Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 100

Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

Hey hammie.. Feels great to read your comments. hi barbji..😛 happy new year

Yaa yaa i too remember that hand to hand fight sequence as well as the BG music.. And nakus item number too.. Dutta and baji would surely had a cardiac arrest if they had seen her dance to that song🤣

methinks mahi was doing some dance reality show at the time... i recall how beautiful she looked and how as a viewer i hoped dutta would turn up...

And that tight slap across suresh's round soft cheeks.. 😆 The sound of slap had resounded in the room.. Oh.. What an attitude dutta had!! "Ya toh tu bohot himmat wala hai ya bohot bada bewakoof ke tune DSP ki patni ki jhoothi tasveer banake uspar ungli uthayi", remember almost every dialogue from that show..mish's voice modulation when dutta used to speak were superb.. Yaa two characters which are completely different from each other should not be compared.. But still i would say that for me.. Dutta stands out every test to be the strongest male lead ever on tv... The character of viplav is nothing for me.. No wonder why thousands of laagi fans had quit Ikrs and never bothered to look at ishq.. 6 years og Aradhana.. For 6 years i have been worshiping Playtime's LTL.. 😳

even now I have yet to come across the iconic character of dutta in tellyland.. the character who tapped my writing skills..

You know hammie recently i met a girl in chandranandini forum.. @shilpisona .. Noticing my earlier dp which had dutta in it, she had asked me whether i am a fan of laagi or not.. Even she admitted that she is still a great laagi fan but did not find ikrs to be interesting.. 😛

Again i met another person in IF some weeks back.. @beautiful. Even she said that too much kiss wiss between a 17 and 34 did not evoke much interest in her😆 and inspite of being a laagi/MR fan, she could not stick to ishq for long..

its what ever turns veiwers on.. like your self for me too its a right turn off.. although iam watching Bandini which is about a young girl and a much older man..in fact Santu, is a mother figure head to the heros children..all older than her... but these days such shows like balka vidu , Lado are not made... i guess times and tastes have changed barbie..

Baas hum dono dutta ka naam lete lete have completed watching full IKRS 🤣

We both have much patience in us. I must admit😆😆
ishq was showing loyalty to Mishal and not to the character he played.. now the show is over..my work there is over..

Honestly hammie.. For me those extra cozy scenes were total bakwas🤢

There have been so many good romantic shows..recently i completed watching IPKKND.. i had watched many Ekta kapoor dramas too .. Kaunsa serial mein main story ko chodke romance, kiss and hugs pe zada concentrate karte hai, i dont know..

Anyway enough of bashing..

Your post is my post.. So just vented out my frustration.. Still unable to forgive IKRS..

its ok barbs.. its always a pleasure to see you here.. still love your dp.. dutta remains with me.. that is beauty of the character, for me.. its lasting..

Thanks hammie for such sweet replies .. You are too kind. 😳
good to see you mate... keep smiling in 2017... 😃 yours hamlet53..

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hammieee ahemmm,..taz,you are on a roll.. no stopping you is there? thanks for reading..my very first FF..
chapter 57,58,59,60,61

u gave such a visual treat to all tasha fans, who could not see a proper wedding ceremony. u must have satisfy their thirst...👏👏👏 i felt like i was in the wedding, such beautifully u portrayed each and everything. i didnt know anything about maharastrian wedding and u never fail to surprise me with ur homework and brilliance.
the batchelor party, aheeemmm baaji nautanki and dutta drinking till they loss senses, girls, music and what not u mentioned.baji never let an stone unturned to make sure his bhao never misses anything.the two lads in the swimming pool drooling with daru k bottle was a hilarious thing. though i dont enjoy the alcohol consumption scenes, still i had to laugh at their condition.
TAZ... dutta's wedding in Laagi took up many episodes.. the creatives have all the rasams to base their episodes on.. people love watching their cultural pre nuptials... I attempted to do the same.. writing become easier for me.. of course I added my own touch..
Subh mangal saaabhdhaan ...ho gye.their first night was more hilarious.😆 nakku never fail to surprise me and i liked how dutta never forced himself on her. and the superb idea of jmm hammie ufff where u get all these ideas the public must have enjoyed it sooo much.even i loved the romance part and the final consummation. and here i fet like telling u hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie take a bow.this scene is something which u need to get cautious about.there is such a thin line between what looks natural going with the story and a po*n.and take a bow dear in no where i felt it was going that way. rather it went like all other romantic scenes. lakin readers pagal ho gye honge. i remember their consummation scene on laagi, mahi vij looked like a moron and...somehow it never could met the expectations of audience. here ou favourite writer satisfied her readers once again.👏
well.. you know me.. deep down, like the original programme ,I too preferred to be staid and graceful.. erhh what acouple does on their consumation night should be treated with a certain sanctity and dignity.. this is my view ,other writers may not agree..
hmm duttaa nakku sometimes confuse me. Dutta is nowhere like the serialwala dutta who was a shy one. this dutta is very much human who knows what he wants and he knows how to get it.and obviously not in front of gharwales. bechari nakku, dutta demanding her to change clothes in front of him. She is not too willing then why is he even forcing , as he doesnt force... on the other hand kabhi kabhi ye samajh na ate nakku chahti kya hain.jab mile to bappa help...jab na mile to kyun na mile...she is sometimes the needy one sometimes the shy one.this is what i felt about their intimate scenes.their first kiss when nakku was so willing that dutta suspected her, in subsequent kisses nakku was shy and telling ap janoar and pushing him away oh bappa n all...as a reader i was just curious to know why u made them this way.i have seen how the readers were crazy for an ud from u. kabhi u r bz then they would make shor on ur thread.such a great bunch of readers and hammie to wrote for them, exactly what they needed.
loved your musings taz.. trouble is shuhag raat is amuch hyped up issue..speciallyin the families where a wedding takes place.. people fail to take note of the change the two people are going through.. their privacy will be encroached... plus all the events physically too can be an exhausting experience.. think about it..
ye baaji the nautanki invited khan, bhatnagar and other pupils.lol the song, to me was another hilarious scene.i dont know what they sang. but ... what about kkkhaan now? is she hurt wetting her pillows?
😆 thujhe kkkhan ke bare fikar hai... wet pillow and all.. roone de use..
keep writing hammie. i read 5 chapters back to back cz u forced me to, i could not stop myself and come to comment here.i just had to satisfy my thirst as well.
zayeda kush maat ho... ihope you are not ignoring your kam sham...
Yaaahooo i finished another thread. you are going 100MPH... PHEWWW.. keep reading till the end..

Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

Mishal's two ex heroines, our very favourite Mahhi with Sanjeeda.. in a recent function..

Mahhi has shared this pic just a day back.. on sanjeeda's birthday party I guess, 25th december 2016

wowwwie barbs... this is such a treat... to see as you said, two of mishal's ex heroines.. to see mahi.. was double treat.. still looks like a porcelain doll... sanju too looks stunning.. hain.. he's posing with mahi...😆 nice one.. thanks barbs this for me is your new years pressie for me and a few others here.. 👏 regards hamlet53

And see this one.. Mishal Mahhi together on 25th dec 2016 party

hayeee.. i have nothing to say.. may god bless the butterfies in my stomach and the goosebumps too..😆 never expected to see Masha in a pic ever..and all thanks to sanjeeda for inviting both of them to her party

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

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Hammie hammie hammie hamie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammieee...taz... glad you picked some of my fav..numbers .. lion king's the lion sleep's tonight is my number one... and Manisha Koirala.. such an angelic face... stunning ..may god give her long healthy life..

so u know now how much i loved ur chapter 62.
awesomeee
ye meri type k ud nikle to.
action dhinchak plus romanceee.ekdamse i remembered this song.
😳😳😳

nakku ko shadi k bad kya ho gye short circuit brain pe?yeto shadi se pehle besharm thi, shadi k baad sharmili ho gye, begair dutta se na sharmati, apne pati dutta se sharmane lagi...ahem i m still confused but yes then honeymoon suit part, gosh so R O M A N T I C. I L O V E D I T...👏 awww army camp mein chota bed nakku saying kaha soyenge hum and awww dutta taking her in his arms n telling her ... to rest on his chest,ahem ahem nuspa i know ur eyes r watching my moves but u know i m hopeless romantic apke chotiko ye saaab pasan.😆 ahem n bomb blast action dhishkiaaannn nakku bhag bhaag for cover bhaag...and when dutta feels safe, romance dubara suru bhi ho gye.though blv karneme brain na bolte k aisa situation mein achanak se dutta will give her ganpati pendant for muhdikhayi but... it was still cute n nakku , i though fail to blv if her mind is in right track, is giggling!!!yeah honeymoon suit aisa ho to pati ko to patni ka bohat kari khoti sunna chahiye, nakku yehri hain n she isnt acting normal ye to saab se do kadam age hi hain.she is enjoying !!!! and finally loved the way u ended, HAAN, KAHA THE HUM DONO...??hayeee.
erhhh...filled with romanticisim..you are taz... Ammba was concieved in a trench...😆 guess what she will end up being?? you are nearing the end of PR .. pata nehin kyon.. my heart feels sick... .. thanks loyal reader... yours hamlet53.. dutta fan..

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie,.so you still racing.. rok ja! itne jaldi mein kyon hai? you are making me insecure too..my work is still on the forum..
end of one journey and beginning of another one. fettered affection next.the prologue is very captivating👏
FA..? kya ho gaya hai thuhje safed coat.. ?😕
I cant blv it is over.still i m in a shock.the last few chapters took me to a journey showing an ideal married life between the two, and pregnancy...the different phases, ur portrayal, extremely beautiful.i m sorry hammie i never wanted to make a single comment, u r at a fault, i loved the aftter marriage chapters so much that i forgot to comment i kept reading n kept reading.
i think I enjoyed writing the antenatal,post natal bits..grew up in a family of docs.. mere mayee, phoopes, my cuz... but hammie was too much with finer senses... personally would have liked life in a uniform..
i loved the way dutta took nakku along with him, giving her a virtual taste of being with him in the roads, in the museums, london's eye or something...the buildings...he is so romantic i must say. reminded me of the song jag ghumeya.
imagination.. taz.. had to keep readers happy ,plus wanted to share my life experience with people too..
it was lovely to find another London baji Bradely. dutta missed his baaji so much.lovely bonding him n baji.
duji..best couple of Laagi...
hainnn dutta ko hamesha koi na koi mil jata hain. Dutta kamar paralyzed karke ghar baithe to nakku mile, dutta teacher bane to khan mile, dutta uk gye to jane mile...hayeee.
😆 you have recapped rather well ,safed coat..😃
dutta is such a caring husband i really loved him thoughout nakkus journey of being a mother.
Allah bless ur pen Hammie, u r sooo brilliant.i loved loved loved loved the epilogue. like father like daughter, full circle of life.haan... this is how I chose to end PR..his job, continues in his extended version..Ammba...
thank you for reading my first and longest piece of writing.. I enjoyed writing it to the full..regards hammie

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

hello hammie, thanks for making me travel to a wonderful land of story telling, u returned the book worm self to me once again.i had difficulties with the language once, but gradually i got used to ur style n language n tabse basss maine khatam karke dam li hain.
taz... don't know why.. but there lies within me a certain sadness of years gone by.. the Laagi forum, my friends, ivy ,bart nakusha.. andothers.. hammie wrote for them.. and aimed to meeet their demands.. you took now belong to the era..close to my heart..
Painful Rapture is not only a story, it is a lesson we learn and earn after finishing the whole of it, how an ideal life will b in our setting, with family, with love, with honesty, with respect, with understanding, with mercy, with desires...
heartfelt words.. taz..
The life of a fauji, a battle both inside and outside, separation from the loved one, bliss of reunion, sacrifices for country...very beautifully portrayed.
tried to show a soldiers life.. dutta as one who defends the borders,so we can sleep peacefully..
Dutta as a character was very different from the Dutta of LTL1.this dutta isnt shy, this dutta clearly knows what he wants and how to get it.this dutta is not an emotional fool, it is not possible to escape his sharp narrow eyes, nobody could give him dhoka.the PT-patient session between Tasha was a real treat in the beginning.dutta with his patriotism wins our heart.in some places i felt k romance portion thoda zyada ho gye , when i started reading comments from ur readers i came to know why is so, all of them were drooling of this young hot major saab. this was for great public demand, as in original story there was not scenes of much romance, not even a proper consummation scene, i was too irritated with that confused expression of the actress on the only scene.so here PR successfully fulfilled the public demands.
yes... my readers.. set out the plots😆..
Dutta as a teacher, he made a great teacher...i have learnt how to teach.how to engage them in practical examples and motivate them...
now taz.. you know where that bit came from...
nakku as a PT was terrific, i was too much surprised at the whole homework u did in developing characters...hammie u r such a dedicated writer.i lovethe way u take things. wish i could b like u, perfect. MashaAllah.
oh... wanted the story to be related to life asmuch as possible.. so yes research had to be done.. the readers..
Baaji as a friend, kya kehna...most selfless character of PV, in the beginning he ws overshadowed by naku but gradually developed his character too.
jahan dutta .. wahan baji bhi hoga hamesha
in the end i want to share two songs with u, the flavour of PR...ah yes.. the lovely songs.. Border film I saw on the big screen.. all eyes were moist at the unique life of an army man..
taz... it meant so much tome that you finished the longest piece of my writing... cannot explain to you,how much joy you gave me.. yours, hamlet53..
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Originally posted by: simpleAnna

i made this without knowing the story, abto lagta hain yewala perfect hain.Hammie why dont u publish it?it is breathtakingly awesome.
yes you made it... the finest of the cover sleeves...👏 you reading it means equal to having it published..
Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie...infinity.
😛 kuch zayeda tu nehin ho gaye..
My favourite READ :
Dressed in a white kurta opened at the neck, part of his curly black chest hairs evident and in creased white pyjama, Dutta steadily progressed forward followed by a prison officer behind him. How well he knew this new cordoned off hint of blue painted ground floor abode of his. Beneath his feet squeaked the neutral toned slippery smooth prolonged corridor, fringed on either sides by rows of metal rod cells. His eyes noted each cell partitioned from the other by a cemented block of the hint of blue painted concrete pillars. His eyes observed the galvanized iron bar of security lock sensors that ran all the way along the top of the cells and held all the cells under tight security monitoring. His ear strained as the prison warden behind him, irritatingly ran his stick on the metal bars of the cell doors, crank! scrape! that sound how he shirked when he heard it in the deathly dark silence of the night, like a brief witches cackle! that he hid from it. But now was the odd occasion when he was forced to come out of dark solace to face the light of reality ,come clean with what fate handed to him next. His heels smarted as they dug into the prison sandals, which piped and rubbed on the cell walkway, but he continued with the requirement. With one hand loosely creased behind his back, he slanted his neck and contracted his lion like eyes as he spotted his magnified outline before him.The security light behind him cast his ghostly silhouette ahead and although he travelled forward bit by bit, his tall and majestic self, gobbled up his shadow, in the long corridor flanked by cells at both sides.
the sound of the stick against the metal bars.. was an auditory image that played on my mind.. jaise sher ko pinjara mein bund kar diya ho..
Hammieee hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie.
READDD : But now was another move back into the civilized world.The notion still numbed him, he was at a loss to decipher what exactly he felt ,happy ?sad? excited? none of them made ground with him, but what did was alert apprehension of things to come.
i should have said FEAR! ... WILL HE BE ACCEPTED?
ye bhi padhlooo naaa; He raised his head and looked at the sky, it was the same colour as it was from within the penitentiary, the sun made his eyes squint, that too was the same, the sounds ,smells of life seemed identical to those behind bars.. so where is freedom he mused for a split second is it a fleeting state of the mind? 👏 waaahhh kya likha apne, haan freedom is a state of mind only. hayeee this is a doomed chracter. mujheto bohat maza anewala hain iske sath.
mujhe tu thujhe dekh ke mazza ah raha hai... eyeee! fictitious character ..hai abh ise bhi na pyar kar bethi... nus se baat kerne pare ge mujhe.. to keep you in line..
Baji comes to take his bhao after he gets released from jail, abhi they r remembering their past. it is not sensible on baji's part to remind him about seema, her betrayal when dutta already moved on.
baji... speaks first and thinks later...
the AS-DUTTA scene was predictable, usse jail bhejnewala gawa jo di thi usne, hope the ice melts down, i love the warmth between dutta-roops n dutta saying '' kitna badi ho gyi hain tu''
in Laagi there were some amazing scenes between roops and dutta... yaad hain mujhe aaj bhi
YAAAYYY SOOO FINALLYYY AAA KOEEELLL NAKKUUU, hammie a thousands of hugs for u, meri shikayet thi apse jab nakku k rup k description padhti thi. haan ye nakku shayed black color paint karke koel bani hui to protect herself. but still...
waise Laagi forum ke bhi fav..koel he thi..
hammieee i m going to love this, i knowww...hummm me to thinks the pagal has made quite an impact on you... now my sanity will suffer.. rolling my eyes...😛.. yours amazed at you.. hammie..
#nus where are you..?

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hamie hammie, yes... safed coat tazanna..kya name diya barbji na thujhe
FA chapter 2 n 3.
tell me why are you going at an accelerated speed??? just answer the question.. you in a race??
i had goosebumps hammie...chicken skin.. you must be joken'taz
it was terrific, Dutta's nightmare, that torture, that taste of own blood, those cruel laughs, fighting for food... inmate.. atrocities.. gruelling experience
u r like a professional writer wasting all the talent on the forum...that is your view.. taz..
it is sad u never give importance on whatever i tell u...your words mean a lot to me taz..
this reader of urs have a dream, and my dream is to read the published book written by u.after the first 2 chapters i am more angry with u for wasting ur talent n energy here.
laagi was good taz and the readers.. asked me what I could deliver.. they knew i would not over step the mark in my writings.. tasha will be eternal for me... graceful ,soulful lovers...
MAIN APRADHI HU, JHUTA NEHEI...the serialwala dutta, wahi mejaj...major saab was a refreshing change but this dutta is someone i have met before , in the serial.the doomed persona.
I love writing about doomed heros... the conflicts of the mind.. Laagi gave me one.. which I could manipulate in my own fiction...
hainnn koel nakku ek hi chapter mein gori ban gyi? ohhh NOOO...hain wonder why I did lotecha?
WHY DID U HAVE TO DO THIS HAMMIE, VERY ANGRY WITH U, KITNA MAZA ATE KALI-GORI CONFUSIONS IN AN ALREADY TROUBLED MIND,sigh choro jo hua wo gye, if i were in FA days i could have stopped this, tab hammie ne readers k baat manti thi, abhi if i beg u not to kill the leads, ek reader jo kahega ap karogi to ulta hi karogi.kia ho gya apko sarme bharti di ka stick bohat padh gye hoge, i was reading her remarks n ur replies as well.it is fun checking her comments.
bart was one for whom my head was ready to be chopped off.. great affection for her..
hainnn seema the cheappo aa gye. did u see the film aitraaz? usme priyanka k jo role the ab seema mujhe woh wali lagrahi hain.boss k hawt biwi and a forgotten past.haye oyeee.semmo k baat se boss gave naukri to duji.
yes seen aitraz...
nakusha on patil niwas, this PN is ordinary, we can easily relate to it.a worried mother is still there, phoned nakku to ask for help.DT-nakku scene hailaaa dutta ordering her to call him SAAB? ye iske saar pe bhi dande padhe kya jo alap shalap bakraha, ye to koi rich DON nehi , nehi uske master hain like serial, ulta nakku is padhi ikhi , job karnewali, usse saab bulwaye apne?
bas mera dil kiya.. mere har naku.. dutta ko saab he buliye ge.. he is her eternal Saab... waise in Marathi.. women call men sahib...
DT-nakku chai scene.aheeemmm yaar hammie do din pehle jail chut admi wont have a mental state to have a chai peenewale session with others.chalo khair apne likhdi to hum bhi padhliya n enjoyed baaji the nautanki.
bringing tea to dutta's den.. was a regular, on and off scene that bonded the saab with naku.. baji too was party to the tea savoring sessions..😆
HAIIINNN Supriya bhi hain, ye to firse suru ho gye dutta ko always ladkiyo k line milte hain, PR mein 3 the pure story mein, ab yaha already within 3 chapters 3 ban gyi, age jane kya hoga.
what is your problem taz?dutta was the inanimate anti hero.. erhhh silent ,strong one who attracted many a female... as for you.. read on F.A.. and give gujar ka halwa type comments.. thank you.. regards.. hamlet53...