T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi there!
Alright. This one's for both Chapters 23 and 24.

You say this is a slow story, the slowest story in the world but I wouldn't have it any other way. Because any other way would ruin the magic you manage to create, would ruin the peaceful bubble I sit inside while reading the story. You touch hearts because you give us glimpse of everybody's minds. My favourites are Manorama and Subhadra Devi. They've both been through their shares of loss and grief but to see them holding it together for the sake of their children, looking at the future that Arnav and Khushi can't see yet and helping them move towards that future, makes me marvel at the keen sense of perception that our elders have.

Chapter 23 tips high on the 'Chemistry' meter. But this-


His eyes were windows into his soul, she always believed that. She could see all the way into his. Or was it hers? She noticed his lashes, enviably thick and long that framed his caramel orbs. They were an odd mixture of honey and burnt ochroid. But it was that Cupid's bow on his upper lip that tempted her, offering glimpses of suppressed sensuality... Her heart skipped a beat. Her eyes went back to his, as if to corroborate what was awakening in her. They were speaking to her, receiving, spilling secrets and inviting, an invitation she could not decline.


This in many ways was more breathtaking and sensual than everything else that happened. I don't know how you do it, Mira. I just don't. Nothing that happened felt merely physical.


I would have been sad had you not posted Chapter 24 because the 5 second gap between moving from Chapter 23 to 24 had me in a mess. What happened after that night? What did Khushi decide? Why is Mirabell doing this to us?


But Chapter 24 held a stronger ray of hope than ever. There are questions still unanswered. But to see Khushi reaching out for Arnav, to see her letting him in into what she believes is her dark world, makes me sigh in relief for her. She needed that.


Honestly I wish this story never ends. I wish I could come back every week and read a little more about their lives. Because there are moments I can relate to and things I can learn from and people I've begun to love and admire.


Someday you will finish this, as you promised, and it'll be a bittersweet moment but I'm glad you put it on here, on this forum, on a blog, where I can go back and relive the story again.


:)


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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chappy
nani is such a sweet heart
arshi relation is progressing slow but well
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Posted: 10 years ago
A child can voice out her thoughts easily with out any fear, like our little Meera said that she don't want to leave. She want to stay, she want to stay with ASR. Which Khushi couldn't say openly... But she is coming around... She is not reluctant to touch or give a peck to her Arnav now...Arnav can't control his feelings now when she is around... No need to be either... He had waited for this for so long, he need to be happy with his Khushi...
Nani Ma is such an intelligent woman on earth...made Khushi to open the box to spill out some beans...I'm still wondering why Arnav left her years before? It's killing to know... But the update was enough to fill my heart now...
Sweet update...loved the last scene between Arnav and Khushi... Waiting to know what more will happen inside the room... I enjoy greatly when they are together as a happy couple.

Hope you will have a great time with your family...
Wishing the days to vanish soon to reach the 10th July for the next update!

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Posted: 10 years ago
that was so emotional mira but still it was special and beautiful. if only khushi was there to witness the whole moment between arnav and little meera, if she only saw how that angel craves to have a father figure in her lfe, to teach her things that only a dad teaches his daughter but i think she has finally accepetd that there cant be no future happiness for her without arnav by her side.

arnav is an outstanding human being, i like the way he handled the delicate situation with meera with so much tact and love. i may not be sure wats reserved for arnav and khushi for the future but one thing is for sure even if arnav becomes meera's papa one day he ll make sure not to take her appa place, he knows the importance of nk in her life. n i bet if nk had to chose someone to care for his famliy after his departure without any doubt it would have been arnav. arnav cares for them as a family, his love is not only limited to khushi.

indeed sumitra raziada is one very wise old lady who just wants the happiness of her children. i like her little talk with khushi in the kitchen.

poor khushi she must have a sense of deja vue seeing manorama so weak but not every case is the same and with arnav around he ll make sure he does his best to keep manorama here for her khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome! loved it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful beautiful update
tahnks for pm x
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Posted: 10 years ago
As always I loved this update...😊
It had all the emotions...
Mohan is such an innocent child...He knows that his father can fix Mira...
I loved the part of Arnav n Khushi also...
To sum up the update was superb...
I hope we ll get a teaser before the next update...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Hope der smiles stay der frevr..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabolous update khusi n arnav both deserve second chance n they are taking steps forward n meera she already considers arnav like a father figure
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update !!! MB...
I really look forward to this story and its updates... And was happy with your promise of completion... U have really built the intrigue regarding the past...and its killing...although I am sure it will be worth the wait...

Whenever Arshi come together it just makes my heart beat fast...u r so good with those intimate moments... I have trouble believing u r a first time writer...loved the way they were both happy in the morning... It was so light n happy ...and also the way Arnav handled the situation calmly and effectively with Manorama...and the way he sought Khushi and comforted her ...it was so touching..

Amazing, beautiful, riveting writing... Pls update asap!!!

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