ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD**

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Are you sure dear that you are suffering from writer's block? Because after this first part I don't think so
It was awesome, couldn't stop my tears reading about Khushi's dilemma, poor girl
Pls pls Pls do update soon the next part

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radhvi

@radhvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Welcome back Arooma,

Amazing TS...
But I feel that things aren't they way the appear...
For starters I feel lavanya is deceiving everyone including Arnav, it's as if she is breaking her relationship with Karan just to get back to Arnav. And she is well aware of the fact that Arnav doesn't love Khushi and is taking advantage of the same.

Next is Payal and her indifferent behavior to her in-laws family is because she knows that they can do anything for their convenience without even thinking how it would hurt the person at the other end...

Will be back with more comment

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

hey loved this ts..
so khushi misunderstood some things..but why arnav never so any kind of love filled gesture towards khushi in their married life uptill now...
quite interesting plot...
hope to read next part soon.. plz iss bar jaldi update dena tc 🤗

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radhvi

@radhvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Ok, now another part of my comment... (this is my first comment)

In this whole episode, I feel nobody has given two hoots about Arnav and Khushi's feelings nor have they sought their opinion with regard to their marriage. They based on the past events simply assumed that Arnav and Khushi don't love each other and are living a compromised life and have gone way too far by even emotionally blackmailing Khushi to give up on her marriage so that Lavanya can get what she wants!

Pathetic excuse of human beings both Ratna and Astha are!! I'm not sure if Astha is an accomplice to Lavanya's misdeeds and if she is not, then both Ratna and Astha are in for a shock.

Payal's cryptic hint that Arnav is spending too much time and giving too much attention than necessary to Lavanya clearly states that she is well aware of the double standards Raizadas maintain.

Khushi is certainly innocent as she was unable to get Payal's hint. But she shouldn't allow herself to be influenced by Ratna or Astha or Lavanya's words until Arnav clarifies it to Her. No, what she heard in his office could be just a part of a whole conversation and why do I feel that Lavanya intentionally spoke those words. I mean it can't be just a co-incidence that Khushi always finds Lavanya and Arnav in more than friendly situations.

Arnav on the other hand, clearly has feelings for Khushi. His intention to 'make the moment special them' is clear. But just hope he says it in time to save his marriage and Khushi. Because his actions for caring for Khushi is being misinterpreted as 'responsibility and compromise.' His blind belief on his 'friend's words' is going to cost him a lot.

On the whole Lavanya doesnt give me positive vibes at all...I wouldn't be surprised if she used her mother, her brother who is married to Arnav's sister and Ratna to separate Arnav and Khushi.

But my doubt is in what circumstances did Khushi and Arnav got married?

IS it because Arnav was severely depressed and Raizadas just to ensure their son's happiness got him married to Khushi?

I will wait for the story to unfold though!

PS- I'm missing 'You Are My New Dream' very much dear, I dont comment regularly though, but I really really loved your story and I'm eagerly waiting for it.

Happy Writing!

Stay blessed and take care.

Best

Radhvi :)

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Fabulous update..
It's so emotional and heart touching story..
Please post next part soon..
Thanks for pm

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

heya...i know itss tooo early but i cant resist and had to ask ya...when will u update next part...

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Awesome start
How can Arnav's mother think like that? And astha, she wants lavnya to jump from one relationship to other and ruining everyone's lives?
Oh khushi

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Gayathri

@gayugaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

I am feeling bad for kushi i know arnav loves kushi but his mom didnt did right thing

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

HEY GUYSS ...

wow i never expected to for you guys to like TS ... hehehe ... i was nervous when i posted that what will be your reaction ... i am overwhelemd to see so many comments ...

But a little but disappointed as i have 280+ ppl in my PM list ... so i was expecting to get atleast 200 likes ...

Khair its ok ... the comments made me happy ...

But still i will say specially to Silent Readers that do LIKE if you read ... It hardly takes a second as its just one click.

Ok now coming to questions and quries ... i would love to reply to all your comments ... but then it will somehow spoil the mood of Part - 2 ... so i am just going to give quick answers to few which wont spoil the surprise much.

1) Lavanya is NOT deceiving or evil ... She is the victim here. She is not taking advantage of Arnav. As you guys notice the last part ... She knows Arnav loves Khushi. 😊

2) Yes ... Arnav loves Khushi ... so why haven't he confess to her ... wait for the next part. 😉

3) Khushi knows Arnav loved Lavanya. She knows how his friendship is with Lavanya. She doesn't have any problem with their friendship ... but still being a wife ... she feels little bit jealous ... who won't 😛

4) Payal is NOT negative/evil here ... but she doesn't care for others either.

5) Arnav was NOT forced to marry Khushi ... nor he married her because he was depressed over Lavanya.

6) How Arnav and Khushi marraige happens? ... wait for next part. 😉

7) Ratna and Astha are NOT evil ... but yes Ratna was not happy with Arnav marrying Khushi. You will get to know more in next PART 😉

8) Lavanya DID NOT say I Love you to Arnav on purpose ... its only half of conversation i showed in Part-1 ... more will come in Part 2 😆

I guess thats enough for now ... i have started writing the next part ... but as ppl demands it to be long ... also with job i get less free time ... so it will take time ... Hopefully i will be able to post it on Sunday Night.

TAKE CARE -- AROOMA. 😳

Edited by Bubbles76 - 10 years ago