Hi I really don't know how to describe this story.
Every update is so touching with all the little moments.
I am loving this story generally I leave long comments for something amazing but this is beyond Amazing.
Somehow I feel at loss of words to describe this story.
I love the names of the kids and place you chose for both these lovers to come together.
Khushi and Arnav have a lot more going on other than being lonely in this journey.
Arnav is such an adorable man and any woman would be happy to have him in her life.
You rarely find such loving compassionate guy who is so nice and warm towards his ex-wife and taking care of his son without a single complaint or self pity which people generally do when they are saddled with problems. The only thing he cares for his son to lead a better life.
Not to imagine the depth of feelings he has for khushi when they had been together only for a week unlike guys who forget and move on he has kept her in his heart which was clear when he went to visit her inUS. Even now he can't seem to see khushi in any pain the thought he put into arranging every little thing for her stay since she has landed in India. The way he cares for meera and even Nk's mom.
Khushi however I wonder seeing how her appearance was during college times se
seemed to be a traditional girl but had her share of fun in fact from what la said today she was totally carefree may be Arnav was someone whom she felt deeply connected to and thought they could never be so she did all she can to treasure the time she has with him
Which brings me back as to why did she think that way.
why did khushi not see a future with Arnav but was ok with nk.
These 2 questions are important to understand khushi and where she's coming from.
Also now that she has a chance to embrace happiness why is she hesitant ? Is it just about nk and her loyalty to him when her heart and whole being is screaming to embrace happiness and accept Arnav and give life a second chance.
Though I felt after what was discovered about Maya the previous update you may want to show some space so there is no overflow of information but still don't delay it for long because we still don't know about what transpired between arshi themselves to drift apart the way they did.
So I would say it's going good but if there is too much space bet the past and present somehow that connect breaks. So please don't delay about the past because if it comes in buts and pieces in delayed manner its bit difficult to remember it altogether.
I hope you didn't get offended
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