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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1001

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie pata haina main kaun hoon?" I am Dutta Patil! a man with feelings, with dreams , with a damn past! "

Those nightmares , took me into another story, story inside a story, what happened there, what can happen in d darkness of a cell.what it has to do with d man with feelings, with dreams ,with past...
Those noises came back to live.it seems dutta was sexually abused by that female inspector.I remember the advertisement on some Scottie saying "Why should only boys have all the fun"? Ahemmm India k perspectives mein ye thoda hajam karna mushkil hain, but yeah I know this happens in the cells.dear hammie, I remember the prisoners in abu garib prison I saw d pic years back, those pictures of tortures, and yes a female soldier took her pic while torturing the male prisoners.

Seema is still to me, like d villain of aitraaz.its funny I felt k Tomy kutte k naam hi ho sakte.why she named her son Tomy?taking extra care of dutta when motu seth is away.
Baji was hilarious I chuckled when d woman asked him something about her inability to pay for some machine for d car and baaji gives her d only solution that is not to use a car.kya baaji garibo ko bhi car mein baithneka shoukh ho sakte. Like me.

The session between dutta n sups...ye thoda ajeeb nehi hain k dutta agreed for something like this in the first place. Nakku k influence raha hoga.saab bula bulake usse pata jo liye hain.jab k he is nothing close to being saab.
Anyway dutta man gye, n came to share his feelings with a psychiatrist is one of d ajooba of the universe.still he did so.and the next was a catastrophe.

I m loving dutta n his nightmares.
I wish ...k it could b picturized.that too on mishal.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1002

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie,
fantastic chapters, all of them.now finished chapter 6.
its really interesting.so far ur best after wedded bliss.or its a tie?mmm let me finished first.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 i cant stop laughing. waise i wass going to give comment on 3 chapters.but ye hasi nehi rokta , Dutta telling nakku he left job to save his n seema's ijjat. 🤣🤣
it seems pure dunia is after dutta's izzat.hope he lives with his izzat.

hain , dutta is going to doc supriya for psychotherapy sessions????? ye thoda unlike dutta nehi hua? cz dutta is not that type to listen to someone and open himself to ayre gayre...

nakku-dutta bus riding sessions, so much middle class romance, a girl like me can relate to this.bravo to ur imagination.👏when dutta says idhar aa nakku n nakku winces in pain i thought dutta is on that don mood. lol.fir baad mein samajh aye k dutta was helping her ride on that bus.

Dutta's nightmares r as mysterious as u Hammie.but gradually unfolding through flashbacks. bits n pieces of memories...very beautifully portrayed.amazing...

story is getting darker, some blooming Don want's to use Duuta's damn care attitude to establish his rule over patil niwas...and u brought Shabbir as a chota mastan khabru, 😆😆 ye revenge hain kya, digu is there...hahahahaha.hammie ji ap bhi na...ek writer can write anything, haina?

u have cleared verry beautifully why dutta is miffed with his motherr.basically he is miffed with himself for gifting her widowhood.the scene brought tears in my eyes where dutta tries to cup her face , and caught in the act by baji and leaves the room.hayeee waiting for the ice to melt.

Hammazingly beautiful story.what a refreshing change after the ideal life in PR to the dark, doomed story...
Keep writing.
PUBLISH UR WORK.I WANT TO BUY UR BOOKS FROM BANGLADESH.😡

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: simpleAnna
Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie pata haina main kaun hoon?" I am Dutta Patil! a man with feelings, with dreams , with a damn past! "
hi taz.. I see you return, still impressed by this ex convict Dutta patil..
Those nightmares , took me into another story, story inside a story, what happened there, what can happen in d darkness of a cell.what it has to do with d man with feelings, with dreams ,with past...
Those noises came back to live.it seems dutta was sexually abused by that female inspector.I remember the advertisement on some Scottie saying "Why should only boys have all the fun"? Ahemmm India k perspectives mein ye thoda hajam karna mushkil hain, but yeah I know this happens in the cells.dear hammie, I remember the prisoners in abu garib prison I saw d pic years back, those pictures of tortures, and yes a female soldier took her pic while torturing the male prisoners.
yes its true.. women can make a pass on men as well.. and get away with it, as in some cultures,a woman is deemed more vulnerable than a man.. yes, I have seen the film aitrazz.. very interesting..
Seema is still to me, like d villain of aitraaz.its funny I felt k Tomy kutte k naam hi ho sakte.why she named her son Tomy?taking extra care of dutta when motu seth is away. I tried to use the original strand in Laagi where seema.. dutta's first love opted to choose the garage owner ,rather than the poor,ordinary, mechanic dutta.. she chose money as opposed to love.
Baji was hilarious I chuckled when d woman asked him something about her inability to pay for some machine for d car and baaji gives her d only solution that is not to use a car.kya baaji garibo ko bhi car mein baithneka shoukh ho sakte. Like me... baji in Laagi , introduced dutta to the underworld.. because dutta wanted to make big money over night ,to get back at Seema..

The session between dutta n sups...ye thoda ajeeb nehi hain k dutta agreed for something like this in the first place. Nakku k influence raha hoga.saab bula bulake usse pata jo liye hain.jab k he is nothing close to being saab...i loved the sessions... with the psychaitrist.. important to wean back an ex -prisoner back into the real world..
Anyway dutta man gye, n came to share his feelings with a psychiatrist is one of d ajooba of the universe.still he did so.and the next was a catastrophe.

I m loving dutta n his nightmares. see taz.. the man needs professional help.. I put my heart into this story.. its coming back .. gradually..
I wish ...k it could b picturized.that too on mishal
taz, thanks for making the time to read this saga.. enjoyed reading your comment.. do carry on reading and commenting.. oh and keeping my past alive... yours , hammie..😛

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1004

Originally posted by: simpleAnna
Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie, hi taz...your nagging has brought me here.. waise thanks for being my reminder..
fantastic chapters, all of them.now finished chapter 6. really? so much into it? or you have much spare time at your hands?
its really interesting.so far ur best after wedded bliss.or its a tie?mmm let me finished first.
wedded bliss.. thek tha... FA is more to my liking..
🤣 i cant stop laughing. waise i wass going to give comment on 3 chapters.but ye hasi nehi rokta , Dutta telling nakku he left job to save his n seema's ijjat. 🤣🤣
it seems pure dunia is after dutta's izzat.hope he lives with his izzat.
hummm😆.. and i tell you he is the strong ,silent type.. the kind who fascinates chicks.. all want to thaw his hard exterior..
hain , dutta is going to doc supriya for psychotherapy sessions????? ye thoda unlike dutta nehi hua? cz dutta is not that type to listen to someone and open himself to ayre gayre...
welll tu dekhna... why its important..
nakku-dutta bus riding sessions, so much middle class romance, a girl like me can relate to this.bravo to ur imagination.👏when dutta says idhar aa nakku n nakku winces in pain i thought dutta is on that don mood. lol.fir baad mein samajh aye k dutta was helping her ride on that bus.
erhhh.. who is the unknown namoona who waits at the bus stop for you? eyes down! ,hope you not allowing any tom,dick,or harry to sit by you taz?? whats wrong with your car?
Dutta's nightmares r as mysterious as u Hammie.but gradually unfolding through flashbacks. bits n pieces of memories...very beautifully portrayed.amazing...

story is getting darker, some blooming Don want's to use Duuta's damn care attitude to establish his rule over patil niwas...and u brought Shabbir as a chota mastan khabru, 😆😆 ye revenge hain kya, digu is there...hahahahaha.hammie ji ap bhi na...ek writer can write anything, haina?
haaan! it was my frustration.. tried to give vent in a round about way.. mind you SA.. is proving he is still a star.. respect him.,i do.. only watched one of his shows KAYAMAT or some name.. Sanju was with him,she too was superb..
u have cleared verry beautifully why dutta is miffed with his motherr.basically he is miffed with himself for gifting her widowhood.the scene brought tears in my eyes where dutta tries to cup her face , and caught in the act by baji and leaves the room.hayeee waiting for the ice to melt.
welll... Laagi theme extended.. my way.
Hammazingly beautiful story.what a refreshing change after the ideal life in PR to the dark, doomed story...
Keep writing.
PUBLISH UR WORK.I WANT TO BUY UR BOOKS FROM BANGLADESH.😡 ..bart felt the same way as you do.. those were the days.. but you taz has churned up the past.. thank you avid reader.. carry on reading... yours hammie

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nusrat

@NusiSg

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1005

Hey hammie..I barged in..:p haan re I agree to u on SA part.. n sanju n him in kayamat.. waah kia yaad dilaya... some star's perseverance n will power making them unique n their seriousness towards their profession n voilla 2 yrs n still ruling the charts.. it's all payback hammie.. I agree.. chal chhod.. FA seems intriguing. .I think I'll start reading it once my crazy scedule allow me.. dun u 2 dare frget me in ths cmmnting n annotating game..😡 I'll be bac here Insha'Allah

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1006

Originally posted by: NusiSg
Hey hammie..I barged in..:p haan re I agree to u on SA part.. n sanju n him in kayamat.. waah kia yaad dilaya... some star's perseverance n will power making them unique n their seriousness towards their profession n voilla 2 yrs n still ruling the charts.. it's all payback hammie.. I agree.. chal chhod.. FA seems intriguing. .I think I'll start reading it once my crazy scedule allow me.. dun u 2 dare frget me in ths cmmnting n annotating game..😡 I'll be bac here Insha'Allah
hi nus... so good to see you doc sahiba .. want you here nus.. haan funnily enough my family and me both noticed Sanju... I recall she was a lady of the night in role.. my family found her stunning looking.. her manner in role was coarse and rough ,as required. She was very convincing in her acting.. sanju seems a down to earth person..fun loving full of beans , happily married.. I was surprised to see her in Ishq.. and well pleased how she played the mother of a five year mother.. loved the flower fairy.. her and sanju made a convincing pair.. yes i hear Sanu ke kafi fan mail hai..
as for you haan do read FA.. I enjoyed writing it.. hope you like it as much as i enjoyed writing it..
come again..and ohhh chotti will be happy to see her nuspa as well.. yours hammie

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1007

Hammieee nuspaaa.
Wow nuspa when u said I have gifts waiting here on BB I thought its hammies annotations u r mentioning, woh to padh chuki thi.I stalk hammie, u know na? 😉
Haan to ham ne stick nikali to yaha aa gyi main aur meko current lag gyeee.
Hawww nusupa meri major ko granted leke ye gunde dutta k pas aa gye, kyun k I said it's a dark story.apko to dark stories and painful endings se piyar hain.meko maloom.is lie aa gyi na?

Hammie hammie hammie hammie , I m loving the gradual growth in dutta in terms of showing his affection towards his aye.u see this is what I mentioned in blue blood, a gradual growth.its beautiful. 👏

Nakku looking at d screen of laptop, but not looking at anything.bob guessing it right.
It's cute.nakku gradually falling for him.dutta is still the hard rock.aheemmm.it seems he is too moved by seema's gestures.even letting aye saab know that he was...ahem...aye saab jaldi se sundar bahu lake shadi karado iske.

Though I can't blv dutta would have agreed for any psychiatric session, but I m thoroughly enjoying the whole idea and dialogues of d session.hammie u make magic.

New villain jeera blade, what kind of name is this? indian ppl have such names? Christian?
Anyway D vs D , dutta n digu.
Great tashan.
Nakku is worried.
Dutta agreed for dhanda.ohh darkness.
I can't bl AS forgave chameli.

Hello hammie, back again, ur past😆
chapter 8 is just superb.fantastic, the way u showed dutta gradually getting inclined towards the dark path, he got a luxurious house, AS not questioning much, nakku same.

it seems jeera blade is in love with dutta, calling him evrynight😆😆😆
lovely chai session between both with haddi/hada baaji in between.naku has began to show her weakness towards him,n its clearly evident that this guy has an elevated mood when he sees naku.

chapter 9, hain... PW ppl r bidding him farewell? hawww when this ex-con became so laadla of ppl?ye to khud garib hain, how can he even donate money?

painful goodbye scene between naku dutta, rings a bell.PR?ohhh those were classy goodbye scenes.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1008

Going through a beautiful journey.breathtaking.this is ur best work till date hammie.seems to me like a tragedy of Shakespeare, the rise n d fall.how dutta sold his soul to the devil n reached the new house, house of his dreams, i can see happiness in roops eyes, content in aye saabs eyes...dreams come true but with a great price.
Dutta returning to his past, this is d best of ur writing.hammie u r unbelievably outstanding here.i felt goosebumps, i saw dutta killing his father, i saw the house on fire, the helplessness of ayesab, desperate kala...
Magician u r hammie.just wasting talent on d forum.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1009

Hammie, only once yes, but i m still having goosebumps. it was such a lovely journey, i was in love with duttas nightmares, baji's nautanki, nakkus sobs, roops k so cute na, AS k jagadambe, Babi k worries, Jeera k darling darling wala dialogue, digu k stupid sa dress sense, shabbir k disgusting hair cut, shethji k leg pooling, supriyas psychotherapy session, morey k disgusting looks, mostly the prison around n inside dutta, really i will miss all these.

U r truly the Shakespeare of the forum, this is a perfect Shakespearean tragedy, the hard work, the rise, and the downfall. ''Destiny'' becomes the key point of the story.the lead characters fall prey to games of fate.It is soo heart wrenching that nakku was waiting for dutta in her suhag raat, she had too many dreams of a naye naweli dulhan, the color red plays here. A dulhan in red, red sindoor, red outfit, bangles, and her husband returns, with blood red soaked sherwani, dutta gifted her pistol as the wedding gift n how the very pistol had such a pivotal role in giving it a tragic ending.

I saw all the readers fuming in anger.whatever the issues were, u could have made it easier for them but writing one more UD.what looked contradictory in the end was the things dutta tried to make nakku understand. in suhag raat he gifted her that pistol and wanted her to take him as he is, the don, the man with pistol. but what happened in the end is he was telling nakku that he will return to her after his punishment ends, as a husband of a law abiding citizen naku.

keep writing hammie, this was the best piece of ur writing till date cz the pace of the story of perfect ( the ending was abrupt though), too much suspense, emotion, drama, all the laagi touch everywhere, the readers thoroughly enjoyed each n every bit, i loved the dark side of everything about dutta, aise darkness mein ik nasha charta hain. brilliant hammie, loved loved loved it.loved the chota mota cute sa romantic scene here.those subtle kkind of romantic scenes r superb, my fav.
i love u hammie.