T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148

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dsbj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

beautiful like always.. cant wait to see next .. already waiting.

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

This was beyond beautiful yar. Loved little Meera's and Mohan's interaction. And ab Arnav aur Khushi ki interactions ka tou kia kahna ;)

Loved every bit of it :D

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

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shubhanjli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Beautiful update...

Meera and Mohan both are so brave and so cute...

Loved the update..

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saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

beautiful update x both kids already connecting to each other.

love how Meera has become so grown up bless her

awesome update

thanks for the pm x

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Sakhi2013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

Very nice update Mira..

Thanks for PM

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Lovelyday

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

That was a magical ride!! The first half brought a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes.. And then just as I try and swallow the lump , tears rolled down following their state of being... U r one sensitive writer.. U get to the nook and cranny of parenthood in ways I can't and don't know how to express and weave it with unstoppable irrevocable feelings evoked by second chances in life...Now that is a treat to read , to know and acknowledge , to feel and assimilate... I m totally bowled over by how every line u wrote there shows life experiences that happen with people in general, starting with reactions of kids getting hurt to tantrums of a special child in particular to how parents react in each circumstance to how the most confidential heartfelt information flows out easily to a trusted friend to how a person waits and finally realized he's close to getting that second chance to how one desperately wants to give in yet holds on to the thread of hesitance ...I m just unable to stop myself here .. Ur update made my day!!! Thank u for writing this story and making each line this special...

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shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#517

sexy dish Raizada.. whatta name... loved the update..

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amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

A lovely feeling of contentment after reading this chapter.. Outstanding work!

Loving this inner connection that seems to grow deeper and deeper.. I find the atmospher so romantic around them it's sheer bliss!

Waiting eagerly for the next...

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Thank you for your very kind words...

Your creativity to engage your readers is admirable.. you start a chapter by moving it forward beyond where you ended the previous one.. the update allows a reflection for the reader to think hmm what happened...

Parenthood - The deepest wish for any parent is to protect children forever but we simply can't... The rough and tumble of childhood was depicted so well... These scars become stories that will be shared by Meera and Mohan in years to come, their versions will be exaggerated to some extent!

This family of four has made such strides in their lives.. Mohan has allowed enrichment from Meera to form a special bond that will only strengthen.. Meera who may not even be over the loss of her father has ensured her pain must not overshadow Mohans.. she will protect him always .. (my heart swelled with the pride Khushi must have felt upon seeing the bravery in her little girl) Arnav has come to accept that this is the right time in life to wait for whom and what he wants for the rest of his life.. Khushi's heart and emotions have allied with Arnav! Many moments can be spent going over the whys in life and sometimes there simply is no answer..this is where I see Khushi as she ponders over Amma's phone conversation, her trip and Lavanyas advice... Here's to hickeys, kisses, eye locks and beyond - teaser please !!

"My heart might be bruised, but it will recover and become capable of seeing beauty of life once more. It's happened before, it will happen again, I'm sure. When someone leaves, it's because someone else is about to arrive--I'll find love again." - Paul Coelho