Wow...this is something really awesome. I got really interested only when I actually read the *COMPLETED* sign in the title. I'm not really in a mood to follow the on-going one's. Completed one's just give me a little peace in between my studies. And your story sure did. True, it took a few moments more than actual FS would take but yet refreshing. 👍🏼
Your story made me feel every emotion that you portrayed with the Arnav and Khushi. Normally I get really connected to Arnav and Khushi in any of the stories mostly. And here too it happened. I felt connected to Arnav and Khushi both. 😃
First it was Arnav I've been angry about. Lavanya was actually clueless and was passing through a hard time so I didn't really held her responsible. But then I kind of understood Arnav's position. He didn't have any idea about Khushi's insecurity and he really couldn't mend things when he doesn't even know that there is actually something wrong happening.
But then till last I was angry with only Ratna and Astha. Ratna finally regretted her decisions and apologized at the last. But I really have missed Astha's redemption. She was so blinded in her anger of the happenings not going in her way that she had let that Karan fella talk with Lavanya who didn't even wanted to talk with him. I really was so eager to read about her realizing her mistakes. But that never happened. She was the one behind all this, the one to actually sow the seed of doubt in Ratna's mind in the first place.😡 She was the real culprit of all but her realization and redemption never happened. I wish you would've written at least a bit about her. 😳
And I don't agree with you. Khushi wasn't anything to blame. Khushi never misunderstood him to cheat on her. But she definitely thought that he may surpassing his actual feelings for Lavanya because of her. And what and all she experienced when she saw Arnav and Lavanya spending time or feeling like an outsider when Anjali, Rahul, Arnav and Lavnya were talking she would've by default thought that Arnav was still in love with her as he already let her know his feelings.😭 He did amend his statement saying he no longer had feelings for Lav, but at the same time not in the right way. But yes, fate did played a little game here. First it was Arnav who was hesitating to tell his feelings then when he finally did find the courage they were faced Lavanya's problem. Things hadn't really been in their favour to say the least. As far as I see Khushi isn't the one to be blamed. She was okay with what was happening though she was doubting but then Ratna and Astha did the thing of sowing a see of doubt in her mind. You can't really help but feel the doubt when you've been ignoring the same from sometime. It feels real when someone voices out your fears. It happened the same with Khushi. 🤔
Okay I blabbered a lot till now. I liked the way you ended it. And also Arnav's understanding. He did analyse the situation even when he was in anger. He said right, Actions speak louder than words. But also being vocal is necessary too at times. 😊
I totally loved reading this story. Thanks so much for writing this one. And I'm happy I stumbled upon this FS and was able to read it. You did an awesome job! 👏
- Lucky 😊
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