ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD**

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Beenish

@arhi-raizada

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Loved the ts ... Would wait for your updates

Quote

khwaish

@khwaish_245

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

hey please update next paart...

i read this in morning and since then i am wondering whats going to happen next ...waiting desperatly to read next parts

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Superb TS
Loved it
Plzzz continue soon

Quote

sweetkajol

@sweetkajol

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesome one...
Loved It ...
But plz continue soon...

Quote

sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Very different concept...loved the opening chapter. I don't understand how can Khushi's mother in law can think or say something like this to her. Astha actually wants to see her daughter to settle and wants Khushi to leave Arnav...how pathetic.

Feeling sad for Khushi who is dealing all this by herself and not letting anyone know her sadness or worries.

Arnav is really in love with her as he is able to feel her presence whenever she is near him, but not able to vocal about it. But that is not at all fair on your part Arnav...you need to tell or express your feelings towards your wife. I hope he will understand soon. He is just helping Lavanya as they are bestest friends since their childhood.

Please continue soon.

Edited by sunitikapoor - 10 years ago

Quote

Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Superb start.. Loved it.. Do continue soon

Thanks for pm😊

Quote

mansin129

@mansin129

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wonderful story...eagerly waiting for next update!

Quote

WanieA

@WanieA

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

as I was reading...my heart beat went haywire...too many emotions into a start..but I shouldnt expect less then this from u...mind blowing start...

Quote

Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Welcome back arooma🤗...after long time...missing ur writing damn much buddy...

another emotional roller coaster ride of arshi...beautifully written👏👏

arooma ye kya ate he rula diya tumne...bt mindblowing start yaar...beautifully written..heartwrenching yet hearttouching yaar...

dnt knw where to start..what to start with...am really now out of word..bahut kuch kehena hai bt dnt knw bolti baand hogaee hai

ok so arnav loved lav bfore his marriage to khushi..jst bcoz lav choose karan instead of him he forced to marry khushi..so thier marriage was out of love bt more of compromise...

felt really bad for lav to knew the man who she love most didnt even trust her...trust that bitch pallavi..i dnt understand why some bitch get pleasure in breaking other's house...😡😡

Love comes with trust right.den shadi k baad why trust ki naya doob he jati hai ese..i think most of the love marriages r nt successful jst bcoz of trust issue...dat karan spineless creature...dnt even able to protect her own baby nd wife...😡😡

Nd arnav..although he dnt love khushi..bt cant he jst spend more tym with her wife...i knw lav was his bestfrnd..bt after marriage priority got changed right??..chahe kitne v acche dst ho...i knw arnav said he gonna do his best to make this marriage work bt kya keh dene se sab hojata hai??u hav to work for it..although its hurt khushi to see her husband cares more for another woman more than her..bt still she isnt complaining abt it..if it was other woman like dat witch payal then they already got separated from eachother now..bt bcoz she loves arnav unconditionally after knwing dat may b his hubby gonna never loves her like she do still she woring on thier marriage..bt wht she got..her mother in law nd lav mom wanted her to leave arnav..

i mean seriously...janha tak mujhe pata hai maa ko apne bcche k dil ki baat bina bole pata chal jata hai right..bt ye dono maa k kis category me ate hain..lav's mom jst bcoz her daughter didnt get happiness from her love see want to break the house of another one..is it right on her part..kya ese apni bete ki khusiyan dhund rahi dusri ki sapne thod k..kya usski beti khuss rahegi..?? Why dnt jst thinks once all this..itna selfish koi kese hosakta hai

nd arnav's mom..did she really knw where her son's happiness is..if she really do then he can able to see that her son is falling for khushi...

dnt knew how they jst told khushi to leave arnav jst like dat...is marriage asome kind of joke for them?? I think it is for them..or else dey never gonna suggest like this to khushi..

apne bachon ko bhale k liye itna v andhe na hojao ki anjane me ussi bachon ki khusiyan he cheen lo

dnt knw wht to say abt khushi..bas pati ka pyaar aur saath he chaha tha na..bt mila kya pati ko chod dene ka parwana..itna asan hai kya..koi khilona hai kya bas bola chod k jao..didnt once they think wht that poor soul is going through..didnt they think abt thier children when they married khushi to arnav..

jst bcoz now lav is free toh arnav ko chod dena chahiye khushi ko..pata nahi ye kese soch hai inlogon ki..maa hoke j dusre bacchi ka dukh v ni dekha jata jst bcz she was nt thier own..she also have feelings...nahi hai kya...takleef usse v hogi..bt who cares..khud ki aulad khuss rehna chahiye baki jaye bhad me...pata nahi unka dil kese bola khushi ko ese bolne ko😡

hope they realised thier mistake soon..nd arnav if loves her confess this to her nd give more priority her wife than anyone no matter what..

looking forward for nxt

continue soonish yaar

Edited by ArshiHolic_Sush - 10 years ago