T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148

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rainyday3000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Aww...absolutely a beautiful update...LOVED IT!!! :)

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cocoamob

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

I am sucker for children and I love Mohan and Meera in your story and cant get enough of them. The way Khushi calms Mohan down is just so touching and he responds to her! I cannot imagine how this would have affected Arnav, who knows his son so well and this would have been so difficult otherwise. And Meera forgets her own pain and hurt in seeing Mohan's reaction!

They are slowly getting more secure in their feelings for each other and you are building that up so beautifully. It is harder for Khushi with her feelings of loss and guilt. Lavanya, as always is the best friend a girl can have and gives Khushi just the right amount of gentle pushing the Khushi needs.

Great timing for a cliffhanger :-) But the update is coming soon and so it will be worth it!

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MDTharun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Meera and Mohan have become good friends , did not expect the little girl to help Mohan bandage forgetting her pain . Only a child can think so selflessly , at this point Meera more resembled like khushi . Both the kids are bonding strongly .

Arnav is very much willing to grab the second chance , but for khushi she is hesitating , though the second chance is tempting she doesn't want to wander into the forbidden territory .

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

This was amazing...!!!!!!
i love lavanya and her witty comments..!!
w8ng for next..!

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Onlooker

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

I am liking these baby steps they are taking..

Meera is a big girl..Mohan can surely look up to her..She is so brave not to cry or wail out.

Lav surely giving the right nudges..;) And the awkwardness with her amma tells her story..

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afsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

I hope sab kuch acha ho

La is so cool

I jus love her

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Mayvs2013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Great work...

liked Kushi as parents there concern for their kids can be seen clearly...

somewhere i felt more than Kushi, Arnav needs Kushi more as he is hiding all his pain inside

lets see what happens next...

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Updated Page 75

Mira, today i will tell you that this story is so close to the real life story of one of my very close friend and so every update is close to heart.

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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ipkviewer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

I'm loving this your story very much Mira for bringing into fore the complicated aspects in life that not everyone would encounter, but depicting those turmoils, pain and uncertainty that will be endured by those who do so well.

Looking forward to their journey turning to a wishful side thru magic writing of yours.

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Sobhan006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#530

Really good update! Khushi is in a very confused state as she is thinking whatever is happening between them will be a good memories for her once she's gone back to her place... Arnav clearly says that he is all hers and will wait for her ever...

Loved the swing scene... Mesmerising!

Meera is one such matured child... Glad that Mohan listens to Khushi, she will be a good mum to him...

Still I'm waiting to know why Arnav didn't come back to her ten years ago...why did they parted? Why Khushi didn't wait for him?