Mahabharat In Modern Days _By Frankie123_

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi
thnxx 4 the pm dear!!! continue soon!!!

ur welcome !😳 Woh toh mera faarz tah ... 😉 Thanks for the comment😃

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

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Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
wwooiieeww i like this...

i'm having a sort of Ramleela feeling.. shoting... guns.. wwooiieeww... iof normal characters are like this.. what will be of draupadi the fire queen... uff!!

karn and vrushali is adorable.
yudi n devika is sweet...
bheem n his gf... ha ha ha.. the choco incidednt is cute,..

waiting for the next update.. update fast!!

thanks for the comment I'll update soon as I can haha I sort of tried to make it like ramleela 😳

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

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Originally posted by: sania_58
nice update, very well written, Loved it. waiting for the next part.

thx for the comment and I will update soon 😳

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Shristi

@frankie123

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Bella02pie
Nice chapter Frankie😃
it is a big relief to see karna with his brothers😊
who is going to kidnap draupadi?
waiting for next part eagerly😊

thx haha same here u will know fast who is going to kidnap draupadi? Hehe😳

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Srry for late comment ws a bit caught up
Really nice update⭐️ so mystery mystery whs gonna kidnap Drau😕
Update soon nd I 4got to Buddy u still u PMed me Thankyu😳
Buddying u right way😛😃

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Interesting start! Those men were def. the epitome of cowardliness to have shot a harmless boy!! Anyways waiting for the ParAv convo.!

thank u 😊

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
Srry for late comment ws a bit caught up
Really nice update⭐️ so mystery mystery whs gonna kidnap Drau😕
Update soon nd I 4got to Buddy u still u PMed me Thankyu😳
Buddying u right way😛😃

thank u so much and yup will surely accept . Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68
wow nyc chapter frankie 👏
the bro sis part was very emotional 😔 heartless people...how can they shoot a young boy 😡
loved the bonding between brothers 😳
yudi n devika's part was very cute
bheem got a gf 😉
kanha's frnd is arjun ryt? 😊
omg drau is going to be kidnapped
continue soon dear n thanks 4 the pm ⭐️

Thank u so much . Yes Arjun friend is Kanha 😊

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
update soon next prt
really loved ur story nd plzzz pm me i had send u buddy request.

Thank u and will surely update and pm u 😊

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Such a beautiful and suspense chapter ! Haha toh apne Humare style Sikh liya hai , suspense create karne ka na 😆

Thank u so much Sam and yes all I learnt it from u na 😊

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Shristi

@frankie123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM.
It was Very Interesting Part.😊
The Brother and Sister was so nice but Kauravs killed that Boy😭,how disgusting people they were,Just Hates them.😡
Yudhistra and Devika Part was so Cute.😳
Draupati will kidnap,Who will Help her?
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.
PriyaCherry.

Thank u so much . And someone will surely help her 😊

Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48
ooo! Nice story yar!!!
So they all have a gf or a bf but Arjun and Drau😉😳
oops..there's also Subhi😕😛
NO! DRAU IS GOING TO GET KIDNAPPED!😭😭
Yudi and Devika part was so cute😊
How can the Kauravas kill the boy at the begginging?! They're so evil😡
Thanks for the PM⭐️⭐️
Please update fast...we are all waiting here!!!!!!😆

Thank u 😊 yup there is Subhadra , Draupadi and Arjun 😊

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Great chapter!
The shooting of the little child was really sad! How could someone be so cruel!😡
Glad Karna is with the Pandavas this time😃
That Devika Yudhishtir part was really cute!😳
Omgg! Whose planning to kidnap Drau? *bites nails*
Update soon!😊

Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Amazing 1st chapter Shristi 👏

Opening was shocking... poor boy got shot all becoz he was bringing a mango for his sister 😭... but this certainly explains how grim the tension betwn the two sides are 😳
Liked the teasing parts when Kunti teases Vru & the later blushes😳
Vru kicks Karn😆
Poor Yudi ... did not understand why Devika speaks shyly to him... come one Karn apne bhai ko tuition dena shuru karo 😉 😆
& Bheem... girl friend ko chocolate mana kya kar diya toh khud hi kha liya 🤣
God...now who ordered to kidnap Krishnaa...must be shakuni😡

Wonderful start dear 😛
Continue soon

Thank u so much 😊

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Very nice story line...
You grabbed my attention with the shocking start😆
And now suspense in the end ... good job!

Thank u 😊

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Shristi

@frankie123

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48
wheres the update????

wt update ???

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ramanbhullar

@ramanbhullar

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Hi. Franki123_ ..i was a silent reader in this forum but your ff forced me to write... please do the justice with the characters which is not done in original one...

Waiting for next update...👏😉