Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 36

hi hamlet

superb ud ..dutta wants to know his past & parents ..naku & roops are sweet to take krishna ..he got a home ..ud soon😊

hi hammiee

loved the ud ..mein aa gai 😊

dutta is extremly distrubted since his orgin is like a blank slate ..he has no idea of his biological family ...fair enough ..did he recently knew about the fact.. as his foster family doesn't have idea about his turmoil

i thought he owns the security firm ...he is just a employee & thats the reason nana & seema can dictate term..dutta is a bhau woh apne maan ke karta hai ...😉

krishna meeting was nice & u wove it quite well with naku in pic...security will be provided by dutta ..krishna ke bahane mil bhi lega ...aksar ud ke akhir mein he mulaqt kyu hote hai😆

ud soon
as always u r amazinggg hammieee

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Hi HamleT

Awesome ud..DutTa is in security He should find ways to get Knowledge AbouT his past..He IS sad in his life Naku can bring haPpiness..Waiting to see it..Ud Soon😊

hi hamlet

fab ud ..dutta understood the pain of orphan & decided to do something for him ..naku is harrassed & she requires a security ..krishna has a home too ud soon😊

• LOVE U LOADS @HAMMIE; MY PEARY,
• Before u do start wondering why this love in the very starting, I wanna tell u , the speed , the progression done with the character , with the story is commendable. I m very happy at this moment. in ur last comment, yes I found ans to some of my questions and some still due BUT I WOULD LIKE U TO CARRY ON as I too wait 4 next chapter with my baited breath.

I think kala mam has started taking an initiative, and even forming a perspective about the dsp's meet with nakusha. Well AS, too can be the partner in crime. Oh !!! baaji is involved too. Glad, that baaji is not GREY. Dsp I shaving a war within himself with himself. THIS CHARACTERSIZATION VERY MUCH APT , TOO MUCH PRECISE WITH THE DSP OF LTL. He feels enraged 4 this biological parents and in that course , his foster father; SP and foster mother AS too. SP is not alive, so that particular rage stopped somewhere growing up further within dsp 4 his foster father. But AS is alive , so she faces and is facing the trauma of dsp 4 him , being a left-over, abandoned child , with his neglecting and too some point, hurting behavior. Dsp , till now has not been able to accept AS as his mother. BUT on the other side, dsp loves really AS, and SP too. a small memorization of them , and he feels light

His inner trauma is not letting him free to breath to live, to love. Dsp is not having ANY TRUSTING ISSUE in this ff.; I guess. Till now what I have deciphered. It will the dsp, the rocky edge, who will start to fall 4 his love FIRST.

Again the divine and this time maa jagdamba. GOOD. But I found it sudden. THIS IS GAIN A IMP. CHARACTERISTIC of dsp. till now, naku hasn't even started to think about dsp. I hope that dsp get a total positive vibes from nakusha while proposing to her otherwise...

So roops and baaji, already going on. Lol. This time roops will face some negative vibes from AS. And naku to face from seema. I m very happy that time u r giving importance to seema. In the 1^st part; "out of my hands". I wasn't there to ask u 4 this BUT this time I m here. waiting eagerly 4this triangle; erhhh, rectangle; baaj----seema----roops----dutta----nakusha. I think, it's hexagon.

What's this name!! jhingur !!! Well it's a insect. Kudos to ur imagination.

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamletawesome ud ..dutta is an orphan & in krishna he saw himself ..trusted him at right place & naku can get to see him often 😳..ud soon

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee ,eyyee naku! thanks for your ongoing support

loved the ud will be back😊
i know, you'll return naku.. looking forward to your comment.. much love hammie