Hello Chaverah,
Read the latest chapter of LNB and simply loved it. Also, read your note..hope you're doing well. I, myself was not well for a week and I can understand the pain. Take care of yourself, drink coconut water, fruits with healthy food and plenty of rest, i'm sure you will feel lot better. Coming to the update, I simply loved the way this particular chapter was written. Past few hours before the trip was well inculcated with the present, making the chapter all more interesting. There were so many awe moments in this chapter, right from khushi & arnav whispering their love for each other watching the starry night,arnav packing her stuff, khushi asking out for his help in choosing her outfits, not to forget their pool encounter and the phone conversation, wherein arnav says he doesn't care about the phone bill. You started off the chapter on a rather painful note portraying khushi's pain, loneliness and moved on to portray their playfulness, arnav's pain & loneliness and ended the chapter on a beautiful note. Their desperation to be with each other, their pain & vulnerability, their suffocation from being away from each other and amidst everything their love for each other, was penned beautifully. Arnva's infinite gifts was so thoughtful and beautiful that I could not help but fall in love more with his character. I just simply adore & love the bond aman, la and arnav share...especially arnav & la. The way she cares for him, the way she respects him, the say she supports him, the way she cares for him, the way she advises him, the way she gets pissed when he is too stubborn and the way she orders him - every single thing shows about the depth of their bond and screams the love & affection they share. Also, I loved your idea of sharing a piece of aman & la's story, inculcating it flawlessly in the current scenario. Can't wait for more to unfold.
Take care.
My comments for the next chapters might be delayed due to my vacation.
Lots of love,
Pinky
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