ArShi FS: Never Let Me Go - Last Part (Pg-113) **COMPLETETD**

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#721

i just love to read your stories...
something... very close to heart...
so another beautiful story... i read this 2 times...

relationship base on trust and heart

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#722

Dont wait and make time for your loved ones...
use any opportunity to show them...

waiting going to cost you more...

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Awesome FS. .

Loves how Arnav and Khushi understand each other and though khushi was insecure but she never doubted him.. Their relationship started with uncertainty but with respect, honesty, love and trust they become inseparable. . Love them..

Felt sorry for La but she is better off with Karan.. And also she got Aman.. 😉... Loved it..

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#724

Rerad the story again Si

Wow What a lovely story

Uff What a lovely jodi

And the last part with a happy family including their baby and Arnav teasing about the champ was a cherry on the top

Kya likha hai aapne Di

This story is truly the best

Actually all your stories are good

And In this I liked the story very much

This Khsuhi is just so sweet

She is everything.

Naughty as well as calm, cute,traditional,outgoing,studious,respectful everything

And this Arnav is also too Good

I like the way how he understood tha tKhsuhi is the one for him

I really like the Drama where Arhi first have to go through the confusion and MU as khushi thought Arnav might love Lav. It was ok as it made their bond stronger

And you settled Lav with Aman too. She also got a nice guy

Overall an absolutely amazing story

Will really miss this

And if time permits Do write a story like this again where Arhi have such a strong bond though they didn't express

With villain types like Sheetal or someone is also ok

but don't want Khushi to be village types . She must be like this equivlent to Arnav and very sweet

Hahahah Sorry Di ek story khatam kiya aur mein abhi se expectations kehne lagi

hehheh If possible give us another wonderful story like this Di

Ya I know YRMND takes precedence just booked now itself😆

And once again Thanks for this beautiful story

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#725

Very beautiful story...

Enjoyed reading it...

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Beautiful story... very well written!
Loved it.

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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#727

wow finally a beautiful ending with a cute touch as always loved it... but gng 2 miss it...hope u cm up with a nice story like tis next time and i m really very very sorry yaar as my school has started...and it is the new year tere r lot of stuff climbed on my back yaar dnt get the time plz believe it wen 2 day i opened my inbox i got more tan 15 messages and i m reading each 1 of it now 1ly...

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#728

Awesome ending...wonderful story...thanks for the PM

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#729

Such a lovely story... beautifully written dear... loved it sooo much...

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#730

so they live happily ever after..gonna mis this one.. it was lovely story its true simplicity is the best.. the story was simply beautiful without much drama, fights nd all.. loved tht everyone is happy with their loved ones.. like arshi.. payal nd akash now undrstndng each other nd giving chance to their love..for wht u did with karan im thnkng u because u showed lavnya strng as a woman who didnt forgive tht jerk nd she gave chance to aman's true love she deserves this..last bt nt the least i love aaradhya singh raizada she made their little world cmplt with her presence.. loved the end thnk u dear it was great one..