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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#951

Originally posted by: IPK007
I will try my best to make it on Wednesdsy Night, US time :)

Thanks Jen.

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#952

Originally posted by: mklam
When I was with her, her glance was still circumspect,
Though she would smile when I spoke of external things;
Modest her bearing: her love was not yet revealed,
Nor was it quite concealed.

- Kalidasa

A&K - Act II - the journey continues

Love it ❤️

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#953

Beautiful update Jenny... Hope your hubby gets well soon...and all your nanny problems are solved asap...

Was feeling bad for Khushi...and was totally on her side in this update... Loved the way she questioned Arnav about his intentions for inviting Madison... Although he may not have slept with her it doesn't make it alright...I think she should stretch it a bit...and not forgive him so easily..

Loved the last line of the update... Its so true...

Wonderful writing...!!!!

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Justme1

@Justme1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#954

Beautiful update...
Love how you have potrayed khushi's inner turmoil... Must be so hard to have those conflicting emotions and fighting them, dealing with them every moment. Guess it gets harder much harder when the prrson you love but want to run away from is infront of you...
Looking forward to Arnav & Khushi growing inthis relationship & falling in love all over again.

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mpat

@mpat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: IPK007
Madilyn! 🤗This is it. The closest representation of the state Arnav's heart was in during that dark phase. Of course, while Kahlil Gibran expressed it beautifully with just a handful of words, I had to struggle to achieve the same with a whole barrage of them! Thank you so much for posting it here ❤️

Thank You Jenny. 🤗
My heart ached when I read this poem.
Kahlil may have used few words, but you have given us a face to this tormented heart, one that we can be angry with, one that makes us want to scream at and then to shed a tear for!

Take care.
🤗

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Tina

@Khushi_raiizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#956

Really enjoy this update :)
Can't wait for more :)

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 10 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: IPK007
Love it, K ❤️

😆

It's a simple song and figured Arnav can manage it. There is a piano in the house too!

Hmmm...teaser...a thought just popped in my head...Is Arnav going to sneak Khushi out for a date? 😉

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#958

Arnav is one lucky guy,it seems. I don't know many girls who would have behaved the way Khushi did, after all that Arnav said and did. Even if she hasn't forgiven him completely, she sure has made it all easy for him. She's such a sweetheart! I hope Arnav realises what a gem of a person he has got in his life,and treat her the way she deserves to be, for the rest of their lives.

And Akash is both a loving brother and a caring friend! Really liked how he handled the whole situation.

Interesting teaser,Di. Can't wait for the wedding festivities to begin! 😊

PS: Sorry for the terribly late comment,Di.. AD is a little hectic right now!

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#959

Amazing! loved ARSHI conversation.. Arnav is not giving choices to Khushi as she is his to love and cherish.. Hamesha.. hope their love increases removing all the negativity around them.. Akash is sweet.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#960

That was such a cleansing rain...both inside and outside ...it was as if Khushi's tears were dissolving and washing away the darkness that surrounds Arnav's life...I know it is very fanciful imagery but that is what I sensed.

Every statement she made felt right and just. Yes, this time he stopped but there is a self destructive behaviors in him that she is very rightly calling out. What will he do the next time he is feeling hurt and angry. How will he act it out.

He appeared to be a very normal, charismatic and stable person till the advent of Lavanya in his life and then seems to have spiraled downward into someone who is as damaged in his own way as she was...will Khushi be able to resurrect the old Arnav?

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago

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