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Posted: 10 years ago
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khushi's emails were heartbreaking yaar.now arnie is in the pursuit of khushi.superb chappy dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow, I don't know why I thought it would be Aman initially, but then Akash's cagey behaviour convinced me that it must be Arnav. I can so imagine the shock that his sudden appearance must have been to Khushi, and I must say, she handled it better than I would have in real life. I would probably be all "tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho". Anita the little imp, I can't wait to see her shenanigans now that Arnav is here. FIrst she sent him to that African country, now she's literally going to make him pay through his nose. LOL. I do hope that Aman shows up. These two should be together. I can feel it in my bones. Isha is so cute, esp love the Emma comparison.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay!! They finally meet to start new journey, new memories together.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yey Jenny, they finally meet again. I have to ask what is LOTR and HP(which is brown sauce in the uk). But never mind that.
Anita is a sweet heart, she is pining for Aman, as he wont be attending the wedding, or will he? Please let him, I do want Anita to be happy and finally tell Khushi that shes loved Aman for the longest time, it's not a crush for her. Anita has been such a lovely sister, first she gets them to meet behind their parents back, then she stands as the protective barrier against him as he broke her sisters heart, and now she playing defence for Akaash, as she realises Khushi will never be happy without Arnav.
So will their maasi like Arnav? And will she allow Khushi and Arnav to get together? Oh I do hope so. Being her maasi (maa jaisi) gives her the chance to step back and actually see the whole picture, oh I hope Khushi can confide in her, just the way she should have been able to to do with her own mother; then maybe she can speak to Khushis parents about Arnav.
Arnav you had better get you act together and get on bended knee to get her love back, he deserves a kick in the backside for giving her the cold shoulder for so long. I hope he finds the boat, and gives it back to her with a similar note that he sent her all those months ago.He has a lot of making up to do, and I think he will need all the help that he can get from the family.

Jenny I love how you write, their meeting was more of hearts and memories of a beautiful love that still lives, the embers still smouldering while she waits for him.

👏 👏 👏
Edited by addicted25 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved how you depicted the marriage fervor, without sidelining Arnav and Khushi. And Anita as well brought a smile on my face. I sincerely hope that once the turmoil in Khushi's life settles down, she deep dives and finds the cause of concern in her kid sister's life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahhh... another beautiful update Jenny Apu... loved it a lot... the whole wedding preps going on around makes it more real... loving Anita, she's really one sweetheart... also our new cupid Akash... its fabulous... nd then they met again... aahhh, how much we've waited for day to come... finally aa hi gaye woh din... already dying to see ahead...be back soon Apu...

Ohho, ek aur baat, i just hope Madhu Bua doesn't put anything negative about Arnav in khushi's massi's head... keeping my fingers crossed...
Edited by nishu_shorna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
tumhari nazar kyon khafa ho gai
khata bakhsh do gar khata ho gai

Saza hi sahi aj kuchh to mila hai
saza mein bhi ik pyar ka silsila hai
mohabbat ka kuchh bhi anjam ho
mulaqat ki ibteda ho gai



Jenny kehte hain dil ko dil se raah hoti hai...
Loved that moment when Khushi felt his presence around her. Loved that moment when Khushi opened the door and find him in front of her eyes.


Jo Khushi ka sabab ho dard bhi usi se milta hai, warna ajnabiyun ko nahi pata hota k dil kis baat per dukhta hai..chot kis baat per lagti hai...per choti choti ranjeshein muhabbat ko khatam nahi krtein...kabhi khushgawar yaadein ghair leti hain...toh kabhi talkh yaadon se jee bhar ata hai...and the way you depicted Khushi's feelings in this chapter, it was spot on and pitch perfect.


Anita just stole the show. And her character reminded me Simran' s younger sister Chutki in DDLG movie. Yeh saali bada tough time deny wali hai Arnav ko. Jesa k mujhe yaqeen hai Khushi deney wali hai Arnav ko...dena bhi chaheye... Arnav ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai...acha yeh Aman kahan gaya...

Jenny ab toh mujhe yehe kehna hai

Dukh bhare din beete re bhaiya ab sukh ayo re
Rang jeevan mein naya layo re

Edited by ..RareGem.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm...finally they met...I want Khushi to give hard time to Arnav.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update.
So arnav is here to woo his lady love khushi.
Thanks for the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
He found her! Oh am I grateful to Aakash or what ?

But it isn't going to be all that easy, is it ? That scene where they finally met - you wrote that so well Jen! I could almost feel that gut wrenching pain that Khushi must have felt - along with the helplessness of not being able to stop loving that man altogether. He almost broke her.

But in this update, my heart it with Anita. I feel a slight twinge of pain thinking about that fact that this young, naive girl had to grow up and come to accept her first ever heartbreak (kind of). The heart sighs. But I am hoping better things are in store for this lovely, funny girl - a good friend, a good daughter, a fabulous sister. I do love Anita 😃

I am actually glad this FF is getting longer and longer - means its not ending any time soon and that makes me happy!

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