ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Wonderfully written...

Totally in love with it...

The time they spent with nature having seen themselves in New light was just too wonderful...

Poor arnav had been missing out on sooo many things in his life all along...

He just totally deserves what ever he is getting now...

And I hope arnav doesn't drown in guilt or remorse for what khushi is now and Wat she has become...

It's purely her choice n her will to love him n try to be like him...

I just hope wen khushi further tells him all about aman payal and all he won't just drown in any sort of guilt that he ruins someone's life... Hope he sees himself as how khushi payal n aman sees him...

N dear plz do send me pm's for future updates..

I am a very regular reader n regularly comment...

N don't shift to Twitter coz it would be very very diff for me to catch up with the story on time coz I'm not on Twitter..

Hope u consider my request.

Thanks for the pm.

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

My God the dialogues you speak through your characters..its out of the world...

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

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Fantastic writing candy:) Finally things getting clearer in front of arnav as khushi told him about her love for him..!! Infact her level of admiration for arnav made my heart flutter :) she respects him or we can say admire in a way that she adopts his likes n dislikes at mere age of 14..! That was really some thing .. !! Its her pure love for arnav but i have an inkling that arnav will take it in wrong sense that may be like that khushi spend all her life till age according to him.. Infact she blends herself as per his choices so maybe he feels bad that she did it for him, not lived her life by her choice.!! I am not sure about it.. But i feel so..:/ the beauty of that place is magnificantly charming .. Love those pictures, actualy it bewitched me so badly..lol ..!! But the whole focus of your update was our cute sweet yet strong khushi's undying love for her arnav 😳

Lovely update yaar..:) sorry for not giving a long comment as i always like to write more n more about your update but my work load didnt give me much time:)

P.S. missing your replies candy..!! Thanks for informing about your pm notification:) m not on twitter but i have followed your page on facebook so if you cant pm then plz notify on Facebook but only if its ok for you..!! :) thanks for giving such a nice chapter :)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Fantabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

finally...finally the much awaited session started...am waiting...waiting for arnav's reaction after the whole truth is out...and please an earnest request...no...simply no hindrance this time...let the whole thing come in broad daylight in front of arnav now...n indeed arnav is lucky to get such madening lover

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

CHAPTER 22

Loved the update beautifully written loved the confession so emotional when Arnav had steel him self thinking khushi would want some one better some who is not full or broken like he is loved how she realized what he was thinking and decided to knock hi on his butt with her confession loved her plans for both of them loved how she told him how much and how long she loved him hope whatever she is hiding will not tear them apart awesome update beautifully written the emotion were heart felt thank for the pm.sorry had written a longer comment but it go deleted .

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

That was beautiful dear...Very lively...Lovely...so wonderful it was to read...
Now he knows her... She is like a replica fo Arnav...She has made herself like him...such is her love for him... superbly written buddy...

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Awesome , superb update . For a selfless person like arnav , what khushi has done for him , how she moulded herself for him is something very big.

I hope arnav will not drown in guilt fir the same.

Though khushi has lived her life acc to arnav's choices, bt she has done it out of her love for him n ultimately that has lead her to be a successful doctor n such a nice person with a heart of gold n innocence of a baby. 😊

Guilt should not be part of something , done out of pure n unconditional love .

Loved reading the update.

Pls update the next one soon :)

Love & hugs 🤗

Saakhi

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Does it matter that you can not touch love see it only feel it it say great men have fallen in love but never had they said it was the love that gave them the strength to rise in love loved the update love how Khushi was dancing to her turning him on loved his reaction and then the talk loved how Khushi told him what she felt and how she lived molding her self to be his shadow in everything he was loved their conversation loved when she asked her "What have you done for yourself, Khushi? One thing. Tell me one thing you did because of you wanted to."

And her reply was like a devote to her lord "I've loved you."

Amazing update beautifully written thanks for the pm and an amazing story.