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Posted: 10 years ago
At first it was a strange thing to explain on why I started whistling, clapping and shouting (not insanely out loud though) at the end of this chapter. Then I remembered my movie watching experiences in India where everyone would whistle, clap and shout out loud as soon as the title of the movie displayed on the screen.

Connecting the dots, I am just realizing that this chapter felt like that special moment when the update of "Revelaed" flashed on my screen. Yes, there was so much revealed that things started to fall in line and made me see the perspectives. Ma, Alisha, work, weekend trip to New York - felt a bit "revealtoxicated" 😊.

The revelations were more than enough for a five star rating on this chapter. But, there is something that you have done or added to this chapter that made it really unique, or to be exact, more lifelike. Of the many chapters you wrote and we loved, this one felt like the one where you have taken the extra time and effort to make it perfect for us. Needless to say, after reading through all those hugs and embraces with moist eyes, this hugs for you, but will a "big smile that reaches my eyes"😃.

Aman and Lavanya - they not only lighten the mood but also brighten the smiles. It is not only that they are there for Arshi but it feels like they know exactly when and how long to be there. The rapport they share is just amazing. All I will say is, it becomes a lot easier to deal with pain when good times and good friends are around.

As for Arshi, there is no doubt that the half full, half empty outlook is destroying their marriage. The day they both are happy for at least having a glass to drink from and the day they realize that they are the ones responsible for pouring in it and drinking from it, I guess that would be the day of realization. I know it's a bit heavy and it reads like I have downed a couple of half full, half empty glasses of wine😊. But, what to do, I am in "reveal" mode today😉.

To make the comment short, I will reserve my Ma, Alisha, New York comments for another day. For my final Arshi message - a bit of trust, a bit of faith, a few awesome friends is all you need to get through hell too. There you go, my last glass of wine, I promise.

As usual, waiting for my anxiety to be relieved through "Revealed".
Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
A real conversation always contains an invitation. You are inviting another person to reveal herself or himself to you, to tell you who they are or what they want.

- David Whyte


Ciao bella, Grazie for the wonderful update!!!

And also grazie for the fact that Khushi did not leave the party without anyone noticing her.

The friendship these four share is so natural and deep that its fun to read about their friendship.

The reasons for Arshi's marriage to reach this stage is becoming more clearer with each update.

My hubby always says that keeping issues buried within oneself in marriages is not good. Over the time the pressure builds so much that even a small issue explodes like a volcano.

How true it is. Looking at the stage their marriage has reached today, I can see that even small issues have multiplied exponentially to such an extent that Khushi feels their marriage has reached a no return point. She is feeling that the gap between them has widened so much that bridging the gap seems like an impossible task for them.

Atleast till now Arnav seems to be at fault more than her. I agree that losing a parent particularly when you are so close to them is painful. But that did not warrant him to withdraw himself to the extent that he did not even allow his wife whom he loves so much break the shell he had created around himself.

And work pressures every career oriented person does face one time or the other in their lives. But for that neglecting family in the name of work is bad, actually very bad.

I had read sometime back that some very successful people have had very bad married lives including someone like Einstein. I guess in the process of making something great out of their lives, family life took a second priority which lead to their failed marriages.

It takes a lot of hard work, intelligence and determination to balance professional and personal lives, which apparently Arnav lacked here.

And lastly Alisha!!! Knowing that Alisha has romantic interest in him, why did Arnav not distance himself from her? I think tolerating her and her advances might have sent wrong signals to her and it must have encouraged her to pursue him.

And now it has reached a stage where she is even challenging his own wife about their married life.

Arnav has a lot of work cut out for him if he wants to save his marriage. I am still waiting to know what was Khushi's role in the distance which has been created between them.

Finally Alisha. What a bitch she is to lust after a married man!!! And from the looks of it, she is evil too. 😡

My heart goes out for this couple who are hurting so much and instead of healing each other, they are somewhere hurting each other more with or without their knowledge.

A song I want to dedicate to my beloved couple:


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EvGug992o4g[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res..Thank god I made it on front page :-)

Bellissima Jigs.. you killed me with some Italian words and a daring Kushi...love you both..this is the Kushi I am looking forward to..who will fight for her love..Alisha is such a bitch.. Arnav, talk to your Kushi..

I will come back with more..muahhh Jigs..
Edited by sman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres

Loved it! It's good to know arnav felt her presence.

Loved the friendship between the four friends.

Loved La's response there is only arnav and khushi.

Arnav will not be happy without his happiness (Khushi)

I hate Alisha...she is intentionally coming between the two. Taking advantage. Good for khushi for fighting back.

Hope Arnav comes to know.
Edited by maina95131 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Jigs,

Bello😉 update. I am in love with both Arnav-Kushi and Aman-Lavanya .You are spinning your magic wand with just few characters and enticing the whole IF crowd 👏👏


I like the way you are portraying the flaws of Arnav - Kushi characters with out prejudice. They both seem to be right and wrong just like any normal people.


Arnav & Kushi may lack communication but they have profound trust in each other and I think this aspect will help them fight all battles and stand together till the end.

Alisha is such a bi*** and have the guts to challenge Kushi 😡😡. I am waiting for Arnav to talk to Kushi about his New York venture before Alisha creates more misunderstandings to break their fragile relationship. Waiting for more of Kushi's POV.




Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear! Quite emotional too !! loved the way arnav waits for khushi..! That really painful how khushi shares her pain she is going through but i would like to know all these from arnav's POV...!!

How she lashes out it on lavanya...!! i know that arnav is not wrong... there are some more things to be revealed.. & m eagerly waiting for it to disclose further..!

Khushi takes stands for her husband in front of alisha.. i feels so good to read that.. but Damn that alisha..!! What is she trying to do..? Plzzz dnt create any more misunderstanding between both !! 😭

Lavanya is seriously her bestie... I love you too lavu for this..😊
There should be no place for miscommunication in one's relations and that what is exactly happening here..!!
M in love with this story already... Ur such a fab writer.. Thanks for the pm 😳
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res...
Will take some time(days) to get back and comment. 😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hot ben is too cold Jigs 😆 Its mid April and I am still not wearing my spring jacket but then these are the small sacrifices we make if i have to enjoy Rockies all year around.
Thanks for acknowledging my scribbling🤗.

and another hug for the Khushi-Allisha convo🤗. I felt like whistling reading it😆. Jealousy does bring the best out of the spouse isn't it and I am glad that Khushi for once proudly conveyed that he is HER HUSBAND in no nonsense term👏.

Oh Arnav and his yearning with change of his mood hearing she will be there

Today Khushi earned brownie point from me for her behavior. Despite all the differences she stayed back; she heard him and had their US moment😃.

And what do i say about the friendship all four share.⭐️ They don't need words to understand each other. Their action speaks louder.👍🏼

Alisha...sigh... Don't we have so many of such species around who are just ready to take advantage and break the beautiful relation people enjoy. In order to go up the ladder i don't know how many Alisha's we encounter in day to day life. Why just Alisha's there are many men as well who does the same to women and its just one of the many hurdles working spouses have to face it. How they face it and handle it decides the fate of their relation. But one thing i am proud about Khushi is despite their lack of conversation I can see her having immense trust in this relation👏 and to me that is something which will definitely work in their favor as Arnav is trying hard to break that barrier called communication😃.


A good marriage is at least 80 percent good luck in finding the right person at the right time. The rest is trust.

Nanette Newman


A very nice update and loved the party and its gossip. I am not much worried about the last part as Arnav is all up to save the relation so he will be more forthright now😛




Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb updates dear😛😛 Poor arshi😭😭😭 I feel like killing alisha😡😡 I hope arnav has some strong reason behind his going 2 NY and I seriously doubt if he is planning to go to NY without discussing the matter with khushi...infact i am 100% sure that alisha is bluffing about it😡I hope arnav does some damage control now 😭 Can't wait 2 read more😊 thanku soo much for the PM😃
Edited by divya_divs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update dear...
Waiting eargerly for next update...
Edited by candyjan - 10 years ago

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