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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Jab they met like strangers... 😉😃 loved it... Amusements drowned the pains...

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faree

@faree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

BRILLIANT ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT 👏

such an apt title strangers in love

i like/love everything about this chapter jenny, depth of khushi's pain, her hurt, yearning, her mistrust towards arnav, arnav's steely determination to make everything right, even though he knows that its not going to be easy because he hurt her immensely, sisterly love and bonding, joyful ambiance, the setting everything is PERFECT

whole chapters remind me of this poetry by adeem hashmi specially when they met

Faasale aise bhi honge, yeh kabhi socha na tha
Saamne baitha tha mere, aur woh meraa na tha

That distances can be so great, I had never imagined

She was seated in front of me, yet she was not mine

Woh ke khushboo ki tarah, phaila tha mere chaar soo
Main usay mehsoos kar sakta tha, chhoo sakta na tha
Like a fragrance, she surrounded me on all sides,

I could sense her presence, but could not touch her

Aaj lagataa hai ta'alluq mit gayaa poori tarah

Aaj us ne dekh kar bhi mujh ko pahchaana na tha

It appears that the bond is totally broken today,

Today, she looked at me, but did not recognize me

Main teri soorat liye saare zamaane me.n phiraa
Saari duniya mein magar, koyi tere jaisa na tha

With your face in my mind, I roamed the world
But nowhere could I find another like you

Aaj milne ki khushi mein, sirf main jagaa nahi.n
Teri aankhon se bhi lagataa hai ke tu soyaa na tha

I am not the only one who stayed up for the joy of our meeting

Your eyes seem as if you, too, have not slept

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credit: google

Edited by faree - 10 years ago

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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

ohhh I just loved anita in this chapter,,,, I loved the lil stunt she pulled at the breakfast table... and omg they made him a writer haha lol

I loved how you had described khushi siting by the piano and I had thought they would walk in the house and arnav would see her first time siting by the piano,,,
and just stand there staring at her and she would look up to see him staring at her

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Serene77
Thank u thank u thank u !! For noticing me :)... Absolutely loved the update.. The shopping scene made me want to go back 'home ' and shop with cousins exactly like that ..'sigh'... Moving on, loved Isha-vinay scene .. Always love the just-to-be-married dreamy people:)... Khushi gets back to her thoughts regarding Arnav no matter what.. Everything reminds her of him.. She's so precious and sensitive.. My heart melted at her state & her trying to convince her heart what she should do.. Being at a wedding , among so many people, activities and she still finds a way back to him..
Loved their meeting at the door.. It was absolutely perfect. Her shock and his anticipation... Can't wait for the terrace scene though:)... They have a long way to go from here .. They r on different pages .. I had suspected of her trust issues with him after being stuck at the girl and her voice on phone.. Am eagerly wIting to see their confrontation.. How he's going to get her back.
Lovedthat Isha has Emma-esque matchmaking tendency..ahh...the possibilities :)... Lovely word btw...
Akash Anita sound like a sly team on a mission now.. Cousins r always the best of friends :)..
Lastly, I had a shudder along with Arnav ( for him) at his MIL's look alike ...Poor guy .. He's been thru a lot and I can see his reaction to Khushi's maasi...
Amazing update as ever. Lucky for u, I m not ur neighbor.. Would have bugged u till I get the whole story out of u :)...this is an amazing story

OMG OMG omg SF is dedicated to u...

Super

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

I loved it. There is no doubt about that. I love your writing but this time, I was expecting a bit more in he update ..I mean I know you are busy and it's absolutely alright and no matter what I will read this story...

But..I expected it won't end at that stage where they just met.. so a litte sad ..But great writing as usual :)

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Thank u for pm.

The update is fabulous, awesome, fantastic, beautiful...I dont know how to put my feelings in comments. Arnav-Khushi coming face to face is nostalgic...

Love u for this brilliant update. 🤗

Jenny please please please try to update the next chapter quickly 😃

Cannot wait for the much awaited Arnav-Khushi talk... Too too much pent up feelings...

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shiv456

@shiv456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Wonder what next awesome update

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Lovers re-unite one way or the other..it's so true that it's meant to be!

Beautifully penned.. Jen, feels like DDLJ setting... Waiting for them to steal few moments together!

And Khushi giving it to him this time...

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Jenny,

Beautiful chapter as usual...is it me or does it appear to be moving at a slower pace than the previous ones...perhaps this is an impatient tendency one has to just get on with the story already. Love the characters of course. Feel Arnav and Khushi definitely need to get about with the apology and decide to fight together instead of against each other for their relationship. Waiting to see how they will go through the first ice breaker conversation...and then some more...hmm...as for Khushi's parents and their selfishness in not giving A and K their blessings, I have nothing to say. Can parents seriously stand by and watch their kids go through so much angst and unhappiness? Waiting for the next chapter...hope things slowly resolve now...

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 10 years ago