Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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reeshree

@reeshree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Loved every bit of the update.It's getting interesting with every update.

Arnav messes up every time he greets Khushi. That was harmless teasing though Khushi feels uncomfortable. A long way for them to go to that level of ease. Arnav is stunned and upset to hear about her marriage. Slowly but surely realization is dawning.

I have a feeling Poonam Raizada is not really in Japan but with her husband. Anand Raizada is having a surgery and both Arnav and Anjali are unaware of it. Strange! I hope Mihir Gupta has no connections with Khushi whatsoever. With the detectives on his tail, hopefully will get to know soon about this mystery.

Khushi and Preeto has a genuine bonding with each other. Preeto keeps changing her jijaji like chameleon changes colors. I so agree with Preeto regarding Khushi's dad reconciling with her based on her agreeing to marriage. That's not so nice. I do not understand why her Baba is so upset at her. Because she quit college or because she decided to take care of T & S or because of both and more? Still, I would have thought it better to tell them regarding creepy swine. I find it hard to believe that her parents would blame her. They might not file any complaint fearing the consequences, but at least, they would stand by her and support her in what she decides to do? What is the right thing to do with such pathetic low lives?

Arnav is so in his elements while talking with his Di and NK. Their convos are playful and touching at the same time. Wish to read a talk between Arnav and Khushi like that. Today's talk at their old school might be just the right beginning. Wow, and Khushi just told Arnav about the shady old man and he seems to understand and thought of helping. Trust is the first step towards great relation and she trusted him with the most difficult thing in her life now. Did he just hug her? Aww.., and he also offered her a job at Raizada designs. Surely everything is turning good between them. Arnav should thank NK for his suggestion.

It was a beautiful update and thanks for such long updates. Between, loved the name Debanjana.

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sman

Hey..I have seen in real life..my cousin who married a Bengali speaks perfect Bengali (certified by her in-laws and their relatives) with perfect accent.. our mother tongue Konkani has some words common with Bengali but our accent is completely different..

Daaknaam reminds me of "The Namesake" movie.. :-) I love Tumpa name..sounds hi fi :-)

Hi,

How nice of your cousin. And lovely of the family to praise her openheartedly. Its always an advantage to learn a new language or learn more about a culture. It can only enhance ones development as a person, if anything.

My SIL bought a Bengali to English/Hindi Dictionary 10 years ago when she wanted to patao my Dad to agree for this alliance. My Bro decided to take no stand, saying either he will Marry or Not Marry (anyone)!!

Once we(Mom n I) convinced dad about her good intentions to blend with us like sugar in Milk. The marriage happened with all the pomp n show. Now, the book holds a place of pride in the bookshelf still, good as new like it was 10 yrs ago.

Tumpa, sounds Hi-fi? Then 60% bong girls are hi-fi. 🤣

Namesake, The book and the movie both were nice. Btw, I have cousins named Gogol and Googli!!

Howzzat! For a Daaknaam!! 😉😆

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kritash

@kritash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

lovely update.
really liked it.
superb.
fantastic and fabulous.

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

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win7

@win7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Awesome update. So much happened. Finally Arvan has started to think about akash and payal.

Why did Arnav and D mention lavanya...

Is abhimanyu just some random guy or is he connected to the shop as well.

Akash and Aman has got me really curious.

The most mysterious persons are khushi's father and arnav's father.

Preeto, NK and anjali should meet sometime.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

brilliant update..very well written..👏

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: _Mini_

Hi,
How nice of your cousin. And lovely of the family to praise her openheartedly. Its always an advantage to learn a new language or learn more about a culture. It can only enhance ones development as a person, if anything.

My SIL bought a Bengali to English/Hindi Dictionary 10 years ago when she wanted to patao my Dad to agree for this alliance. My Bro decided to take no stand, saying either he will Marry or Not Marry (anyone)!!
Once we(Mom n I) convinced dad about her good intentions to blend with us like sugar in Milk. The marriage happened with all the pomp n show. Now, the book holds a place of pride in the bookshelf still, good as new like it was 10 yrs ago.

Tumpa, sounds Hi-fi? Then 60% bong girls are hi-fi. 🤣
Namesake, The book and the movie both were nice. Btw, I have cousins named Gogol and Googli!!
Howzzat! For a Daaknaam!! 😉😆

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:-)) enjoyed reading your comments.. Tumpa is a common daaknaam?? I like Googli daaknaam..rhymes with hoogly river :-) your cousin will kill me if he/she reads this..

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Wonderful chapter! I am in love!

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Asma

@asmanichatri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

So I couldn't resist and had to come back and post a few stray thoughts here:

I think now I know why Arnav has a wheelchair in his car, it is because dad is sick. Too bad Khushi doesn't bring it up. Actually it is probably for the best. Dosti ka mausam has just arrived, so why mess with it right away.

I am not usually an NK fan (from the show), but your NK I can get on board with.. and he has the whimsiness of the show NK, but written so much better. Amidst all the silly bantering he has with Arnav, they do share a great bond. He is genuinely concerned about his well-being and looks out for him. Can we get a scene where he and Cutie Kumari Gupta meet? Please. All the men treat Khushi with kid gloves, but I don't think NK will.. because he has zero baggage with her & she with him. So we need a scene pronto with the two of them

I love the parallels that you suggest between Arnav and Khushi's lives. The design company is Arnav's dream and sports is Khushi's. And AR and T&S are both things that they have inherited, almost reluctantly. Though T&S is much smaller compared to AR, the problems they face are similar - there are issues of inheritance, saboteurs and constant drama. Khushi, because she literally comes from the School of Hard Rocks, is able to treat T&S better.. by which I mean, she doesn't overthink as much as Arnav and shrugs and moves on. Khushi as she says to Arnav links T&S so much to her mother, someone she loves that she wants to make something of it. For Arnav too AR is much more about his mother than father. And he does love his mother, and i think that is why he will eventually come through for AR

Love the attention you pay to side characters. In this chapter you gave Faisal Bhai an important role. I feel Faisal Bhai's wisdom is some day going to help Khushi - love someone who sees the best version of you. Good advice 😊

Some of your characters are lying low - Renu Bhabhi, Payal, Aman, Anand Raizada, and it makes me very suspicious. I feel none of them are upto any good. I am more concerned about what they are upto than about Mihir Gupta. Unless Mihir Gupta is Shyam Gupta. If that happens, shit will hit the fan.

I have a feeling that Khushi will agree to marry Abhimanyu. And I imagine he is a sweet guy and there is nothing sinister about him. Rather I hope he isn't

Khushi going back to Alchemy - nice. Have to wonder if someone is behind this though? Poonam Raizada perhaps? I know I am being annoyingly hopeful about resolving everything, but it would be nice if Mrs P gets a nice redemption arc by the end of this.