Raina- An Eternal Love Story (Raj and Naina)part 72 updated pg 21 - Page 7

PART ... 8
next day in morning
sab log mess main hai ek duse se baat kar rahe hai tabhi naina aati hai nd sab ko hi bolti hai
pooja : naina ab to tu thik hai na
naina : nhi pooja headache ho raha hai pata nhi kyu kal kya hua tha muje
alekh : tune apun ki daaru pee li thi
naina : oh my god tum log muje bata to sakte the na k vo cold drink nhi hai
huda : oye phoolan tune pucha hi kab tha yr
naina : hmm my mistake par maine kuch ulta pulta to nhi kiya na
pooji : nhi
naina : fir thik hai
raj sir kahan hai
nd sabhi yeh sun ke happy hai k naina ne rajvir sir ke bare mai pucha
huda : pta nhi dekha nhi unhe subah se
naina : ok
nd rab raj vahan aata hai sab usko dekh kar smile krte hai nd naina bhi
raj : in his mind ( naina ko kya ho gys kal tak to dekh bhi nhi eahi thi aaj smile kar rhi hai kahi usko kal raat wala incidence yaad to nhi )
huda : sir ji aao na baitho
par raj kuch nhi bolta
nd tabhi nishant vaha aata hai nd sab ko hi bolta hai raj ko bhi
but raj fir kuch nhi bolta
nishant raj ke face ke samne haath ghuma raha hai but raj ko kuch pata nhi hai vo aur naina ek dusre ko dekhne main busy hai
nishant : ye dono to gye
nd sabhi is baat par zor zor se hasne lagte hai nd raj naina hosh main aate hai
nishant : vaise maine aap ko hi bola tha raj
raj : oh m sry mera dhyan nhi tha
nishant : its ok vaise bhi jab samne gf ho to kisi ka dhyan frnds par ngi jata
raj : ji kya kaha aapne
nishant : kuch ni yun hi
nd dono baith jate hai
raj sochta hai ki naina ko sab yaad hai
raj : naina tum thik ho na
naina : ha thik hu
raj : ok gud
naina : nishant kal vo ice cream aap ne room mai rakhi thi
nishant : nhi to nd naina mai aapke room mai kaise aata vo to band kr liya tha aapne
naina : hmm i dnt knw muje kuch yaad nhi hai
raj : thank god
nishant : aap god ko thanks kyu kar rahe ho raj
raj : vaise hi
nd sherry aati hai
sherry : mrng everyone
nishant : muje chalna chahiye
raj : kuch kha to lo phle aise bina breakfast kiye kyu ja rahe ho
nishant : nhi mood nhi hai
nd vo chala jata hai
raj : isko kya ho gya abhi tak to mood acha tha
nd sherry ko pata hai k nishant uski vajah se gya hai
sherry : mai bhi chalti hu
raj : ab tum kahan chali
sherry : kuch kaam hai
raj : sabko ek sath kaam hai kya
sherry : ok see u later
nd sherry bhi gyi nishant ke peeche
sherry : sir plz ruk jao muje baat krni hai aap se
nishant : kya baat krni hai jldi bolo m busy
sherry : m sry kal ke liye maine bina sach jane aap par aise
nishant : plz muje koi baat nhi karni
sherry : plz sir m realy very sry
nishsnt : muje kuch kaam hai i have to go
nd he leaves
sherry : itna bhi kya attitude ab sry to bol rahi hu na maan nhi raha akadu kahi ka
nd she turns nd peeche nishsnt khada hai
sherry : sir mera matlab vo nhi tha
nishant : i knw aapka kya matlab tha but in afternoon ek meeting hai so sab ko is bare main inform kar dena
sherry : ok sir nd m sry
nishant : its ok
sherry : it means aapne muje maaf kr diya
nishant : no apne muje slap kiya us ke liye punishment to milegi
sherry : kya punishment sir
nishant : soch kar batauga kyunki mai to akdu hu na
sherry : nhi vo mera matlab vo nhi tha sir
nishant : ok go nd tell everyone about meeting
sherry : ok sir
nd sherry jati hai idhar sab apna ne breakfast khatam kr liya nd classes ke liye ja rahe hai
sherry aati hai
sherry : afternun mai meeting hai hum sab ko bulaya hai
huda : fir se meeting oh ab kya ho gya
naina : tu dar mat tuje war mai nhi bhej rahe
sab hasne lagte hai
huda : phoolan teri to
naina : ha ab chlo sab varna agar bc ne hume class ki bajaye yaha dekha to party ki jagah court marshal dega
all : hahahaaahaaahaaa
sab jate hai nd naina sochti hai ki use raj ko ignore nhi karna chahiye uski lover nhi to kya hua vo uski dost to ban sakegi es bahane se raj ke pass to rahegi hamesha nd naina raj ke pass gyi
naina : hello sir hwr u
raj : ( surprisec to see naina in his office )
hlo capt aap yahan kuch kaam tha
naina : mai bina kisi kaam ke nhi aa sakti aap se milne
raj : ( very happy to hear ) aa skti ho maine kab mana kiya
naina : m sry mai aapko kuch din se ignore kr rhi thi actually thodi tensed thi
raj : its ok koi baat nhi ( in his mind ...tum yahan mujse milne aa gyi vahi bahut hai mere liye to
naina : mai bhool gyi thi aapne kya kuch nhi kiya mere liye tahan tak ki apni jaan bhi de di aur mai itni matlabi thi ki aap se aapka haal raj nhi pucha m very selfish ( naina ki aankhon mai asnsu hai )
raj uske lips par finger rakhta hai
raj : bas ab kuch mat bolo pichli baaton ko bhool jao naina nd rona band kro varna sabhi muje marege k maine tume rula dia
naina hasti hai
naina : to aap apne cadets se darte ho
raj : mai kisi se nhi darta par tum roya mat kro mai dekh nhi sakta tume aise
naina just shocked to hear that
raj : i mean naveen ko bahut bura lagega na ki maine uski sis ka khayal nhi rakha
is liye no more tears
naina : sir kya hum dost ban sakte hai
raj : bilkul yeh koi puchne ki baat hai
nd andar se raj bahut khush hai
raj sochta hai chalo kamse kam tumara dost ban kar hi har pal tumara sath to de pauga mai
naina apba hand aage krti hai
naina : frnds
raj : ya frnds nd vo bhi gud wale
naina :
ab mai chalti hu sir
raj : ok naina take care
naina : u 2 sir
nd naina vapis aa gyi vo bahut khush hai nd raj bhi ...

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PART ... 9
in aftternoon sab log meeting ke liye aate hai
nishant : officers aap log jante ho ki hum yaha ek mission ke liye aaye hai aur hume yeh pata chala hai ki kuch log kma ke weapons bahar bhej rahe hai is mai kma ke kuch log bhi shamil hai hum sab logo ko mil kar unka pata lagana hoga
naina : sir kya bas yahi mission hai i mean yeh to bahut chota sa hai hum logo ko yaha itne simple maksad ke liye bulaya nhi ja sakta
nishant : aap se kuch aise hi swal expect kiye the
naina : kyu sir maine kuch falat pucha
raj: naina is right mission itna simple nhi ho sakta
nishant : raj naina both of u right jo asli mission hai uske bare mai aap logo ko time aane par pata chal jayega filhaal to yahi hai
dissmiss
sab jate hai
nishant : raj naina stop aap logo se kuch baat krni hai
raj : aapne sab ke samne kyu nhi bola
niahant : sab ko batane ka vakt nhi aaya hai abhi
raj : ok go ahed
nishant : naina is right mission itna simple nhi hai yeh mission bhi lala ke bare mai hi hai
naina : par sir vo to jail mai hai na
nishant : naina vo jail mai rwh kar hi desh mai aatank faila raha hai muje to lagta hai ki kma ke weapons chori karwane msi bhi uska hath hai nd uska koi mohra hai yaha kma mai jo uska aath de raha hai aur pal pal ki kma ki khabar de raha hai use
naina : sir to mission kya hai
nishant : naina hume lala ke us mohe ka pata lagana hai aur yeh bhi ki unka asli maksad kya hai vo krna kya chahte hai
raj : muje phle se hi shak tha ki aisa kuch hoga
nishant : naina aur sherry ki life ko bhi khatra ho skta hai kyunki aap dino ne hi lala ko jail bheja tha vo iska badla to jarur lega
naina : agar aisi baat hai to aapko sherry ko bhi yaha bulana chahiye tha usko warn krna chahiye tha
sherry : uski jarurat nhi naina
mai janti hu ki meri life khatre mai hai but i dnt care
nishant : but i care about ur life i mean kisi army officer ki jaan bahut keemti hai hamare liye
nd aap yaha kaise aai aapko is tarah bina permission hamari baat sun na nhi chahiye bad manners capt
sherry : muje yahan col chandra ne bheja hai sir
nishant : ok ab hume lala ke us mohre ka pata lagana hoga
naina : aapko kisi par shak hai sir
nishant : major nayar
naina : vo kaise ho skta hai
sherry : naina vo kameena hai doodh ka dhula nhi hai vo
naina : i knw sherry
nishant : raj naina aapko major par nazar rakhi hogi
raj : par mai aur naina kyu aap mere sath sherry ko bhej do
nishant : no sherry apki dost hai ye baat sab jante hai aap uske sath jaoge to major ko shak ho sakta hai par sab ko yeh lagta hai ki naina aur aap ek dusre se baar nhi karte so aap dono ek sath acadmy se bahar hoge to kisi ko koi shak bhi nhi hoga
raj : ok thik hai par aj to mc bahar ja rha hai kma se i think hume abhi jana chahiye uske peeche
nishant : sure
raj : chalo naina
nd they leaves
sherry : thanks sir meri baat manne ke liye
nishant : thnx ki jarurat nhi capt jaise rk aapka best frnd hai naina meri mai bhi un logo ko ek sath dekhna chahta hu
sherry : muje to laga tha ki aap ready nhi hoge meri help karne ke liye
nishant : kyu us thapad ki wajah se
sherry : yeah
nishant : hmm vaise aapne acha nhi kiya mere sath maine aapki baat mani just for naina nd un dono ko ek sath bhej dia
sherry : sir meri punishment
nishant : punishment yeh hai ki apko raj nd naina ko sath krna hai nd vo bhi meri frnd ban kar
sherry : ok sure sir
nishant : so frnds
sherry : yes sir
ok sir ab muje chalna chahiye meri class ka time ho raha hai
nishant : ok see u soon bye
nd sherry jati hai
idhar raj nd naina kma se bahar hai nd major nayar ka peecha kar rahe hai
naina : sir ye kaha ja raha hai kab se chala ja raha hai rukta hi nhi
raj : calm down naina i think vo city se bahar ja raha hai
nd major nayar ku car ek jungle ke pass highway par ja kar rukti hai
vo car se utar kar jungle ki taraf jata hai kisi se milne
raj aur naina bhi uske peeche jate hai
naina : sir ye kis se milne ja raha hai
raj : lets see
mc ek person se milta hai vo person tree ki side mai chupa hua hai dikh nhi raha
naina : sir ye kya baat kar rha hai kuch sunai nhi de raha
raj : chali thodi aage chal kar dekhte hai nd be carefull
person : kya haal hai kma ke
mc : hum acha haal rehne kahan dege
both laughs loudly
person : apna kaam thik se kro kisi ko tum par shak to nhi hua na
mc: nhi jisko hona tha usko bhi nhi hua rajvir kisi kaam ka nhi raha army ke liye ab
person : usko kam samjne ki galti mat krna nd naina aur us sherry ko to shodna mat
mc : tum chinta mat kro mai apna kaam janta hu tum apna kro bas
person : thik hai par major nishant se sambhal kar rwhna vo kuch zyada hi smart hai
mc : dnt wry
ab mai chalta hu apna kaam kr dena
nd mc goes
naina nd raj ne sari baate suni ab vo bhi jungle se bahar aa rahe hai chalte hue
naina: sir ye mere aur sherry ke peeche pada hai nd kis kaam ku baat kar rha tha kya krne wake hai ye log kma ko
raj : naina sab pta chal jayega
naina scrames
naina : rajvir sirrr
raj dekhra hai ki naina ek khade mai gir gyi
raj : naina tume lagi to nhi
naina : sir muje bahar nikalo
raj : hahahahahahaha
naina : sir haso mat help me
raj : hahaha tum itni badi ho gyi ho army officer ban gyi ho par apna khayal nhi rakg skti bacho jaise harkate krti ho
naina : ok mat kro meri help mai khud hi bahar aa jaugi
nd naina khud bahar aa jati hai
naina chalne lgti hai nd raj uske peeche peeche
naina apni car ke pass pahunchti hai
nd raj abhi bhi hass raha hai
raj dekhta hai ki naina ke hath par chot lagi hai
raj ; naina tumne bataya kyu nhi ki tume chot lag gyi
naina : aapko kua aap to haso bas
raj : dikhao mujko
naina : nhi leave me
but raj uska hath nhi chodta apne rumaal ko uske hath par bandh deta hai
nd naina chup chap ja kar car mai baith jati hai
raj while driving
raj : naina kuch bologi
naina nodes in no
raj : gusa ho kyunki mai hasa tum par
naina nodes in yes
raj : acha sry ab to kuch bolo aise chup mat raho
naina face turn krti hai nd raj car stop krta hai
raj : acha abhi kaan pakad kar sry nd vo apne kaan pakadta hai
naina :
raj : ab khush
naina : ha bahut
raj : ab smile to kar do
naina : nooo
raj : acha mat kro tumri smile dekh kar vaise bhi mai dar jata hu
naina hits him
raj : tum qpne senior ko maar rahi ho
naina: mai apne senior ko nhi apne frnd ko maar rhi hu bhul gye aap
raj : nhi bhoola mai madam g
naina ab chale ya sari raat highway par rehna hai
but raj lost in dreams
naina : sirrr
raj : chilao mat muje sunai deta hai
naina: ok chsle ab
raj : ha chalo
raj : naina meri ek baat manogi
naina : ha jarur
raj : muje sir mat bola kro plz
naina : to aur kya bolu
raj : kyu itna acha sa naam hai mera
naina : par kabhi aapko apke naam se nhi bulaya
raj : to ab bula lo na
naina : sir sab ke samne kaise sab ko shak ho jayega k hum sath kaam kar rahe hai
raj : sab ke samne na sahi akeke mai to bula skti ho na
naina : ok sir
raj : fir se sir
naina shyli
ok raj
raj : ye hui na naina wali baat
naina : ya ab chale we r already late
raj : sure mam chaliye
nd they go towards kma
end of part 9

PART ... 10
raj nd naina acadmy pahunchte hai nd kafi raat ho chuki hai raj kma ke gate ke bahar car stop krta hai nd dekhta hai ki naina so gyi nd bo sote hue bahut cute lag rahi thi
raj : ye to so gyi ab kya karu isko uthau ya nhi
raj naina ko awaaz deta hai
raj : naina
par naina bahut thak gyi thi vo bahut maze se so rahi hai
raj : ab isko aise ho utha kar le jana padega par kisi ne dekh liya to ab mai kya kru
nd raj sherry ko call krta hai t
sherry: ha raj bolo
raj : yr ek pro ho gyi hai aap bahar aa skte ho gate par
sherry : ok mai abhi aati hu
herry main gate par pahunchte hai
sherry : kya hua rk
raj : actually vo naina PART ... 10
raj nd naina acadmy pahunchte hai nd kafi raat ho chuki hai raj kma ke gate ke bahar car stop krta hai nd dekhta hai ki naina so gyi nd bo sote hue bahut cute lag rahi thi
raj : ye to so gyi ab kya karu isko uthau ya nhi
raj naina ko awaaz deta hai
raj : naina
par naina bahut thak gyi thi vo bahut maze se so rahi hai
raj sherry ko call krta hai
sherry : ha rk kya hua
raj : kya tum gate par aa skti ho
sherry : ok
sherry gate par jati hai
sherry : kya hua rk
raj : actually vo naina yahi so gyi car main uthane ko yahi so gyi car main uthane ko ab kya kru
sherry : rk tum pagal ho utha kar le jao usko
raj : agar kisi ne dekh lia to mai nhi chahta mere karan fir se koi naina par ungli uthaye
sherry : rk koi nhi dekhega
raj naina ko bahon nai uthata hai nd uake room tak le jata hai
par raste mai mc aa jata hai
mc : wow capt naina major rajvir ki bahon mai
raj : aisa kuch nhi hai naina ki health thik nhi hai so i juat help her
mc : its ok major aap safai mat do ap dono ke bare mai to bahut ache se janta hu mai
raj : muje tume safai dene ki jarurat bhi nhi hai samje tum
mc : calm dowm gusa mat kro rajvir jao apni mehbooba ko uske room tak chod do
raj : shut ur mouth
mc: hahaha
naina shor sun ke uth jati hai nd vo khud ko raj ki bahon mai dekh kar schoked ho jati hai raj usko neeche utarta hai
mc : enjoy capt naina mai aapko kuch nhi boluga
tabhi nishant vaha aata hai
nishant : bolega to tu tab jab bolne ke layak choduga tujko mai
mc : oh to aap bhi inki side mai hai acha hai
vaise capt naina aur kitno ko fasa rakha hai aapne apne jaal main
naina ko bahut gusa aa gya raj ka man kar rha hai ki vo mc ki jaan le le
tabhi
nishant slaps tightly niar
sab schoked ho jate hai
mc : tumri itni himmat
nishant ek aur thapad marta hai
nishant : himmat to bahut hai mujme bas tu zara bach ke reh
mc : ek army officer ko marne ke aarop mai mai tera court marshall karwauga
nishant : abey oye indian army tere sasur ne tuje dahej mai nhi di thi jo jab man karega tu kisi ko bhi nikal dega aur mere samne apna mooh mat hi kholna teri janam kundli nikal chuka hu mai sab pata hai tere bare mai muje iske phle ki mera mooh khul jaye dafa ho ja yahan se
mc : tume to mai dekh lunga
nishant : jarur dekh jab man karw tab dekh par agar naina ke aas pass 5 feet tak nazar bhi aata na to tu is dunia mai nhi dikhega yaad rakhna
nd muje rajvir samjne ki galti mat krna jo tuje apni senior maan kar izat de deta tha
mc : tume acadmy se bahar na kiya ti mera naam niar nhi
nishant : tuje jahanum me nhi pahunhya to mera nam nishant nhi
mc : dekh lunga tuje bhi
nishant : chal ab dafa ho tahan se jab dekhna ho dekh leo
mc jata hai
raj : nishant tumne thik nhi kia mc par hath utha kar vo kuch bhi kar skta hai
nishant : raj army uske baap ki nhi hai aur naina ko jo galat bolega vo to pitega fir mc ho ya prime mimister i dnt care
raj : m sry naina sab meri wajh se hua muje tume utha dena chahiye tha
naina : aap kyu sry bol rahe ho nd ap ten mat lo nishant hai na sab sambhaal lega
sherry : but naina he slap mc its against rules
both nishant nd naina haste hai
ns sherry schoked
sherry : why u laughing
nishant : sherry g yeh to ek tha hum to pta nhi kitno ko maar chuke hai goa mai
naina : hahaha acha hua ek aur marna tha meri taraf se bhi
nishant : aap hukam karo abhi jau
naina : nhi nhi abhi to sona hai muje gd nt bye everyone
nd naina goes nd nishant also
sherry : raj ye dono pagal ho gye hai kya
raj : shyd nishant hi naina ke liye sahi life partner hai mai nhi vo to naina ke khilaaf ek lafaz nhi sun skta aur mai kuch nhi kar paya uske liye
sherry : rk aisa mat socho yr
raj : sherry i think muje hana chahiye
raj jata hai
sherry : rk kaise samjahu tume k naina sirf tumse pyar krti hai muje to niahant ki chinta hai mc pta nhi kal kon sa tamasha karega
nd sherry bhi apne room mai jati hai
end of part 10

Originally posted by: arpita25

<font size="2">It's ok dear and thanks for the update</font>

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<font size="2">But what I was saying to Vartika will tell you as well the story doesn't seem interesting and plot is confusing a bit.</font>

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<font size="2">ANyways thanks for the effort.</font>

thanks for ur opinion
but let me tell u its her first ff so may be there r some loops
but jase jase story aage badhegi it will me more interesting ...
plz keep reading u will find new twist n turn in the ff
n i hope then u will love it