Journey of Abhilasha---A LRL FF - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

mind blowing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulously written ----- Thank you,
Continue soon ------ Will ud in about 2 hour
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gargy4u

AWSM DEAR..UPDT SOON

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

Hi Hello to you too

the up is superb and touchy Yeah...I wanted it to be touchy. Glad you liked it.
the dairy words is worthy and emotional too Raj Naina Love story is so sad that it is so easy to emotional scene 😭😭😭
me loved it Glad you liked it
plz cont soon and pm me Will do and you keep reading and enjoying
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Posted: 9 years ago

Asha walked into Priyanka's Cabin and found Shaad and Pri in some deep conversation.

Asha: "Di, kya baat karna chati thi?" (What did you want to talk about di?)

Priyanka looks up to see Asha at the door and motioned with her hands for Asha to enter.

Asha came in and sat down.

Asha: "Di baat kya hai? Aap dono parishaan lag rahay hai?" (Di is everything ok? You both look worried)

Priyanka: "Baat hi aisi hain" (It is a matter of worry)

Asha: "Kyu?"

Shaad: "Wo Naina Aunty ki case kay baray mein kuch pata chala hai" (We found out something about Naina Aunt's case)

Asha got really serious.

Asha: "Kya?"

Shaad: "Jo files aap ne hum mein diya thay unse yeah pata chala hain ki..." (From the file you had given me, I found out that...)

Before he could finish the ceiling speaker came off and through it Bhargav asked all 1st year cadets to report to the field immediately.

Asha: "Aab issay kya chayea" (What does he want now?)

Pri: "Tum dono abhi jaao, hum baad mein baat kartay hain"

*************At the Field************

Bhargav: "Attention cadets, mujhe khabar mili hai ki KMA mein koi jhoot bol kar aaya hai, aur mujhe jhoot se shakt nafrat hai." (Attention Cadets, I recived information that someone has entered KMA by lying and I hate liars).

He looked directly at Asha and gave an evil smile.

Vijay in a whisper to Abhijeet: "Ab yeah kya karna wala hain" (What is he going to do now?)

Bhargav: "Cadet Huda"

Vijay: "Yes sir"

Bhargav: "Step forward"

Vijay salutes and move forward.

Bhargav: "Jaisa baap, waisay beeta. No respect, No discipline" (Like father, like son. No respect, No discipline)

Vijay: "EXCUSE ME"

Bhargav: "Aawez nichay. Aapne senior ka saath baat karna ka koi tameez nahi hai" (Lower your voice. You have no manners in speaking with your senior)

Vijay: "Magar"

Bhargav: "Cadet, speak only when you are asked to"

Vijay: "Sorry sir"

Bhargav: "Step back"

Bhargav: "Yaha kay cadets ko discipline ki shakt zarurat hai, aur waisay bhi ko cadets, Abhimanyu kay under ho, un say expect bhi kya kar shaktay hai" (The Cadets here are so indiscipline, anyways what else can be expected from Abhimanyu's Cadets)

This statement of Bhargav made Asha angry.

Asha: "Excuse me sir, do I have permission to speak"

Bhargav gave a strange look and nodded in positive.

Asha: "Thank you sir. Sir aapne abhi abhi jo Cadet Vijay ko samjaya, woh app ne follow nahi kar rahay hain" (Thank you sir. Sir, you yourself are not following what you just told Vijay)

Bhargav: "Kya matlab?"

Asha: "Sir you just told Cadet Vijay to show respect their seniors while talking to them, but you are not doing that yourself. Mein samaj Shakti hoo ki woh ek time par aap kay students thay, ek time par woh app kay orders follow karthay thay, magar aab roles switch ho gaya hai. Ek time par aap un ka senior thay, magar ab who aap kay senior hai. I know aap ko muskil hogi unkay saam ne ser jhukakar unki salut karna, magar kya karay woh aap kay senior hai, aur aap ne abhi kaha ki senior ko respect..." (Sir you just told Cadet Vijay to show respect their seniors while talking to them, but you are not doing that yourself. I can understand that at one point he was your student, at a time he would follow your orders, but now the roles have switched. At one time you were his senior, but now he is your senior. I know it must be hard for you to lower your head and salute him, but what to do he is your senior, and like you just said we have to respect our seniors)

Asha gave a victorious smile after her speech, and looked at Bhargav, who seemed to look as if all the blood drained from his face.

Asha: "Right sir?"

Bhargav composing himself said: "Aap ki zuban bohot teez hai, BILKUL AAP NE MAA KI TARA" (you are quiet smart mouthed, just like your mother)

^^^^^^^^^I know guys it was an extremely short chapter, but I am planning a big surprise the next chapter so stay tuned.

Precap: "Father Daughter meet"

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii
I am too excited for father -daughter meet!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ntc update
Bt waiting 4 nxt update
Plz do it soon dear
Father daughter meet
Dam excited about it

Luv millee 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Update Dear...
I read three chapters in one go and they are totally mind blowing
Please Update soon
I am eager for Father Daughter meeting...

And Than you so much For PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
the up is really good
waiting for the Father-Daughter meeting which will be the most awaiting part for us
plz cont soon and pm me

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