Raina- An Eternal Love Story (Raj and Naina)part 72 updated pg 21

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Am Eternal Love Story


Characters :

1. Major Rajveer Shekhawat
2. Capt Naina Singh Ahluwalia
3. Major Nishant Rathod
4 . Capt Aalekh Sharma
5. Lft. Amardeep Huda
6. Lft. Pooja Beg

7 . Lft. Ali Beg
8. Lft. Yudi Sahni
9. Lft. Amiya Sharma ( a doctor)
10. Capt. Sameer Rathod
11. Capt. Sherry Sinha( an army lawyer)


here is an introduction of characters of my ff
precap ( story starts when all cadets are become army officers after their tranning )

naina : (in her thoughts ) yeh life bhi kitni ajeeb hai kab kahan kis mod par la kar khada kar deti hai kuch pata nhi chalta

suddenly phone rings( person speaks : capt singh aapko ek mission ke liye kma vapis jana hoga )

naina : yes sir

naina : aaj ek baar gir se usi kma main ja rahi hu jahan se yeh safar shuru kia tha ..par vo hi saath nhi jiska sath mere liye meri zindgi ki wajah tha ... kaash ek bar rajveer sir se mil paati dubara ...par maine khud hi unko door kar dia khud se ...


List of all parts of FF


Part 1:- 122270953


Part 2:- 122296428


Part 3:- 122396232


Part 4:- 122500359


Part 5:-122833137


Part 6:- 123142003


Part 7:- 123487048


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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is interesting
Excited for updates
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:-

in delhi headquaters ..(
meeting of major nishant nd col shakti chandra )
col: major nishant aap jante hi hai ki aapki posting kma mai ho rahi hai aur vaha aapko ek mission ke liye bheja ja raha hai
nishant : yes sir i know
col : to fir aap yeh bhi jante hoge ki aspki team mai kon kon hai all six cadets of kma jo ab officers hai unse better kma ko koi nhi janta
nishant : yes sir
col : aur vahan capt naina bhi hogi i hope aap unhe vaise hi sambhal lainge jaise aapne do saal phle sambhala tha
nishant : sir naina mere liye khud se bhi jyada important hai mai janta hu uski care kaise karni hai
col : well done major muje yahi umeed thi aap se ab ap ambala ke liye nikliye ...sare officers aapko vahi milenge ..sab ko unki posting order mil chuke hai ...
nishant : ok thanks sir nd i will make sure ki capt singh ko koi pareshani na ho ...jai hind sir
col : jai hind major

nishant ambala ke liye nikal chuka hai nd udhar naina bhi
naina yeh soch rahi hai ki kaise vo fir se kma mai vapis jayegi jaha ki yadon se vi baag rahi hai pichle 2 saal se ...

in kma :: sare officers yahan pahunch chuke hai ..sab ek dusre se mil kar bahut khush hai ...ali or pooja ki shadi ho chuki hai .. brig chandok aate hai
brig : officers welcome again to kma aap sab aa chuke hai or aapke baki sathi officers major rathod , capt singh or capt sheey bas pahunch te hi hoge ..tab tak aap log rest kariye
bc chala jata hai
huda : oh teri matlab apni phoolan bhi aa rahi hai kitna achahoga na
pooja: ha oye or yeh major rathod kon hai jarur muchad ki tarah koi khadus hi hoga
aalekh : tum log apna bheja mat chalao mai maj rathod se mil chuka hu ekdam hero type ka hai
pooja : oh teri matlab hritik roshan type wow
yudi : oye pooja tu ali ko dekh kisi or ko nhi
pooja : yudi tu muje mat sikha
huda : yr shery bhi aa rahi hai yeh vahi hai na apne rajvir sir ki bachpan ki dost jisne rajvir sir ka case lada tha or naina ki help ki thi lala ke khilaaf
yudi : ha chief ye vahi hai
huda : fir to maza aa gta ini sohni kudi se milns ka moka baar bar nhi milta
aalekh: ab bheja mat khao chalo ja ke so jate hai kal kaam bhi karna hai

all say gd nt to each other

next day ...
naina kma pahunch gyi yahan aakar usko sab yaad aata hai uski tranning uske dost uske rajvir sir 😊
naina bc se milne jati hai
bc : welcm capt naina singh
naina : thanks sir
bc : aap ja kar rest kro thodi der mai aapko aapki classes ke bare mai bata diye jayega
naina : yes sir
naina bahar aati hai or apne sare frnds se milti hai par thik se baat nhi karti
huda : oh naina kya ho gya tuje itni shaant kyu hai
naina :bas yu hi
pooja: oye tu badal gyi hai yr
naina : vakat ke sath to sab badal jaya hai pooja mai to insaan hu acha ab main chalti hu baad mai milege

nd naina turn hoti hai aur sekhti hai ki rajveer aur shery aa rahe hai dono bahut khush jai ek sath bahut has rahe hai aur naina unko dekh ke bina baat kiye vaha se chali jati hai ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2:-


naina raj aur sherry ko dekh kar bina kuch bole chali jati hai
sherry : rk yr naina ko kya ho gya hai ek hi to bol skti thi na aise hi chali gyi
raj : sherry shyd naina ne ab tak muje maaf nhi kiya hai
sherry : nhi rk aisa nhi ho skta vo tumse itna naraz nhi reh sakti
raj : hmm chalo bc or baki sab se to mil lai ja kar
sherry : ha chalo
raj aur sherry sab se mess mai milne jate hai sab log raj ko dekh kar bahut khush hai
all : welcm rajvir sir aapko dekh kar bahut acha lag raha hai
raj : thanks everyone nd same here mai bhi bahut khush hu ki mere kabil cadets itne ache sipahi ban gye hai


sab ek ek karke raj se gale milte hai
huda to sherry : o hello ji kya haal hai aapke
sherry : well m very gud
huda : vaise raj sir aur aap ek sath yahan
sherry : ha vo hum ek sath hi aaye hai mai delhi main rk ke sath hi rehti thi
pooja : nice to meet u again sherry
sherry : thnx pooja
baki sab bhi sherry ko hi bolte hai

aalekh : sherry bole to thnx apun ki taraf se
sherry : thnx kyu
alekh : aaj agar tum nhi hoti to rajvir sir shyd zinda nhi hote qche se yaad hai muje kaise 2 saal phle tum ne raj sir ko bachaya tha
FLASHBACK ::

jab raj ka accident hua tha aur uski jeep khai mai gir gyi thi tab sab ko yeh laga tha ki rajvir mar gya par tab sherry ne askar use bachaya tha
2 saal phle

sherry london mai apni law ki study kar thi thi tab raj use call krta hai
raj : hi sherry kaisi ho meri baby
sherry : mai thik hu tum kaise ho rk
( sherry raj ki bachpan ki frnd hai nd usko rk bulati hai )
raj : sherry mai ek mission par ja raha hu shyd bach pau bhi ya nhi mai es bare mai ek hi adami ko bata skta hu so tume bata raha hu nd raj usko naina or naveen ke bare mai sav bata deta hai
sherry : rk aisa mat bolo plz mai abhi india vapis aa rhi hu tume kuch bhi nhi hoga
sherry apni masters ki study shod ke vapis aa jati hai aur usi din vapis aati hai jis d in raj ka accident .hota hai
vo capt sameer se sab pata krwati hai capt sameer raj ka partner tha es case mai
sherry raj jo accident spot par ja kar dund leti hai aur use bacha leti hai
kyunki vo ek lawyer thi is liye naina ka aath deti hai raj aur naveen ko begunah sabit krne ke liye nd lala ko jail pahuncha deti hai

FLASHBACK ends

sherry : its ok alekh thnx mat bolo yeh meri duty thi
raj : guys hum sab baad mai milte hai abhi thodi rest kr li jaye kyu cadets i mean officers smile emoticon

raj aur sherry jate hai

udhar naina in her room ( ro rhi hai
naina : kyu vapis aaye ho aap meri life mai aap jante ho k mai aapke bina nhi jee skti pta nhi kaise khud ko sambhala tha maine ab fir se vahi feelings kaise rok paugi mai khud ko

nd she continusly crying alot

nishant bhi acadmy mai aa chuka hai nd bc se mil chuka hai bc bahut khush hai use dekh kar
bc: aapse mil ke bahut acha lga major bahut suna tha aspki bahaduri ke bare mai aj mil bhi liya just 26 ki age mai aap major ban gue hai apne skill se very impressive
nishant : thnks alot sir now i should take a leave sir

vo bahar aata hai aur sochta hai
muje to major rajvie se milna hai bahut suna hai unke bare main naina se 2 saal se naina mere sath mission par thi aur jar time raj ki tareef krti thi
nd muje naina se bhi milna hoga pta nhi kya haal hoga uska raj se mil kar ...

maina ke room par knock hota hai
naina : nishant aap yahan
nishant :: jahan aap vahi main naina 😊
naina ki aankhon mai aansu hai
nishant ; fir se ro rhi ho vahi sab yaad karke
naina se control nhi hota nd vo nishant ko HUG krke rone lagti hai
nishant use chup krwata hai
nishant ; naina ro mat my doll mai aa gya hu na kuch nhi hoga
naina: ( sobing while hugging him ) hmm acha hua aap aa gye mai aapke bina kamzor pad jati fir se
nishant : kaise nhi aata mai dosti ki hai to nibhani padegi na aur agar ngi aata to tum to muje fry krke kha jati
naina usko halke se marti hai aur smile krti hai 😊



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 10 years ago
nilusoni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful part loved it
What's problem between rn
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Vartika dear you are really a sweetheart u know very well how to appreciate the writing of others if it comes to Raj and Pri.🤗 Keep on doing this good work.👍🏼

Good FF 👏

I am happy that many of our friends have started writing about RN.👏 Naina will be gussa with Raj obviously. But they should talk to each other or fight with each other instead of ignoring.😛 Sherry and Raj's friendship is good.👏 Do continue soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice...!!
Thank u so much vartika for the pm n posting this ff..
Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice effort by u Vartu.👏 Good work by Kiran.👏 Do continue soon and I think part one didn't end where part two started.😕 I am a bit confused make it clear. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for the inconvenience to all of you readers.

I have posted part 3 in confusion as part 2 😕 so pls do read part 2 again and give ur valuable feedback.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:-

nishant : ab has bhi do yaar
naina : smile emoticon
nishant : ok gd nt kal milte hai aapke frnds se bhi to milna hai
naina : yah ok gd nt

nEXt day in morning

bc ne ek meeting bulai hai sab ko unke classes aur teaching ke bare mai batane ke liye
bc : major rathod aap advance weapning padayege
major shikhawat aap drill commander hoge
cspt naina aap statergy nd communication padayegi
capt sherry aap law nd capt aalekh nd huda aap major nishant ko asdist karege
lt .ali nd lt.pooja nd lt.yudi aap teeno major shikhwat ko assist krege
is that clear
all : yes sir

sab log mess ki taraf jate hai breakfast ke liye
pooja : oye ye thik nhi kia bc ne hum sab ko assistent bna dia
yudi : ha hum bhi to kuch pada hi skte the
huda : o tum log to fir bhi bach gye muje to us naye major ko bardash krna hoga
sab hasne lagte hai huda par
raj nd sherry aate hai nd sab ke sath baith jate hai aur sab se baate krte hai

naina aati hai vo kisi se baat nhi krti aur chup chaP ek corner me ja kr baith jati hai
raj : sherry naina ko bhi bula lo vo akele kyu baithi hai
sherry naina ko bulane lagti hai tabhi vaha par nishant aa jata hai
nishant : hi everyone
raj : hello nice to meet u
nishant : major rajvir nyc to meet u 2 aap ke bare mai bahut suna tha fiy aj mil bhi lia nd jo suna tha sach hi suna tha k aap apne cadets ke sath bahut frndly hai
raj : yes major but ab yeh sare mere cadets nhi hai
nishant: i knw raj vaise if u dnt mind mai apko raj bula skta hu
raj : sure but apko kaise pta k mera nick naam raj hai
nishant : aapke bare mai kya nhi pta muje
raj : ji
nishant : kuch nhi ok aap log start kro breakfast apna
nishant : naina tum vahan kyu baithi ho akele
naina : bas yu hi
nishant : tumare frnds to tumara sath dete nhi chlo mai hi aa jata tu tume compny dene ke lie
aur nishant ja kar naina ke pass baith jata hai naina bhi bahut khush hai uske sath
huda : ye nishant phoolan ko phle se janta hai kya jo uske sath aise bate kar rha hai aur naina ko kya ho gya hai itni badal kyu gyi hai vo
pooja : ha yr uska netwrk hamara signal catch hi nhi krta
huda : kahi ye maj phoolan pe line to nhi maar raha

yeh sun ke raj ko gusa aata jai par vo kuch nhi bolta
sherry : guys tum log jyada hi soch rahe ho ho skta hai ki vo ache frnds ho
raj : ok ab mai chalta hun muje meri class lene jana hai
aur raj uth kar chala jata hai udhar naina aur nishant bhi chale gye
raj apni class lene ja rha hota hai aur raste mai use naina milti hai

raj : hi naina kaisi ho
naina : achi hu aap kaise ho
raj : mai bhi thik hu par tum thik nhi lagti kya ho gya tume manta hu ki mujse naraz ho tum abhi bhi par apne dosto se to baat kro kam se kam
naina : aap muje koi baat mat karo aapko kya dark padta hai mai khush hu ya nhi aap raho apni sherry ke sath khush

naina jane lagti har par ruk jati hai
naina : sry mai jyada bol gyi muje kisi ki life mai enterfare nhi krna chahiye

raj kuch nhi bolta aur chala jata hai
nishsnt yeh sab dekh raha tha

in evening ::
nishant naina se milne jata hai
nishant : naina kya hua aise kyu baat kr rhi thi tumraj se
naina : meri marzi
nishant : ab muje bhi nhi bataogi bolo kya hua hai
naina : kya bolu mai aapko bas vahi sab yaad aa gya aur mai apna gusa control nhi kar payi
nishant : naina us wakt tumje jo dekha vo galt bhi to ho skta hai
naina : jo drlha vo galat to ho skta hai par jo suna aur dekha vo ek saath galat nhi ho sakta
nishant : ek bar fir se soch lo naina jee paogi uske bina jis se khud se bhi jyada pyar krti ho har vakt uske bate mai baat krti ho aur uske bina reh paogi tum
naina : par vo mujse pyar nhi krte agar aap bhi mera sath ngi dena chahte to koi baat nhi
nishant : mai to hamesha tumare sath hu har vakt sari zindgi fir chahe tumaea pyar tumara sath de ya na de

vo dono chale jate hai par nishant ki yeh baat sherry sun leti hai aur usko bahut gusa aata hai us par
sherry : yeh apne aap ko samjta kya hai har vakt naina ke sath chipka rehta hai mai isko chodugi nhi
aud sherry nishant se baat krne jati hai
sherry : may i come in sir
nis : yes plz
sherry : phle to kuch formal baat krti hai fir puchti hai sir aap naina ko kaise jante ho
nishant : well vo meri best frnd hai aap kyu puch rahe ho
sherry : sir aap naina ko kab se jante ho
nis : 2 saal se par aap ye sab sawal kyu kr rhi ho
sherry : kuch nhi sir bas yu hi
nishant : ok then u can go capt aapka kaam ho chuka hai
sherry : yes sir
tabhi nisjant kisi se phn pe baat krne lagta hai
nishant : ha sam bol hwr u
person: m gud bhai aap sunao naina kaisi hai
nis : vo bhi thik hai sameer tu suna aamiya kaisi hai
person : achi hai aapke kma mai hi aa rhi hai
nishant : gud aur tune sahi kaha tha sherry vaki mai mujse ajeeb sawal puch rhi thi jaisa tune uske bare mai bola tha bilkul vaisi hi hai
chal i call u later bye

nd nishant baat krke chala jata hai par sherry sari baat sun leti hai
sherry : kis se baat kr rha tha yeh aur yeh muje kaise janta hai mere bare mai kyu baat kr rha tha
ye naina ko kaiss janta hai aur hum sab ke bare mai bhi
jarur kuch chupa raha hai ...muje pata lagana hi hoga ki yeh nishant rathod hai kon aur kyu aaya hai kma main ...


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