Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 82

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the long update.. I cant believe how much you wrote really if you removed large chunks from it..lol.. I just adore the Arnav and Khushi of this story.. please please be nice to them.. I know you have said they will get a happyish ending but still.. i worry for them :D
Have always liked khushi but i have really warmed up to arnav too.. he is just so vulnerable. Im glad he got to know about payal, atleast now that guilt of his should go away..

Whats cooking with this Minu aunty.. I love aman, but is arnav going to complicate his own life by pushing khushi towards him. If Aman does like Khushi and Arnav realizes that, will he be able to break his friend's heart..

Glad shekhawat's secret is out.. and Shyam is not Mihir Gupta! It wouldve been interesting to see Poonam and Khushi meet .. but like you said, we shall get there :)

Chetna bhagat .. no way, You are better than that ;-)

Love your little notes.. and we shall pray for the next update to be soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Radhika, awesome update as usual.
Will come back to comment about the update soon.

But for now I loved your Q&A session. Can we have more of these sessions often.

And Chetnaji, your hubby is right. You are a very good story teller and you are better than many professional story writers. The name given by your hubby is just perfect.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update. More lovely was Q&A session. :)
Seems like despite Khushi's efforts, Aman figured who put her up for this non-date with him.

Despite whatever Aakash said or did the night Baig sir got hospitalized, Payal and he are not together...umm...

Arnav & Khushi ki gaadi aage badh rahi hai.. albeit slowly. Still happy for them. Hoping Arnav's epiphany will do wonders for him & Khushi. 😉

Missed Anjali & Preeto in this udpate. I understand, you cannot possibly include all characters in every update.. but these two characters have become so real to me, I miss them when they are not given any lines. I would have missed Thumpa too, but she got the last line, so not complaining.

Btw, what's with Ginny asking for Lav's number. Hopefully you will get to that soon. Not able to bear the suspense anymore. Hopefully there is innocent explanation for all this, but phir bhi. I can't see Preeto ke saath nainsafi hote hue. She is a deary, you know.

Don't mind how many updates it will take you to give us romantic scenes, bas kahani batate jao with a sprinkling of your Q&As now & then, that will keep me going. :)

Waiting for the next update already... :) aadat se majboor.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Such an awesome update, and wronderful story...u are an excellent writer, because you handle so many characters, and do justice to each of them...even a person who was confused with so many characters, initially, has understood every character and loves them too...kuddos...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your story brings out how self absorbed the elite are and how narssictic in their tendencies to achieve their own ends ,Anjali's is out to show her mom her weakness ,and plays on them .whereas Arnav never learned to take a stand and correct his mom on her errors ,you shown the difference between khushie family and how her father supports her and the dis functional model of the riazadas .,I think right now your story brings out everyone in vibrant colors ,very well written looking fwd to how you bring this whole motley crew of characters together .
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Posted: 10 years ago
I couldn't res my place on first/atleast second page , my laptop died on me last night

All the Raizada men were discussing pro's and cons of khushi's arrival in Thumpa's Anna prashan , but khushi neatly avoided all the drama by being absent . We missed Khushi- Poonam's face off . Writer ji are you planning for their meeting when Arnav announces khushi as the Raizada bahu . I hope Poonam will surprise us by calmly accepting khushi 😉
Akash has finally told that he has whisked Arnav's fiancee right under his nose . Though all of them pointed out the lack of chemistry between Arnav - Payal , Arnav is hurt that his friend has ditched him . Payal should have told this to Arnav instead of accepting his offer for delaying marriage .
Khushi has shown the true face of Shekawat in front of her family , glad to know Shashi believed and supported his daughter instead of the scum . Soon Shekawat might strike back since Guptas are planning to file a complaint against him .
Arnav has come in search of khushi to calm his tortured mind , they are coming closer for good . However khushi has to create a scene in which she embarrasses herself , Arnav had good laugh at her expense , atleast he was distracted from his problems for a while .
Aman is smart as always , he always highlights the update with his presence . He has figured out that Arnav has sent khushi to find what is bothering him . Hope Aman does not do anything stupid to spoil friendship between him and Arnav .

Fantastic update like always
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love how Shashi just baldly told Shady Shekhawat, "Aap tharki ho."
I swear, I stood up and cheered when he sided with Khushi in the confrontation! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago


Radhika,

Mein kya boloon ab? Your Arnav and Khushi and the whole story are just too amazing...I loved the inspired Q and A and Chetna Bhagat! The story is slowly weaving itself out as it was meant to do from the very beginning. Yes, you might have had to counter criticism that it has taken an epic length and time to get to this point, but for anything to be done well, it must be given the time to develop. Meanwhile, let me add here, how much I love every character in Tewari and Sons...whether it is the slimy Shekhawat or the bitchy Poonam Raizada...they are all flesh and blood people who live in the real world and are governed by human fallacies that beset us all...beautiful progression with this chapter...Arnav and Khushi perhaps finally realizing how much they mean to each other...hmm...yes, writer saahiba, there are times I wish I could just catch you by the collar and say, uff, can we please let them get there already, and have an affair at least...all that chemistry and what a waste...but yes,I do realize we need to get there step by baby step for them both to become the indomitable force to reckon with...a man and woman who will stand by one another in times of crisis, and help the other person defeat his/ her demons...haha...no lofty premise this, I think you are getting there slowly but surely...

Waiting for the next beautiful chapter...and yes, I know why you called it Tell-tale Heart...of course...it could never be anything else now...👏


Best,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update radhika :-)
Arnav's realisation is the best thing of this update... I'm glad about that.. he was deeply hurt when akash told him the truth.. he wanted to go out for a drive, and without his knowledge, he headed towards chandni chowk.. that itself explains how much he is into her.. and now only tumpa knows his little secret :D
Did HP hear arnav and akash's convo? ?? Is this how it reaches Poonam raizada? ???
On the other hand, even for kushi , arnav had become an integral part of her life.. hope she realises it soon..
I'm glad that shady's fiasco is out in open and i loved the way baba and shyam supported her.. and they even welcomed arnav without any drama.. but I've my own doubts about shyam???
I didn't like that fact that payal didn't tell anything to arnav.. then why did she cry after arnav broke the engagement. . Didn't she feel an ounce of guilt that she was betraying arnav??? Why didn't they come out clean with arnav the next day???
Loved Nk and jun jiju's convo about cutie and di.. cool..
What is with this Poonam raizada? ?? Did she change for real or is it another drama??? Its hard to believe when people like her change for good..
Awesome update radhika. . I loved the way you are giving us these long updates to cover up the delay in your updates. . That doesn't mean that I'm content with the length of the updates. . Yeh dil hai ki manta hi nahi.. it wants more...
ps: your Q and A are very interesting. . Give us more like this..

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