Arshi FF: Like Never Before #4 - Thread 5 Added (26.08.15) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Congrats for the new thread
Thanks for the reply <3
Totally loved the update
Especially how u described Arshi's feeling and pain of separation for the first after their marriage
Lavanya was just too good in explaining to him and also told him the solution to reduce both Arshi's sufferings
The phone call which later changed to video call was so lovely!!!
I really loved the last paragraph of Part B
Yet again both Arnav and Khushi experienced and win another hurdle which is being separated from one another
Looking forward to Khushi's arrival to her Arnav
Continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
awesum n brilliant updt.. :) waiting fr khushi to come back. n arshi come together.! thanks fr pm. do updt soon dear. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Awsm update...thnxx 4 d pm...update soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
So beautiful. Their need and love for each other. Their hearts speak volumes than actual talking. Awesome update. Thanks for pm.xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
A beautiful, sensually written update! I loved the manner in which you protrayed the thoughts and emotions of both Arnav and Khushi. I could really feel it. So take a bow 👏, because this update had me crying and laughing.

Loved how each one figures at the forefront of each others thoughts, their happiness being of utmost importance to both of them. Just can't stop falling more in love with your Arshi. Both of them with each other in all ways, short of physically.

I loved how you touched on Arnav's insecurities. The little glimpses into his past. His discussion with Lavanya was so heartbreaking. I'm glad Arnav took Lavanya's advice, and set the wheels in motion.

Arnav and Lavanya, NK and Khushi - I just can't seem to get enough of their friendly relationship. Lavanya and NK's desire to see their friend's happy is just so...genuine. Hope Arnav and Khushi find the ultimate happiness that they truly deserve.

Last but not least, Congratulations for Thread 4! Hope there are many more threads "Like Never Before".
Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
hot and amazing. love arnav, he has got solution for everything. love can anybody into anyone. just loved the update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Amazing update!
Absolutely loved it! They are so effing adorable!!
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Sooo cute
Sooo Romantic
Chooo Chweet

I am already in a dreamland & was really blushing after reading these two parts & I am definitely not in a mood to return back to reality.

My Pm inbox is full with updates of last 4 days & I haven't yet opened any other stories - yours being the 1st. & if I go on behaving like a psycho (Like smiling by myself, talking to myself, blushing that with apparently no reason to onlookers), I am sure to loose my job soon. What are you doing to me Chav with your stories. I suddenly feel like hugging Arshi or live in this dreamland only.

Awesome description & awesome moments Chav.

Love u for this lovely update sweetuuu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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r u for real? seriously u r god's gift ...i jst loved ur wrks...thnks for writing...thnkng u for letting us read ur wrks... tis is so wonderful osm...
tis is out of the world...
aftr readng previous update i want to tell u not to make arnav ran behind her & but other than tat idea i couldnt comeup with anythng i have been eagerly witing for tis update...
i hv been thnkng abt wat u wil come up with wat wil arnav do wat wil kushi do, tat to after tat nightmare .i jst cant stop thnkng abt it & wait for the update seriously i jst couldnt wait...
again u presented it so beautifully...
its jst mindblowng idea & tat to u gave it as lavs idea ,tats so beautifully written...their phn conversation was osm...
yhy jst ovrcam another difficulty in their lif...tat too a main one not seeing each other for 1 whole week is jst too much for them...thn again u mad it so beautiful...
this is also their another first...lav u r genius...
u r such a fabulous writer...
u r jst unbelivable...
u r making it impossible for me to wait for the update seriously i jst cant wait for nxt updt...
i thnk u r lookng into the life so differently...u r jst amazng & by the way u r moving the story & presenting it always tells abt how u r leadng ur lif...aftr readng ur works i came to one conclusion tat u mst b a beautiful & good girl at heart... u will giv evry1 around u a happy time & memories...
i jst love u..tis last chapter make me look at u at differnt light...
tis chap affects me a lot... seriously thanks for writing & allowng me read ur wrks...
i jst love ur evry word & evry part of the story...
i pray to god for ur brightful future fo tis tallent...
u wil become a grt writer & so plz use the same pen name life long & notify us in IF abt ur future wrks plz...
and am really sry for not commentng on last 2updates & also in tts really really sry i hv family fun tats y i cant comment... i jst hit like aftr reading the chaps & tat to i hd read during midn8 nly tats y i cant comment sry...
evrythng is so fantastic...
loved it so much...
Edited by dhulanya - 10 years ago

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