attend a party with her? 😲

No na? 😉

Gimme my answers quick with your next update!

Would be waiting!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Hey i'm back. Sorry for not updating for so long. I tried updating but IF removed my posts.TWICE !!
So here I am. Peace out Suckerzz!!

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Kria's POV,


So let's just sum up my life real quick. I moved in a new town, got kidnapped, made friends with the friend of kidnapper, saw my mother f**king kidnapper, thought he looked hot, and now I'm going to a party with him. Could my life BE any more f**ked up ??

Just as I was thinking about this bullshit AKA my life, Sharon walked it. She came near the bed and started undoing the handcuffs.

"So how was it ?" She asked.

"Kya?" I replied with confused expression.

"Meeting Rey."

"Accha, toh uss creep ka naam Rey hai."

Sharon giggled slightly and said,"Yes, and anyway ab tumhe ready ho jana chahiye."
I looked down at my dress while rubbing my now freed sore wrists.

"Aise?" I asked, still looking at my attire.

"Oh, don't worry, Rey ne kuch dresses rakhe hai tumhare liye. and ha, usne kaha ki he will glad if you wear the dress on left corner of closet."

"Ok." I replied moving towards the close.

The closet was pretty big. It had 3-4 black party dresses and rest of it was all lingerie. I swear it didn't look comfy at all. I took out the dress on left corner as Sharon said -


"Holy mother of god. What the f**k is this ?" I exclaimed on the sight of the super-s**tty dress.

"Kya hua ?" Sharon rushed towards me. She looked at the dress and chuckled.

"Sharon ! Tumhe hasi aa rahi hai? Look at this dress! It's so damn s**tty."

"Sorry sorry. I laughed because it's just...Typical Rey."

"Uss typical jerkface Rey ko bolo ki mai yeh 'Call Girl Clothing Collection' nahi pehenne wali"

"Usne compulsary nahi bola hai. Tum kuch aur bhi pehen sakti ho."She said and went back to making the bed.

I went through all the dresses but they were all the same. Black, over exposing, s**tty types.

"Ughh" i groaned in frustration.
"Kya huaaa ??" Sharon asked in equally annoyed tone.

"Yeh dresses toh ek dusre ki carbon copy hai- s**tty. I don't wanna look like a Bad Prostitute Version of Victoria's Secret Angel."

She laughed at my comment. "wait I'll come back and see what I can do."She said and left the room. After 5 mins she came back with another black dress-


"I know it's not the best but it is the least s**tty I could find." She sighed.

"At least it's better that those shitbricks." I Said with a smile.

After giving me a make-up kit she left the room. I got the dress on and braided my hair.-


I grabbed the door knob but it wouldn't turn. I tried again not banging on the door hoping Sharon would open. To my dismay, the tattooed jerk face AKA Rey opened the door. I gasped as I was expecting Sharon.

I took a step back. He eyed me from head to toe in a creepy stalker-ish way. He smirked for some unknown reason. I kept looking down not wanting to meet his eyes. He took a step forward and closed the door behind him. I think it would be ok if I said I was officially freaked out !

He kept coming forward and I kept going back. He kept inching forward. Finally my back hit the wall. His oh so perfect smirk formed on his lips again. I quietly tried to slide away from him but he kept his both hands beside my shoulders hovering over me. He kept coming closer.
I shut my eyes tightly hoping that he would go away. But the nightmare never seemed to end. I tried pushing him with my tiny hands. I kept hitting his chest in defense but he just chuckled, proving my efforts useless. He grabbed my both wrists with his one hand and pinned them over my head.

I felt like disappearing into thin air. Not wanting to face what was about to come. Just as I thought it couldn't get any worse, he started sliding his hands up and down my bare thigh (Thanks to the s**tty dress !) I whimpered under his touch. He took the hand all the way up to my shoulder. He started tracing circles on my neck, as if he was writing something with his fingers. I didn't open my eyes one bit, if possible I just closed them even tighter.

I couldn't quiet figure out what he was tracing. After that he slowly went to my hair not leaving contact of my skin once and did something which I never expected. He just took the band off and let my hair fall free. I opened my eyes in surprise only to look into his brown ones. Still pinning my hands up, he came closer and whispered into my ear,"Now you're ready to go."

Giving me a wink, he walked away, leaving me with a still unsolved mystery-HIM.


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Heyya, that's it for now. Sorry for updating late. Byeee. Peace out Suckerzzz !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome update😊
but I've complaints abt the length
Edited by KriYaansh-ArSha - 10 years ago

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